for Sestina5/21 c29 JazzyAli
Okay, first off I just want to say that your story is so goooood. I really love how you took so much time to develop the characters and their backgrounds before getting into the real plot of the story, and I really like your portrayal of all of the characters. All in all, you're a really awesome writer. I'm totally hooked on your story. Please please pleeeease update soon? Or at least tell me what happens? I must know!
Okay, first off I just want to say that your story is so goooood. I really love how you took so much time to develop the characters and their backgrounds before getting into the real plot of the story, and I really like your portrayal of all of the characters. All in all, you're a really awesome writer. I'm totally hooked on your story. Please please pleeeease update soon? Or at least tell me what happens? I must know!
5/20 c29
3wizardfantasy
I love this story and have read and re-read it like a million times and can't wait to know what happens next, but i notice you haven't updated in months, so i don't know whether i'm getting my hopes up or not! Either way this is a brilliant story and you should be very proud of it and i will be waiting for your eventual update that I'm sure will be well worth the wait!
I love your story! Well done!
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3wizardfantasyI love this story and have read and re-read it like a million times and can't wait to know what happens next, but i notice you haven't updated in months, so i don't know whether i'm getting my hopes up or not! Either way this is a brilliant story and you should be very proud of it and i will be waiting for your eventual update that I'm sure will be well worth the wait!
I love your story! Well done!
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5/3 c13 Jacil
You got a very nice story there. It is very amazing even this story too Both Ways At Once, they're are wonderful! Keep up the good work there, hm.
You got a very nice story there. It is very amazing even this story too Both Ways At Once, they're are wonderful! Keep up the good work there, hm.
4/26 c7 Phi ScarlaDraconia
Do we get virtu-cookies for guessing right? Cause I totally think it's Jim.
Do we get virtu-cookies for guessing right? Cause I totally think it's Jim.
3/10 c29
5Jinx Friday
This fic is absolute brilliance in every way. I have the entirety of 'Ex Astris, Scientia' up on the wall of my room. I'll probably leave a more detailed review the next (umpteenth) time I read through it, but for now just know that I love love love your work. 3
5Jinx FridayThis fic is absolute brilliance in every way. I have the entirety of 'Ex Astris, Scientia' up on the wall of my room. I'll probably leave a more detailed review the next (umpteenth) time I read through it, but for now just know that I love love love your work. 3
2/22 c29
2MsPsychoFairy
I just love that story *_* I realy hope you will update it anytime soon because its very great *_* I cant wait for Jims rescue
2MsPsychoFairyI just love that story *_* I realy hope you will update it anytime soon because its very great *_* I cant wait for Jims rescue
2/21 c29
24getTHEfear
Hey :)
I just wanted to say that this story has been simply amazing to read so far. It has been, by far, one of the best stories I have ever read on this site. I've been reading this story over the past few days on my phone whenever I get a few minutes of free time and it has honestly done wonders in helping me get through my days this week. I can't thank you enough for that, and I just wanted you to know how much this story has been an impact on me. I don't normally leave reviews - bad habit, I know - but I simply could not leave this story without saying something first.
The characters are amazing, the way you have described their friendships was one of the main things that got me so obsessed with this story. And I'm normally totally against reading K/S slash, or any other kind of slash for that matter, but I'm beginning to think that is maybe because the few slash stories I have attempted to read were just not written well enough. The way you have written and described all of your pairings in this story has just astonished me. I completely and utterly fell in love with it all. I just...yeah, there aren't words to describe just how much I loved your writing in this story. I reiterate: I loved/adored/*insert any other positive and approving sounding verbs here* your story!
*Composes self* Yeah. Anyway. All of that being said, it would be so so so amazing and wonderful and incredible and awesome if you updated this. I understand life gets in the way, believe me, I know. And I'd certainly never hate you or anything if you ended up never finishing this story. Just know that no matter how long it takes, if this is updated I will most certainly read it. And I'll leave another nice, long, happy review to keep you motivated :D
Thanks for being an incredible writer and writing this story to keep me happy for at least the too short time that it took me to read it. It seriously made my week. You have a talent, and I hope that talent brings you back here to give us another update ;)
Thanks again,
4getTHEfear
24getTHEfearHey :)
I just wanted to say that this story has been simply amazing to read so far. It has been, by far, one of the best stories I have ever read on this site. I've been reading this story over the past few days on my phone whenever I get a few minutes of free time and it has honestly done wonders in helping me get through my days this week. I can't thank you enough for that, and I just wanted you to know how much this story has been an impact on me. I don't normally leave reviews - bad habit, I know - but I simply could not leave this story without saying something first.
The characters are amazing, the way you have described their friendships was one of the main things that got me so obsessed with this story. And I'm normally totally against reading K/S slash, or any other kind of slash for that matter, but I'm beginning to think that is maybe because the few slash stories I have attempted to read were just not written well enough. The way you have written and described all of your pairings in this story has just astonished me. I completely and utterly fell in love with it all. I just...yeah, there aren't words to describe just how much I loved your writing in this story. I reiterate: I loved/adored/*insert any other positive and approving sounding verbs here* your story!
*Composes self* Yeah. Anyway. All of that being said, it would be so so so amazing and wonderful and incredible and awesome if you updated this. I understand life gets in the way, believe me, I know. And I'd certainly never hate you or anything if you ended up never finishing this story. Just know that no matter how long it takes, if this is updated I will most certainly read it. And I'll leave another nice, long, happy review to keep you motivated :D
Thanks for being an incredible writer and writing this story to keep me happy for at least the too short time that it took me to read it. It seriously made my week. You have a talent, and I hope that talent brings you back here to give us another update ;)
Thanks again,
4getTHEfear
1/21 c7 Naomi
Happy Birthday. It's Kirk writing the poems isn't it?
Happy Birthday. It's Kirk writing the poems isn't it?
1/21 c4 Naomi
The poetry has a nice ring to it.
The poetry has a nice ring to it.
1/11 c24
3D4ncingD4wn
I'm reviewing this chapter because it's beautiful.
First, you're a jerk! You made my heart soar with the engagement then not a minute later you tore it out of my chest. Then proceeded to throw it on the ground and stomp on it repeatedly. This chapter was so powerful, I cried like four times reading it and I am so glad no one was around to hear me sobbing. Second, you're fantastic! I love you, you're an awesome writer and I feel so inspired by you! You are great at writing everyone in character, and the poems from the magazine? BEAUTIFUL. I loved them, so much! Third, this fanfic is taking over my life! I really could go on forever but I won't. At least not here :) I'll finish reading the updated chapters when it's not 2am.
D4ncingD4wn out.
3D4ncingD4wnI'm reviewing this chapter because it's beautiful.
First, you're a jerk! You made my heart soar with the engagement then not a minute later you tore it out of my chest. Then proceeded to throw it on the ground and stomp on it repeatedly. This chapter was so powerful, I cried like four times reading it and I am so glad no one was around to hear me sobbing. Second, you're fantastic! I love you, you're an awesome writer and I feel so inspired by you! You are great at writing everyone in character, and the poems from the magazine? BEAUTIFUL. I loved them, so much! Third, this fanfic is taking over my life! I really could go on forever but I won't. At least not here :) I'll finish reading the updated chapters when it's not 2am.
D4ncingD4wn out.
12/30/2012 c29 Molygon
Such a beautiful story, please update? *gives nyota puppy eyes*
Such a beautiful story, please update? *gives nyota puppy eyes*
12/17/2012 c29 Loyal Lurkeress
Hello Lyri,
I doubt you remember, but I used to follow your work under this nom de plume. I know I dropped off the face of the planet for the longest time, but on a whim, I decided to get back on and reread this story.
It's still beautifully written; I hope you know that. It still pull my heartstrings and makes me laugh in all the right places. I still worry over each character and tear up at each emotional moment. This last chapter was new for me-guess that goes to show how long I've been gone, haha. But despite the brevity, this latest installment still made me cry out for more.
So, dear-though it's been many months, I do hope you'll update soon. This is undoubtedly one of the best-written and most memorable stories I've stumbled upon in this 'verse. I would love to see it finished.
Best,
LL
Hello Lyri,
I doubt you remember, but I used to follow your work under this nom de plume. I know I dropped off the face of the planet for the longest time, but on a whim, I decided to get back on and reread this story.
It's still beautifully written; I hope you know that. It still pull my heartstrings and makes me laugh in all the right places. I still worry over each character and tear up at each emotional moment. This last chapter was new for me-guess that goes to show how long I've been gone, haha. But despite the brevity, this latest installment still made me cry out for more.
So, dear-though it's been many months, I do hope you'll update soon. This is undoubtedly one of the best-written and most memorable stories I've stumbled upon in this 'verse. I would love to see it finished.
Best,
LL
