for Mystirous Type12/17/2011 c11 
5Needles of Rain
Lul. Just. Pure. Lul. I like it. :D Though... Tamaki isn't butting in as much. *gasp* XD Entertaining with the fangirls... XD That smchuk deserved what he got. XD *imagined Major getting flattened by Mori and Honey-senpai's drop kicks* 8D Ah, well, I can't wait for more of your story.
5Needles of RainLul. Just. Pure. Lul. I like it. :D Though... Tamaki isn't butting in as much. *gasp* XD Entertaining with the fangirls... XD That smchuk deserved what he got. XD *imagined Major getting flattened by Mori and Honey-senpai's drop kicks* 8D Ah, well, I can't wait for more of your story.
8/31/2011 c3 logan
Did she say she was a stunt woman?
Did she say she was a stunt woman?
7/10/2011 c11 3Saya Kurobara
Yay! I've been waiting for this 3. Save for the grammatical errors I... LOVED it.
3Saya KurobaraYay! I've been waiting for this 3. Save for the grammatical errors I... LOVED it.
5/24/2011 c2 naru894
i like the bike ^^
i think is sempai...
question do you want a betta? if you want one i am available ^^
i like the bike ^^
i think is sempai...
question do you want a betta? if you want one i am available ^^
5/24/2011 c1 naru894
interesting story.. but correctme if i am wrong... i thought that chichi was dad, adn Otou-san was father?
interesting story.. but correctme if i am wrong... i thought that chichi was dad, adn Otou-san was father?
5/21/2011 c10 Saya Kurobara
PLEASE continue this story soon (sorry took so long to continue reading been without webs)
PLEASE continue this story soon (sorry took so long to continue reading been without webs)
5/2/2011 c8 CuteSpider
love it
love it
1/15/2011 c8 3Kiriari
I really enjoy this story
All my complaints were said by Sephira The Wicked so... thats it.
I look forward to another update
3KiriariI really enjoy this story
All my complaints were said by Sephira The Wicked so... thats it.
I look forward to another update
1/14/2011 c9 2Sephira The Wicked
okay you got me this is really good, If I look past the errors.
Ruby's corresponding is July not August.
I am not going to point out every single error, but you need to do research before you write. asking simple questions like 'what is august' birthstone?' in google. It kinda derails me from the story if I am reading and all the sudden I am given information that is not even partly true.
To tell you the truth I really can't wait for you to put out the next chapter.
Sephira T. Wicked
2Sephira The Wickedokay you got me this is really good, If I look past the errors.
Ruby's corresponding is July not August.
I am not going to point out every single error, but you need to do research before you write. asking simple questions like 'what is august' birthstone?' in google. It kinda derails me from the story if I am reading and all the sudden I am given information that is not even partly true.
To tell you the truth I really can't wait for you to put out the next chapter.
Sephira T. Wicked
1/14/2011 c1 Sephira The Wicked
10 feet tall *facepalm*...really? You have gotta kidding me! six feet six inches to seven feet tall is about Alucard's height and you realize that all the characters in this chapter are British, right? When she got to Japan I would understand, but they are still in England. I highly doubt that they would be using Japaneses names. I am surprised no one has told you this yet.
Otherwise so far so good with spelling and grammar from what I could see. This story is interesting and original. Good job with that.
I really hope it gets better,
Sephira T. Wicked
P.s I don't write this to be mean, it's the truth.
10 feet tall *facepalm*...really? You have gotta kidding me! six feet six inches to seven feet tall is about Alucard's height and you realize that all the characters in this chapter are British, right? When she got to Japan I would understand, but they are still in England. I highly doubt that they would be using Japaneses names. I am surprised no one has told you this yet.
Otherwise so far so good with spelling and grammar from what I could see. This story is interesting and original. Good job with that.
I really hope it gets better,
Sephira T. Wicked
P.s I don't write this to be mean, it's the truth.