for tenshiraman6/17/2012 c5 
1Foxluna
wow i loved reading all the chapters so far. but the very first was sad. i loved this one alot with Legolas, and the two with Kagome and Yuu. loved those two. and it was funny how she knocked him out with a tranquilizer dart hahaha.
this chapter i thought was very sweet and i was completely taken with it. absolutely loved it!
well let me know if u decide to post any more up one-shots.
laters,
Fox
1Foxlunawow i loved reading all the chapters so far. but the very first was sad. i loved this one alot with Legolas, and the two with Kagome and Yuu. loved those two. and it was funny how she knocked him out with a tranquilizer dart hahaha.
this chapter i thought was very sweet and i was completely taken with it. absolutely loved it!
well let me know if u decide to post any more up one-shots.
laters,
Fox
8/23/2011 c5 Nighttime Mystery
i luv this some are sweet and some are spicy i cant wait to read more!
i luv this some are sweet and some are spicy i cant wait to read more!
2/18/2010 c2 TriforceandSheikahArts
Very explicit just like you warned, but none the less very good and very good to read, just at times I got confused since you didn't have any quotation " " marks around the dialogue. So at times it got kind of confusing to tell whether or not it was speech or part of the text, but then other that, good job, and I'm off to read more.
Very explicit just like you warned, but none the less very good and very good to read, just at times I got confused since you didn't have any quotation " " marks around the dialogue. So at times it got kind of confusing to tell whether or not it was speech or part of the text, but then other that, good job, and I'm off to read more.
2/18/2010 c1 TriforceandSheikahArts
So beautiful, so cute and such a great little one-shot, there were a few little spelling mistakes and some little grammar mistakes, but other then that just pure adorable, I loved it.
So beautiful, so cute and such a great little one-shot, there were a few little spelling mistakes and some little grammar mistakes, but other then that just pure adorable, I loved it.
2/3/2010 c4 q u i n i u
These are really good, but it would make it a little easier to read if you put " " around the dialog.
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q u i n i u
These are really good, but it would make it a little easier to read if you put " " around the dialog.
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q u i n i u
2/2/2010 c2 Victoria
Chapter 2 and 4 is the same.
Chapter 2 and 4 is the same.