for After Death4/29 c17
2Geminine
Omg, your the most terrifying writer i've ever found. Your writing CRUSHED ME! LIKE SERIOUSLY! WHAT ARE YOU TRYING TO DO? I'M CRYING LIKE A BABY! I CAN'T DECIDE WHETHER I HATE YOU OR LOVE YOU AND THE LOVE SIDE IS WINNING! So you bet your Darn Toot i wanna sequel! :D * seriously you wrote the most saddest and some how **ed up ending and i love it yet cringe at the pain in my heart*
2GeminineOmg, your the most terrifying writer i've ever found. Your writing CRUSHED ME! LIKE SERIOUSLY! WHAT ARE YOU TRYING TO DO? I'M CRYING LIKE A BABY! I CAN'T DECIDE WHETHER I HATE YOU OR LOVE YOU AND THE LOVE SIDE IS WINNING! So you bet your Darn Toot i wanna sequel! :D * seriously you wrote the most saddest and some how **ed up ending and i love it yet cringe at the pain in my heart*
4/23 c11 azarieyah
first of all, i really LOVE this crossover fic, its juz so well mix. you don't know how much i did reread this fics since i tumbled on this page.
i do have some request thou.. i kinda feel like there is so much more story especially the scene when Sakura started transforming to Hollow and became Aizen's pet?, i just wished you can make a full-base fic about that.
you know, when he start falling for her, haha, yeah i know, cliche, but, i just love this bad-** sakura, rather than timid one, like earlier naruto chapter. i wanna read and see more where Grimjoww stand between them. don't you think that will be awesome. and then Byakuya comes along.. instead of triangle love, i want to read square love.. hahah.. for sure, sakura would be the wholly main character, holding those character in her fingertips..
do.. please do... i would love and voluntarily read it...
btw,.. u are awesome... :D
first of all, i really LOVE this crossover fic, its juz so well mix. you don't know how much i did reread this fics since i tumbled on this page.
i do have some request thou.. i kinda feel like there is so much more story especially the scene when Sakura started transforming to Hollow and became Aizen's pet?, i just wished you can make a full-base fic about that.
you know, when he start falling for her, haha, yeah i know, cliche, but, i just love this bad-** sakura, rather than timid one, like earlier naruto chapter. i wanna read and see more where Grimjoww stand between them. don't you think that will be awesome. and then Byakuya comes along.. instead of triangle love, i want to read square love.. hahah.. for sure, sakura would be the wholly main character, holding those character in her fingertips..
do.. please do... i would love and voluntarily read it...
btw,.. u are awesome... :D
2/10 c17
4Mckaykay
Please make a sequel. You have a beautiful talent for writing and I am happy to say that I am one of your fans. But really, do make a sequel. I'm really serious. Sequel would be great. I'm sssooo not kidding. Sequel must be written. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. Please.(:
4MckaykayPlease make a sequel. You have a beautiful talent for writing and I am happy to say that I am one of your fans. But really, do make a sequel. I'm really serious. Sequel would be great. I'm sssooo not kidding. Sequel must be written. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. Please.(:
2/9 c1
1SaraL97
Hey I know I already reviewed, but that was from my kindle and I can’t really type on that easily. I enjoyed this story so much I thought I take that time to write a real review. The thing that really stood out to me was how much I loved how you compared and contrasted Bleach and Naruto. You showed the differences and similarities, the good and the bad of both sides. I thought it very was realistic that Sakura would favor Konoha system over Soul society’s system, until she understood it better and realized that both systems were better for their village/city.
I normally don’t like reading battle scenes, because they can be confusing. But I could understand your battle scenes perfectly, they were extremely well written. Though sometimes when Sakura was fighting multiply people, it seemed like you’re would forget the others were there and just focus on her and one other person. But I rarely saw that.
The only thing I was disappointed on was the fact I think Sakura and Toshiro Hitsugaya would be a good pair, but he wasn’t even mentioned once. That just might be my biased opinion through since he is one of favorite characters. You did have practically everyone else in Soul Society in the story so I was wondering if you dislike him for some reason.
I have to admit your story kept me on the edge of my seat all day. When my dad asked me what I’d been doing all day, the only thing I could say was “Reading a really good story.”
(This is the longest review I ever written! XD)
1SaraL97Hey I know I already reviewed, but that was from my kindle and I can’t really type on that easily. I enjoyed this story so much I thought I take that time to write a real review. The thing that really stood out to me was how much I loved how you compared and contrasted Bleach and Naruto. You showed the differences and similarities, the good and the bad of both sides. I thought it very was realistic that Sakura would favor Konoha system over Soul society’s system, until she understood it better and realized that both systems were better for their village/city.
I normally don’t like reading battle scenes, because they can be confusing. But I could understand your battle scenes perfectly, they were extremely well written. Though sometimes when Sakura was fighting multiply people, it seemed like you’re would forget the others were there and just focus on her and one other person. But I rarely saw that.
The only thing I was disappointed on was the fact I think Sakura and Toshiro Hitsugaya would be a good pair, but he wasn’t even mentioned once. That just might be my biased opinion through since he is one of favorite characters. You did have practically everyone else in Soul Society in the story so I was wondering if you dislike him for some reason.
I have to admit your story kept me on the edge of my seat all day. When my dad asked me what I’d been doing all day, the only thing I could say was “Reading a really good story.”
(This is the longest review I ever written! XD)
1/6 c11 SageModeSasuke
Luckily had time to read for the last 2 days. This has been a pleasant break from life. Well done on chapters 1-11 thus far and I am sure I will continue to enjoy the rest as I read it.
PS. The previous post like this was me, but I didn't notice I was signed out.
Luckily had time to read for the last 2 days. This has been a pleasant break from life. Well done on chapters 1-11 thus far and I am sure I will continue to enjoy the rest as I read it.
PS. The previous post like this was me, but I didn't notice I was signed out.
1/6 c11 Guest
Luckily had time to read for the last 2 days. This has been a pleasant break from life. Well done on chapters 1-11 thus far and I am sure I will continue to enjoy the rest as I read it.
Luckily had time to read for the last 2 days. This has been a pleasant break from life. Well done on chapters 1-11 thus far and I am sure I will continue to enjoy the rest as I read it.
12/27/2012 c17
52AwEsOmE4yA
i love it please make a sequel! It's so awesome! CHA! the last chapter made e cry where did she go where o ask you!?
52AwEsOmE4yAi love it please make a sequel! It's so awesome! CHA! the last chapter made e cry where did she go where o ask you!?
9/19/2012 c17
4GreyEyedKunoichi
I think you should do a sequel. It would really tie in if Itachi was the other pov. Say he has passed away and is now in the Rukongai and somehow also ends up a shinigami or some such thing. I believe you could keep this goin and many people would support you. I know I do and if you ever need an Idea I am telling you that the fans have no shortage of them.
4GreyEyedKunoichiI think you should do a sequel. It would really tie in if Itachi was the other pov. Say he has passed away and is now in the Rukongai and somehow also ends up a shinigami or some such thing. I believe you could keep this goin and many people would support you. I know I do and if you ever need an Idea I am telling you that the fans have no shortage of them.
9/7/2012 c16
3Pilar Ann
I cried. like im crying so much i dont understand. I skipped the chapters to get here. And ive read this over and over. The first time i did, my tears were unstoppable i didnt even get to write a review.
And now that Im here, once again, my tears still wouldnt stop. I was not much a fan of ItaSaku, but this story made me cry buckets of tears.
WHY? -wails- i mean, i skipped the chapters so yeah, i still dont get everything well.. and ill be reading them over in a short while.. -bites lips- but this is JUST SO SAAAAD.
Itachi.. poor Itachi-kun. i love your story really.. but.. cant there be a sequel or something of an epilogue on an epilogue where Itachi met Sakura once again? -tears up-
waaaa.. -sob- im sorry for crying in here. My reviews all messy and tear streaked. I printed your story and am rereading it over and over. this chapter hurts like hell.. -wails around-
I love it author-san.
But sakura could have written more. just that.. 'till we meet again?' -tears flowing.
guu.. im so sad.. thank you for writing this..
much love, Pilar Ann
3Pilar AnnI cried. like im crying so much i dont understand. I skipped the chapters to get here. And ive read this over and over. The first time i did, my tears were unstoppable i didnt even get to write a review.
And now that Im here, once again, my tears still wouldnt stop. I was not much a fan of ItaSaku, but this story made me cry buckets of tears.
WHY? -wails- i mean, i skipped the chapters so yeah, i still dont get everything well.. and ill be reading them over in a short while.. -bites lips- but this is JUST SO SAAAAD.
Itachi.. poor Itachi-kun. i love your story really.. but.. cant there be a sequel or something of an epilogue on an epilogue where Itachi met Sakura once again? -tears up-
waaaa.. -sob- im sorry for crying in here. My reviews all messy and tear streaked. I printed your story and am rereading it over and over. this chapter hurts like hell.. -wails around-
I love it author-san.
But sakura could have written more. just that.. 'till we meet again?' -tears flowing.
guu.. im so sad.. thank you for writing this..
much love, Pilar Ann
9/5/2012 c17
4Gasanechi
Yes, definitely a sequel please, I really love this story, will you continue this story?
4GasanechiYes, definitely a sequel please, I really love this story, will you continue this story?
8/28/2012 c17 Kitiara Woodbane
Well I loved this, and I would totally read a sequel! It feels like the story isn't finished, I wasn't expecting that to be the end. I want to see mor interactions with the Seireitei and what she does to change things!
Well I loved this, and I would totally read a sequel! It feels like the story isn't finished, I wasn't expecting that to be the end. I want to see mor interactions with the Seireitei and what she does to change things!
8/22/2012 c17 Malthinae
I admit I wasn't expecting to see my absolute favorite pairing here, and,well,all I have to say is,
Oh SO HEART WRENCHING *cries* this is an amazing piece of fanfiction! Thank you so much for writing it ;w; oh heart-wrenching sadness,yet so so sweet. 3
I admit I wasn't expecting to see my absolute favorite pairing here, and,well,all I have to say is,
Oh SO HEART WRENCHING *cries* this is an amazing piece of fanfiction! Thank you so much for writing it ;w; oh heart-wrenching sadness,yet so so sweet. 3
