for Hell Bent On Revenge1/10/2011 c1 
13Sparrow Kess
It's not bad. Though Bella sounds like she's from the bad areas of a city. So just check some grammer. And all. Its not bad, just check over some things! :) And she would have to be slightly upset with Edward dying. You need more back ground information!
13Sparrow KessIt's not bad. Though Bella sounds like she's from the bad areas of a city. So just check some grammer. And all. Its not bad, just check over some things! :) And she would have to be slightly upset with Edward dying. You need more back ground information!
1/7/2011 c1 14skysayzrawr
This is the entire culmination of all things epic.
Pretty much, this story is awesome. I love your writing style! Not too rushed, good grammar... love it! You are now on my author's alerts, missy. Can't wait for more Bella/Alec love! Or Bella/Jasper. Or Bella/Emmett. Pretty much, Bella/any male from the universe who isn't Edward big-freaking-deal Cullen.
Five stars for the story! :D
14skysayzrawrThis is the entire culmination of all things epic.
Pretty much, this story is awesome. I love your writing style! Not too rushed, good grammar... love it! You are now on my author's alerts, missy. Can't wait for more Bella/Alec love! Or Bella/Jasper. Or Bella/Emmett. Pretty much, Bella/any male from the universe who isn't Edward big-freaking-deal Cullen.
Five stars for the story! :D
3/27/2010 c1 1Crazy Queen Of Darkness
dude like seriously aro would'mt jump to the conclusion. remember carlisle is aro freind he wouldnt kill his kid. also why the hell does the volturi care . thell just change her and leave it be.
1Crazy Queen Of Darknessdude like seriously aro would'mt jump to the conclusion. remember carlisle is aro freind he wouldnt kill his kid. also why the hell does the volturi care . thell just change her and leave it be.
1/29/2010 c1 7Sky Diamonds06
3rd Reviewer! Sorry I'm not the first:)
I had school to got to. URGH. Stupid school. Anyway, a job well done! I think you should thank your Beta for beta-ing this story!
I love it!
-Mathilda.
7Sky Diamonds063rd Reviewer! Sorry I'm not the first:)
I had school to got to. URGH. Stupid school. Anyway, a job well done! I think you should thank your Beta for beta-ing this story!
I love it!
-Mathilda.
1/29/2010 c1 9Little Miss Umbreon
*HUFF HUFF* did i get here on time? LET ME PLEASE B THE FIRST REVIEWER! AH!
Anyway, awesome story (i know, coz i beta-d it:D)
x
LMU
9Little Miss Umbreon*HUFF HUFF* did i get here on time? LET ME PLEASE B THE FIRST REVIEWER! AH!
Anyway, awesome story (i know, coz i beta-d it:D)
x
LMU
1/29/2010 c1 Duckman
Major ooc...just, wow...
Major ooc...just, wow...