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10/13/2011 c8 17Kosaten no Kokinatsuyosa
Yet another nice, soild peice. Once again, I am rendered speechless.
10/13/2011 c7 Kosaten no Kokinatsuyosa
Oh, does this one bring back memories of the original series! If I recall correctly Misty eventually forgot why she had even been mad at Ash by the time he had one Cinnabar's badge, and unfortunately for Ash, Brock reminded her XD. I'm horribly nostalgic now, so there you go. :)
10/13/2011 c6 Kosaten no Kokinatsuyosa
Typical Misty, but maybe that's why we love her...maybe. Again, excellent work, and I like Brock noticing her jealously at the end, it's a nice additive.
10/13/2011 c5 Kosaten no Kokinatsuyosa
Awww, kinda makes you feel bad for her... Nice work! I honesty can't think of any critique.
10/13/2011 c4 Kosaten no Kokinatsuyosa
I'm not familiar with the episode, but thanks to previous research on Bubapedia, I realized that the subject was an Apiom that Ash apparently caught. This is short, but 100% solid. First Chimcar (Charmander) now Apiom(Primape)... Don't you just love how plotlines get recycled? :)
10/13/2011 c3 Kosaten no Kokinatsuyosa
That was beautiful *sob* I recenty wrote a passage where Misty starts getting on Ash's case about marrige and so this tickled me to death. Your portarayal of Ash is brilliantly done, and I can picture his voice and expression perfectly.
10/13/2011 c2 Kosaten no Kokinatsuyosa
Sadly, I haven't the faintest idea who Angie is, and due to this segment's legnth, it's hard to give good feedback...
10/13/2011 c1 Kosaten no Kokinatsuyosa
Although I'm only somewhat familiar with Temple of the Sea (read a synopsis off Bulbapedia, I wasn't lucky enough to actually see it) I liked this, being familiar with May's character.
5/13/2010 c2 doyoureallyneedtoknowmyname
You really get your point across in very few words. Well done. UPDATE.
3/11/2010 c7 3Cancerous Galaxy
Heh heh. Sure Misty, we believe you.
3/11/2010 c6 Cancerous Galaxy
I miss Misty being there to knock some sense into Brock when he gets out of line. Then again, Croagunk works just as well.
3/11/2010 c4 Cancerous Galaxy
Huh, I never thought about Aipom that way.
3/11/2010 c3 Cancerous Galaxy
That's my best friend and her boyfriend talking! Seriously, that's what one of their conversations sounds like... It's weird.
3/11/2010 c2 Cancerous Galaxy
Ha, Angie's Mom was right on target!
3/11/2010 c1 Cancerous Galaxy
Oh, poor May. Manaphy was essentially her baby. I cried at the part where Manaphy said "Happy love you! Happy love you, May."
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