1/18/2011 c6 Protodermis Kartorak
Damn... you can really make your villans evil. Deanna and Tabitha murdered 2 people in cold blood and forcefully transfered Dee into another body.Then they give Dee's new body a poison which only they have the hourly cure to, basically making Dee their slave!

8/14/2010 c17 Jenga-Tree
I got to the last chapter and i felt like crying ... YOU CANT LEAVE IT THERE IT IS TORTURE! TORTURE I TELL YOU! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEAS update soon

6/1/2010 c17 6Paul Midday
I must say this has been my favorite of the Fanfics for Avatar as of late, though I am saddened to see it hasn't updated in a while. I would however like to add my voice in encouraging you to continue with the story so we may find out what will happen to the ILF, RDA and Na'vi triangle. You have some interesting characters, and I must say your humor is light hearted and a welcome addition to the world.

I also appreciate your attention to detail, especially with the fact it does take five years to get to Pandora alone, something a lot of people miss or leave out. Yours was the first story I favorite'd and for that reason I strongly urge you to continue the tale or love, intrigue, and action! I know I will be one among the many who are waiting for the exciting conclusion!

5/3/2010 c17 13oct
WOW! I'm so impressed with this story! I love the way you got the first person account down perfectly, how you nail the characters, how you throw in laugh out loud humor, loads of intricate detail and yet make it all work perfectly.

Please, please continue this fic. It's one of the best I've read in the Pandora universe and I've read a lot. The cliffhanger that you have left this at is a perfect nail biter. Do put us out of our misery and let us know what happens next.

4/19/2010 c17 Regicold
Oh man. I truly love this fic. It absorbs me into it and makes me forget about the real world, almost like the main characters adventures in her Na'vi body. I do so hope you are planning to continue this fic, it's too good to disappear into obscurity.

3/27/2010 c11 Chrissy1201
Uhuh, someone is really becoming attached to the forests... I foresee some problems arising out of that. Although that's not hard lol

Just forced myself to stop reading and write some of my thoughts down. So, Dee is figuring some sensitive topics out... and Mar'kay is sulking. Or better, was sulking. I can't say it often enough, I love their interactions.

Hu, "schadenfreude" looks weird in the text... so German lol

rofl, I would have stepped on the brambles, too. Mar'kay isn't very gentlemanlike, it isn't nice to make fun of somebody who has some trouble climbing around in trees and the forest *pf* team Dee there!

(but I like the freak matter lol)

Dee stinks? lol mh, do Na'vi sweat?

So, finally Dee is seeing the home tree :) No wonder she is stunned into silence, it must be pretty overwhelming for her.

btw Dee isn't used to phisical contact anymore? I hope Mar'kay is going to help her there. And that doesn't have any kinky undertones, no matter how you want to interprete that ;) It's just sad that someone is so used to the isolation that physical contact makes you uneasy. Dee can learn a lot from the Na'vi then, some small physical contact is always helpful/supporting/can't find the right words.

How well does Mar'kay speak English? That would interest me... Poor Dee, Grace really toned her mood down. Maybe I'm too idealistic there but I think Grace wants her to be prepared for the sharks at the meeting. And she still doesn't really trust her.

""Then I'd take something heavy and hit him on the head repeatedly. " rofl

I was waiting for Tsu'tey to make an appearance... A Man scorned isn't pretty and the triangle story was a bit too short for my liking in the movie. Either you don't start a love triangle at all or you have to properly explain and finish it.

Aw, he's going to protect her?

Did Mar'kay move farther away from his family and his friends? Or do I interpret too much into the look from that woman? Alright, reading further only hardens my suspicion. What's up with Mar'kays situation?

He offered to show her his hammock? lol Guess in that matter there aren't so many differences between the Na'vi and humans lol

Some intereaction with the Na'vi was really good for Dee, I'm already worried about her. She needs as much social contacts as possible, she's way too lonely!

I agree with the older woman and she is right. I'll wonder how soon Mar'kay and Dee will need to realize that.

Fuck, flying on an ikran! I want that, too! Love flying, flying is great and I can't wait for Dee's reaction.

Oh, I nearly forgot that: Review No. 3 for March 27th lol

3/27/2010 c9 Chrissy1201
Review No. 1 for March 27th - just in case fucks up again and sends my reviews to you in another order ;) Anyway, please ignore any insanity in my review, I have the slight suspicion there's still some alcohol left in my blood stream ;)

Ha, scrawny blue ass is awesome - and it is even more awesome they understood it lol Haha, I loved the fruit throwing to scare the dangerous animals away... and as a positive side effect: scare the poor, unsuspecting humans lol who would have guessed the Na'vi would have such a devilish sense of humor?

Not to forget your writing humor, the insane male bonding moment cracked me up lol

OMG, when Dee is disconnected the Na'Vi dress her up? Priceless! The image alone cracked me again :D

We, Jake is back *little happy dance* and he is squirming and embarassed... Somehow I find that cute. Bad Daria, you're reminding me of my Sam Worthingtom crush again! Shame on you!

Neytiri and Dee apparantly have a "insane female bonding" going on :D It's playing out perfectly in my head lol Loved that scene, poor Jake rofl

Want to see more Dee/Ange - Neytiri bonding!

"Only a very scientific exchange that shows the utter dedication of your fellow team members to our joint research!" - Grace is cool! No other words for that.

"Haven't you heard it yet? Our dear Ange here is about to be nominated for Pandora Pin Up Girl of the Month!" - Rofl. I nearly died laughing lol Loved the banter between these three, it was awesome!

Uups, Dee slipped up... I bet Jake is either suspecting something now or he is going to suspect something in the near future.

"Die Spannung steigt..." (I'm sorry, but all translations I or LEO could come up with didn't sound right ;) )