for Davey and Detta Swinging in a Tree5/3/2010 c5 
8Awkward.Quail
OH! Is it done? That has to be one of the shortest sotries of yours I have ever read.
WHAH! I want more.
:(
-Jodi
8Awkward.QuailOH! Is it done? That has to be one of the shortest sotries of yours I have ever read.
WHAH! I want more.
:(
-Jodi
4/19/2010 c5 24LucyOfNarnia
I liked the part where Spot's like " My kind a plan, Mouth." Lol. Very funny. Good ending. Can't wait to see what you write next.
24LucyOfNarniaI liked the part where Spot's like " My kind a plan, Mouth." Lol. Very funny. Good ending. Can't wait to see what you write next.
4/19/2010 c5 41Coli Chibi
Well at least this time you actually included the fight scene instead of cheaping out, like the last time.
41Coli ChibiWell at least this time you actually included the fight scene instead of cheaping out, like the last time.
4/19/2010 c5 Eruanna Undomiel
Very good! It was a little cliche, but I don't care about that! I just liked the fluff! And there were a few grammatical errors. If you have Word, you should try running it through Spell-Check. That'll help.
Very nice. I'm so sad this story is over! I'm so glad you finished it, even though your muse died. I know how hard it is to finish once your muse died. You did MUCH better than me. If you want to know what I'm talking about, read my story called Newsies in Narnia. First fic, lost my muse, and it ended in 4 chapters!
Nice job!
Eruanna Undomiel
Very good! It was a little cliche, but I don't care about that! I just liked the fluff! And there were a few grammatical errors. If you have Word, you should try running it through Spell-Check. That'll help.
Very nice. I'm so sad this story is over! I'm so glad you finished it, even though your muse died. I know how hard it is to finish once your muse died. You did MUCH better than me. If you want to know what I'm talking about, read my story called Newsies in Narnia. First fic, lost my muse, and it ended in 4 chapters!
Nice job!
Eruanna Undomiel
3/21/2010 c4 8Awkward.Quail
Orson is such a creeper! He scares me.
Bonanza and Gunsmoke! I love those shows! Hee hee I'm sucha nerd.
Lovely chapter!
Update Soon!
-Jodi
8Awkward.QuailOrson is such a creeper! He scares me.
Bonanza and Gunsmoke! I love those shows! Hee hee I'm sucha nerd.
Lovely chapter!
Update Soon!
-Jodi
3/16/2010 c4 Eruanna Undomiel
I really like this! You've done really well with Orson, Detta, and David. He's usually a wuss in fics, but you gave him some back bone and I'm realy happy!
Keep writing and you'll make me even happier!
Eruanna Undomiel
I really like this! You've done really well with Orson, Detta, and David. He's usually a wuss in fics, but you gave him some back bone and I'm realy happy!
Keep writing and you'll make me even happier!
Eruanna Undomiel
3/10/2010 c3 LucyOfNarnia
Wow! That is LONG walk. Good chapter! Aw I'll pray for Freddy. Poor fella. God bless!
Wow! That is LONG walk. Good chapter! Aw I'll pray for Freddy. Poor fella. God bless!
3/10/2010 c3 Eruanna Undomiel
So glad you updated! I really like this, and you did very well with the love triangle.
Your little brother is in my prayers. I know how scary it is to have a sibling in the hospital. Let me know how he is! Praying for you!
Eruanna Undomiel
So glad you updated! I really like this, and you did very well with the love triangle.
Your little brother is in my prayers. I know how scary it is to have a sibling in the hospital. Let me know how he is! Praying for you!
Eruanna Undomiel
2/27/2010 c2 8Awkward.Quail
HAHAHAHA! Really funny! I loved Les in this one. So adorable. "You talk in your sleep." AH! I love him.
Detta is just as funny!
Update soon!
-Jodi
8Awkward.QuailHAHAHAHA! Really funny! I loved Les in this one. So adorable. "You talk in your sleep." AH! I love him.
Detta is just as funny!
Update soon!
-Jodi
2/27/2010 c2 Eruanna Undomiel
Very cute. Detta is adorable, keep up the good work!
Eruanna Undomiel
Very cute. Detta is adorable, keep up the good work!
Eruanna Undomiel
2/23/2010 c1 9Eruanna Undomiel
DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE YOU RIGHT NOW!
David is like, my favorite newsie and there are very few stories about him that aren't slash. I love you so much!
I can't wait for more!
Eruanna Undomiel
9Eruanna UndomielDO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE YOU RIGHT NOW!
David is like, my favorite newsie and there are very few stories about him that aren't slash. I love you so much!
I can't wait for more!
Eruanna Undomiel