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5/21/2011 c1 canadaroks
AW:) I love the last line especially! I was watching this show ALL day yesterday and I was wondering how Nels (he's my favorite!) ended up with Harriet! (well that and how shockingly different the books are!)
8/7/2010 c1 49kandisi
I loved it. The last line, especially. So very Nels. :)
2/20/2010 c1 39Sand n' Sable
This is good, exactly the way I expect Harriet to react after Laura left after giving her back the cup. You had the story right in so many ways.
2/14/2010 c1 7LadyLudvika
Another wonderful story by you! I absolutely love it. I like how you notice those small details. Like that vulnerable look on Harriet's face when Laura gives her the silver bowl.

The ending is magnificent:

"He loved her enough to want her to be the best person she could. He loved her enough not to coerce her into changing but to simply show her there was another way to live. He loved her enough to her to know he would always love her even if she never changed."

So sweet and beautiful! I really do hope that you will write more of these. I love them! :)

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