for Everlasting Change2/4 c24 makebelieve09
I really like this and I hope you update this soon! Who is Kana going to end up with Shin or Uchi or Kuro? It's been two years since you updated so I hope you continue :(
I really like this and I hope you update this soon! Who is Kana going to end up with Shin or Uchi or Kuro? It's been two years since you updated so I hope you continue :(
6/15/2012 c24 bbymojo
oh god i hope you are still gonna continue writing this fic. it is really good! i like kana :D especially with sawada.. i am rooting for shin/kana ;) what got me into gokusen is when i started watching the live action drama on tv. i just found out really hilarious.. reading the fics makes me want to watch the episodes again. which i probably will do when exams are over :) please please please update soon! don't leave us hanging :P
oh god i hope you are still gonna continue writing this fic. it is really good! i like kana :D especially with sawada.. i am rooting for shin/kana ;) what got me into gokusen is when i started watching the live action drama on tv. i just found out really hilarious.. reading the fics makes me want to watch the episodes again. which i probably will do when exams are over :) please please please update soon! don't leave us hanging :P
1/18/2011 c24
5Rynn
I like this story and I like Kana. It sticks very closely to cannon, but maybe after episode 12 you can really start to branch out with Kana. I check regularly to see if the story has been updated and when you said that Kana would take on a stronger role, I was excited. I think you rushed through her story with Kuro quite a bit and 'told' the story instead of 'showing' their friendship. Do you remember how in the episode, Uchi and Shin told Yankumi that they were good friends with Kuro, but could you believe their words until after Kurosaki had flashbacks of arguing over who got to eat the meat, or ditching school to sleep on the roof?
I'm not saying of course that you must use flashbacks, but I think you should 'show' what sort of a relationship that they have/once had. Think about the possibilities: What sort of games did they play as kids? Did they give each other nicknames? Where they close enough to finish each others sentences? Did they ever argue and about what? Did they remain good friends in school? What are the origins of these keepsake necklaces that they both wore? What drove them apart even though they were best friends? Make me believe that Kana is worried about Kuro, her childhood friend.
You have at least one more chapter with Kurosaki so I hope you take full advantage of Kana's potential.
How did I get into Gokusen? Back in my high school Japanese class, my friend brought the drama on a dvd and we watched it during class a few times. Like a nutty fangirl *sighs ;), I went home later and downloaded the entire drama. My class loved it, especially the little Yakuza moments. We all often joked with our teacher, asking if she would ever protect us from bad guys like Yankumi. "Of course!" She'd exclaim ;)
I got into Japanese dramas after a trip to Japan. Hanakimi was my first drama, but Gokusen is one of my absolute favorites. I'm not gonna lie, I love Oguri Shun and Jun Matsumoto, but the characters in the show are why I can watch the show over and over again. Never read the manga though I probably should...
I'm waiting for an update so please post another chapter soon!
5RynnI like this story and I like Kana. It sticks very closely to cannon, but maybe after episode 12 you can really start to branch out with Kana. I check regularly to see if the story has been updated and when you said that Kana would take on a stronger role, I was excited. I think you rushed through her story with Kuro quite a bit and 'told' the story instead of 'showing' their friendship. Do you remember how in the episode, Uchi and Shin told Yankumi that they were good friends with Kuro, but could you believe their words until after Kurosaki had flashbacks of arguing over who got to eat the meat, or ditching school to sleep on the roof?
I'm not saying of course that you must use flashbacks, but I think you should 'show' what sort of a relationship that they have/once had. Think about the possibilities: What sort of games did they play as kids? Did they give each other nicknames? Where they close enough to finish each others sentences? Did they ever argue and about what? Did they remain good friends in school? What are the origins of these keepsake necklaces that they both wore? What drove them apart even though they were best friends? Make me believe that Kana is worried about Kuro, her childhood friend.
You have at least one more chapter with Kurosaki so I hope you take full advantage of Kana's potential.
How did I get into Gokusen? Back in my high school Japanese class, my friend brought the drama on a dvd and we watched it during class a few times. Like a nutty fangirl *sighs ;), I went home later and downloaded the entire drama. My class loved it, especially the little Yakuza moments. We all often joked with our teacher, asking if she would ever protect us from bad guys like Yankumi. "Of course!" She'd exclaim ;)
I got into Japanese dramas after a trip to Japan. Hanakimi was my first drama, but Gokusen is one of my absolute favorites. I'm not gonna lie, I love Oguri Shun and Jun Matsumoto, but the characters in the show are why I can watch the show over and over again. Never read the manga though I probably should...
I'm waiting for an update so please post another chapter soon!
1/9/2011 c24 Yanza
I liked the chapter, but I didn't really like how Kana didn't seem to do much of anything... I know she told her story to Shin and Uchi but other than that it didn't really seem like she was important or a part in this chapter. Just kind of a back round character.
Not trying to bring you down cause I DO like this story ;]
Can't wait for the next chapter!
I liked the chapter, but I didn't really like how Kana didn't seem to do much of anything... I know she told her story to Shin and Uchi but other than that it didn't really seem like she was important or a part in this chapter. Just kind of a back round character.
Not trying to bring you down cause I DO like this story ;]
Can't wait for the next chapter!
1/8/2011 c24
14ChiakiAngel
Actually, yes, Gokusen was my first drama. XD I'm glad that you updated, so please do so again soon!
14ChiakiAngelActually, yes, Gokusen was my first drama. XD I'm glad that you updated, so please do so again soon!
1/5/2011 c23 amyleedan
hmm i lke were this is heading please update :) i really wanna see kana become more involved in the stories rather than on the sidelines as a kinda hero :) great work :D updateee soon please :) xxx
hmm i lke were this is heading please update :) i really wanna see kana become more involved in the stories rather than on the sidelines as a kinda hero :) great work :D updateee soon please :) xxx
12/9/2010 c22
3whitewhite
Yay! Update! College can really be time consuming, not to mention normal life as well, so it's understandable to take time to write the next chapter.
Glad to know that Kana will have more interactions with the rest! Maybe add in more events, or problems other characters face for Yankumi and class 3D to solve it together? Since graduation seems to be reaching soon =w= (Unless you wish to end this story earlier)
Yuuta is also my favourite episode in the drama! Cause it was really fun to see him bond with the class. Can't wait to see how it progress~ Can't really say much since Kana hardly interact with others much.
Kudos!
3whitewhiteYay! Update! College can really be time consuming, not to mention normal life as well, so it's understandable to take time to write the next chapter.
Glad to know that Kana will have more interactions with the rest! Maybe add in more events, or problems other characters face for Yankumi and class 3D to solve it together? Since graduation seems to be reaching soon =w= (Unless you wish to end this story earlier)
Yuuta is also my favourite episode in the drama! Cause it was really fun to see him bond with the class. Can't wait to see how it progress~ Can't really say much since Kana hardly interact with others much.
Kudos!
11/6/2010 c21
3whitewhite
Can't wait to read more! This story is really good and I really wish to see how this story is going to develop for Shun, Kana & Uchi (Not to mention all the friendship bonding too!) I just love all these filler chapters
3whitewhiteCan't wait to read more! This story is really good and I really wish to see how this story is going to develop for Shun, Kana & Uchi (Not to mention all the friendship bonding too!) I just love all these filler chapters
9/23/2010 c21
14ChiakiAngel
It's really interesting, so I'm glad that I was able to read another chapter. I'll be going to Japan in July, so I'm really excited. :D
14ChiakiAngelIt's really interesting, so I'm glad that I was able to read another chapter. I'll be going to Japan in July, so I'm really excited. :D
9/19/2010 c20
5ThePersonWithTheReallyLongName
I'm excited for the next chapter, I'm really starting to wonder if she's going to develope a crush on shin.
5ThePersonWithTheReallyLongNameI'm excited for the next chapter, I'm really starting to wonder if she's going to develope a crush on shin.
9/16/2010 c20
10A Penned Desire
hey, this story is really good! I have to admit that you did a great job tying your character in with the story! :) Keep at it~ and you made me love Shun even more...i can just imagine him...sighs
10A Penned Desirehey, this story is really good! I have to admit that you did a great job tying your character in with the story! :) Keep at it~ and you made me love Shun even more...i can just imagine him...sighs
9/15/2010 c20
14ChiakiAngel
Well I hope that you had fun while in Asia. I'm glad that you updated and didn't leave this story. :D Can't wait for more! ^^
14ChiakiAngelWell I hope that you had fun while in Asia. I'm glad that you updated and didn't leave this story. :D Can't wait for more! ^^
