for Bunch of Oneshots12/26/2012 c5 Guest
So yeah in the future when you own language and grammar aren't that great don't make a characters suck as well. That makes it worse...and really fricking annoying to read.
So yeah in the future when you own language and grammar aren't that great don't make a characters suck as well. That makes it worse...and really fricking annoying to read.
5/17/2012 c10 Liger01
I liked it, its interesting since its going a new way, I hope you do continue it once you finish one of the other fics.
I liked it, its interesting since its going a new way, I hope you do continue it once you finish one of the other fics.
5/16/2012 c6 animekingmike
I would like to see this be made into its own story. Very well done. Keep it up.
I would like to see this be made into its own story. Very well done. Keep it up.
9/6/2011 c8 Ladder-Climber
Truly great stories! Too bad it is only a one shot... I particularly liked the Star Wars and FMA crossovers, as well as the Senju naruto. Keep updating!
Truly great stories! Too bad it is only a one shot... I particularly liked the Star Wars and FMA crossovers, as well as the Senju naruto. Keep updating!
6/1/2011 c5 anonym
So freaking awesome, a real pearl, you should add some new chapters because this is pure gold:)
So freaking awesome, a real pearl, you should add some new chapters because this is pure gold:)
5/4/2011 c6 
5You will fear my laser face
I think you could make this a good story just keep naruto like this
5You will fear my laser faceI think you could make this a good story just keep naruto like this
5/3/2011 c8 197Nate Grey
Not sure what you were trying to imply by making Naruto the Hokage. If you meant that was the only way to ensure Naruto would come back alive, fine. But if you meant that Naruto would die for the village as the other Hokages did, and for Sasuke of all people, puts a bad taste in my mouth.
197Nate GreyNot sure what you were trying to imply by making Naruto the Hokage. If you meant that was the only way to ensure Naruto would come back alive, fine. But if you meant that Naruto would die for the village as the other Hokages did, and for Sasuke of all people, puts a bad taste in my mouth.
2/24/2011 c7 ICan'tKillSlugoth
Wow... That was just... I'm impressed. That was a really good one shot. All that in one chapter. Keep up the good work.
Wow... That was just... I'm impressed. That was a really good one shot. All that in one chapter. Keep up the good work.
2/22/2011 c5 bored
Nice oneshot its a refreshing change of pace from the overused 'ninja naruto protecting harry' fanfic. It has potential if you decide to continue it :P
Nice oneshot its a refreshing change of pace from the overused 'ninja naruto protecting harry' fanfic. It has potential if you decide to continue it :P
12/16/2010 c6 Liger01
Interesting fic, hope u continue it like star wars, thought you haven't updates that in a while.
Interesting fic, hope u continue it like star wars, thought you haven't updates that in a while.