for Past's Player2h ago c26 
3DGfleetfox
It's hard to swallow that someone could be so diabolical (not sure if that's the best word, and it's certainly not the only). Will he ever reach a point where Harry actually gets to him in a serious way? Just because Tom's brilliant doesn't mean he hasn't anything else to learn.
3DGfleetfoxIt's hard to swallow that someone could be so diabolical (not sure if that's the best word, and it's certainly not the only). Will he ever reach a point where Harry actually gets to him in a serious way? Just because Tom's brilliant doesn't mean he hasn't anything else to learn.
5h ago c9 DGfleetfox
You know what's sorta been bugging me, just a tad? I thought Alphard Black was the one who left Sirius Black money after he was disowned, as he himself was disowned from the Black family, leading me to believe that he wasn't a crazed Pureblood fanatic like most of them were. If that's true, and Alphard was Sirius' favorite relative, then I can't see how he could be a Death Eater. I think perhaps another Black would've been a more believable choice, I don't associate Alphard with Voldemort at all.
You know what's sorta been bugging me, just a tad? I thought Alphard Black was the one who left Sirius Black money after he was disowned, as he himself was disowned from the Black family, leading me to believe that he wasn't a crazed Pureblood fanatic like most of them were. If that's true, and Alphard was Sirius' favorite relative, then I can't see how he could be a Death Eater. I think perhaps another Black would've been a more believable choice, I don't associate Alphard with Voldemort at all.
6h ago c5 DGfleetfox
Reading Tom's POVs are equally entertaining in a different way, Tom has a certain quality about him that you capture well.
Reading Tom's POVs are equally entertaining in a different way, Tom has a certain quality about him that you capture well.
7h ago c3 DGfleetfox
Harry's POV kills me, lol, seriously. It is so funny to see how he's struggling with himself when he's around Riddle. Terrible situation (makes for good laughs though).
Harry's POV kills me, lol, seriously. It is so funny to see how he's struggling with himself when he's around Riddle. Terrible situation (makes for good laughs though).
8h ago c1 DGfleetfox
I'm on a bit of a time travel HP fanfic roll right now, let me just say I'm looking forward to reading. Your summary for this amused me greatly, lol. (yes a genuine chuckle, not just for show) - especially at the 'Harry hated his life' bit - you can just sense the exasperation in that.
I'm on a bit of a time travel HP fanfic roll right now, let me just say I'm looking forward to reading. Your summary for this amused me greatly, lol. (yes a genuine chuckle, not just for show) - especially at the 'Harry hated his life' bit - you can just sense the exasperation in that.
14h ago c27 1d1x1lady
Fascinating story. You're a really impressive writer and have created a really interesting cat and mouse game.
1d1x1ladyFascinating story. You're a really impressive writer and have created a really interesting cat and mouse game.
21h ago c27 Sarekkandarikulover
Hey, so, I hope you don't destroy this account. I would love to read more of this story and I fear I won't be able to find it if you move. BUt I don't expect updates at any regular intervals because I know I am terrible at that. You are a fabulous author and I haven't found fault in any of your chapters yet, except for the random grammar error but we all make those. Your characterization is top notch and you are fabulous. I love your stories so don't get down on yourself, take a break and when you feel ready, come back and I'll be ready to read it. Me and a friend absolutely love your stories and we have long random conversations about them because they are so fabulous so please ignore the bad reviews, their silly, and feel better. You deserve to be happy simply for writing so well and being so awesome. Feel better and good luck.
Hey, so, I hope you don't destroy this account. I would love to read more of this story and I fear I won't be able to find it if you move. BUt I don't expect updates at any regular intervals because I know I am terrible at that. You are a fabulous author and I haven't found fault in any of your chapters yet, except for the random grammar error but we all make those. Your characterization is top notch and you are fabulous. I love your stories so don't get down on yourself, take a break and when you feel ready, come back and I'll be ready to read it. Me and a friend absolutely love your stories and we have long random conversations about them because they are so fabulous so please ignore the bad reviews, their silly, and feel better. You deserve to be happy simply for writing so well and being so awesome. Feel better and good luck.
6/17 c27 3magicanimegurl
I appreciate that you take serious time for your stories and I just found this one and I love it! I hope you get inspired and motivated to continue. Good luck in your other works!
3magicanimegurlI appreciate that you take serious time for your stories and I just found this one and I love it! I hope you get inspired and motivated to continue. Good luck in your other works!
6/17 c27 fancyfairy
This story is so great. It pulls you in. I had to force myself to stop reading last night because it was already 3:00 in the morning. I really hope you end up continuing this story I want to know how it ends.
This story is so great. It pulls you in. I had to force myself to stop reading last night because it was already 3:00 in the morning. I really hope you end up continuing this story I want to know how it ends.
6/16 c27 Iwa Shinju
I like the story. It adds depth to 'Fate's Favourite' and the development of characters is just as brilliant.
I like the story. It adds depth to 'Fate's Favourite' and the development of characters is just as brilliant.
6/15 c27 3Night Hawk 97
Wow, you've got Riddle's personality spot on! I love how intelligent he is, especially how he's smarter than Harry and it actually shows.
3Night Hawk 97Wow, you've got Riddle's personality spot on! I love how intelligent he is, especially how he's smarter than Harry and it actually shows.
6/12 c27 veachan
I bought your book after I read you're fanfiction because I think you're a great writer. Your a popular Arthur and I'm sure that will drive sales towards your book! Don't give up this profile! Just quit reading the reviews! ( hypocritical as I hope you read this review) incidentally, I hope you come out with next book soon. I'd like to see how Jamie will get closer to our heroine!
I bought your book after I read you're fanfiction because I think you're a great writer. Your a popular Arthur and I'm sure that will drive sales towards your book! Don't give up this profile! Just quit reading the reviews! ( hypocritical as I hope you read this review) incidentally, I hope you come out with next book soon. I'd like to see how Jamie will get closer to our heroine!
6/12 c27 CaraCersei
I don't know why anyone would have any bad reviews for this story- I absolutely love it!
Fate's Favourite was brilliant, thrilling from start to end and I loved your version of Harry! But this is amazing, I think so far you've really captured the characters well and already we can see the slow shift in dynamics between Harry and Tom as Harry slowly becomes the Harry we know and love from FF!
I understand why you may not be updating anymore but I'll keep checking for updates regardless. I'm really enjoying this and hope you ignore any silly people with negative comments and continue to update!
I don't know why anyone would have any bad reviews for this story- I absolutely love it!
Fate's Favourite was brilliant, thrilling from start to end and I loved your version of Harry! But this is amazing, I think so far you've really captured the characters well and already we can see the slow shift in dynamics between Harry and Tom as Harry slowly becomes the Harry we know and love from FF!
I understand why you may not be updating anymore but I'll keep checking for updates regardless. I'm really enjoying this and hope you ignore any silly people with negative comments and continue to update!
6/12 c27 Guest
... no please don't go on hiatus... i bloody love this story, and am completely addicted to fates favourite... i don't care if other people think that you are not that good... you are bloody brilliant... but update in your own time... please do update though.
... no please don't go on hiatus... i bloody love this story, and am completely addicted to fates favourite... i don't care if other people think that you are not that good... you are bloody brilliant... but update in your own time... please do update though.
6/9 c27 6Pairou
I sincerely hope you come back to this story... it really sucks that ANYONE would give you a negative review or PM; your writing, as far as I can tell from this story, is superb. The characterization is amazingly accurate as well as original; Riddle is unique and believable, and the word plays between the two characters are entertaining as well as goosebump-inducing. I'm a huge fan and no matter what people say, write for you, not them!
6PairouI sincerely hope you come back to this story... it really sucks that ANYONE would give you a negative review or PM; your writing, as far as I can tell from this story, is superb. The characterization is amazingly accurate as well as original; Riddle is unique and believable, and the word plays between the two characters are entertaining as well as goosebump-inducing. I'm a huge fan and no matter what people say, write for you, not them!