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6Atomic Lilith
It might just because I have a huge soft spot for cats, but I really enjoyed this! It was really cute and everyone was in character.
6Atomic LilithIt might just because I have a huge soft spot for cats, but I really enjoyed this! It was really cute and everyone was in character.
6/21/2011 c1 50Yuki Minamoto
A couple of grammar mistakes, but it's overall, a very cute one-shot! XD
~Yuki~
50Yuki MinamotoA couple of grammar mistakes, but it's overall, a very cute one-shot! XD
~Yuki~
4/19/2010 c1 51Mew Aqua Spirit
Ah, I liked this. It was very well-written and in-character, and cute!
51Mew Aqua SpiritAh, I liked this. It was very well-written and in-character, and cute!
4/14/2010 c1 2Yuna Dragonheart
aww so cute XD
wow, this feels straight out of the game :O
i love how they actually are in character, and the writing is easy going and fresh, it is really easy to get lost in it (even if its short)
i can´t wait to read the long shot you have planned :D
Atte:
Yuna Dragonheart
2Yuna Dragonheartaww so cute XD
wow, this feels straight out of the game :O
i love how they actually are in character, and the writing is easy going and fresh, it is really easy to get lost in it (even if its short)
i can´t wait to read the long shot you have planned :D
Atte:
Yuna Dragonheart
4/8/2010 c1 5Vampuric Spider
That was so cute, also it was within the vain of the characters really well, and I could see that happening.
5Vampuric SpiderThat was so cute, also it was within the vain of the characters really well, and I could see that happening.
3/17/2010 c1 xxMr Brownstone
Well I've just finnished the game and have rushed over here to see how many fics there were for the game and... there isn't much is there? Anyways, back to the actual review. I thought the characters were... well in character, which is good. Very good actually, and its kinda sweet albeit not what I expected from the title (although it did make me augh a bit so thanks for that).
Well I've just finnished the game and have rushed over here to see how many fics there were for the game and... there isn't much is there? Anyways, back to the actual review. I thought the characters were... well in character, which is good. Very good actually, and its kinda sweet albeit not what I expected from the title (although it did make me augh a bit so thanks for that).
3/7/2010 c1 10AimzNemesis
:) I like this. There are a few small grammatical and spelling errors here and there, but nothing too jarring.
Anyway, as I said, I like this - it's endearing and funny at the same time. *loves the idea of Bayonetta and Luka looking after a kitten*
10AimzNemesis:) I like this. There are a few small grammatical and spelling errors here and there, but nothing too jarring.
Anyway, as I said, I like this - it's endearing and funny at the same time. *loves the idea of Bayonetta and Luka looking after a kitten*
2/19/2010 c1 37Nirianne
Kitty. You caught me with 'kitty'. 8D I adored the last lines of the story; very, very sweet!
37NirianneKitty. You caught me with 'kitty'. 8D I adored the last lines of the story; very, very sweet!
2/11/2010 c1 ebil-kitty
Another lovely read ^^
I always liked the scenes in the game with Bayonetta teasing Luka every now and then...besides the epic battle scenes of course ^^ 3
On another note, the conversation she had with the kitten was endearing. The moment it jumped onto Bayonetta's ribbon was the moment I thought I wished I could bring it home with me X3
All the best to your next Bayonetta fics and any other fics you plan to write as well as your quest for a beta-reader ;)
Another lovely read ^^
I always liked the scenes in the game with Bayonetta teasing Luka every now and then...besides the epic battle scenes of course ^^ 3
On another note, the conversation she had with the kitten was endearing. The moment it jumped onto Bayonetta's ribbon was the moment I thought I wished I could bring it home with me X3
All the best to your next Bayonetta fics and any other fics you plan to write as well as your quest for a beta-reader ;)
2/11/2010 c1 24Soldier's Shadow
I thought this was pretty good. I liked Bay's talk with the cat and the ending with Luka!
Characterizations were perfect :)
Boss
24Soldier's ShadowI thought this was pretty good. I liked Bay's talk with the cat and the ending with Luka!
Characterizations were perfect :)
Boss
2/10/2010 c1 2NoobishLizard
Oh shoot, I hit refresh and this story popped up woot! And d'aw that last line was great, you really write the characters well. Keep it up! :)
2NoobishLizardOh shoot, I hit refresh and this story popped up woot! And d'aw that last line was great, you really write the characters well. Keep it up! :)