for This Dance3/12 c25 A Smiling Fire
Wow, this was written a long time ago...
Anyway! Thank you so much for being an awesome person in general and putting this story out there! Your lovi is friggin' perfect and so loveable, and Spain is...just...spain. Ahahahahaha
Thanks for being awesome,
A (fluffy) Smiling Fire
Wow, this was written a long time ago...
Anyway! Thank you so much for being an awesome person in general and putting this story out there! Your lovi is friggin' perfect and so loveable, and Spain is...just...spain. Ahahahahaha
Thanks for being awesome,
A (fluffy) Smiling Fire
2/24 c24 
19Epic F. Awesomesauce
** I WANT SOMEONE TO LOVE ME! *forever alone face* Oh well, I'll just have to go out and make someone love me now... ahahaha...
19Epic F. Awesomesauce** I WANT SOMEONE TO LOVE ME! *forever alone face* Oh well, I'll just have to go out and make someone love me now... ahahaha...
2/4 c24 21CreekingAwesome
Awww! So cute!
I love all of your Spamano fics so much!
There amazing! Best wishes in the future!:'))
21CreekingAwesomeAwww! So cute!
I love all of your Spamano fics so much!
There amazing! Best wishes in the future!:'))
1/28 c16 Guest
I am running around in circles squeeing on the inside right now.
Oh and 'D-did Antonio taste better than tomatoes? Blasphemy!'
Brilliance.
I am running around in circles squeeing on the inside right now.
Oh and 'D-did Antonio taste better than tomatoes? Blasphemy!'
Brilliance.
1/28 c11 Guest
I think France is a bit OOC here, just a bit too... Nasty? pervy? What's the word? It might be I'm just protective of him but I think this is a bit over the line.
I think France is a bit OOC here, just a bit too... Nasty? pervy? What's the word? It might be I'm just protective of him but I think this is a bit over the line.
1/28 c3 Guest
I love the way Spain's POV is written in this!
I love the way Spain's POV is written in this!
1/25 c6 yo
Dat wuz so HAWT
Dat wuz so HAWT
1/25 c1 yo
Apparently danceparter is one word.
Shoudnt you say 'a date to the ball' rather than 'dancepartner to the ball'?
Apparently danceparter is one word.
Shoudnt you say 'a date to the ball' rather than 'dancepartner to the ball'?
11/27/2012 c1 18ncalkins
XD That hadn't been a girl.
Dang Antonio break out the pirate or conqustador you man, Lovino thinks your a girl!
PS. Don't know about you I love possessive/Protective Spain. 3
18ncalkinsXD That hadn't been a girl.
Dang Antonio break out the pirate or conqustador you man, Lovino thinks your a girl!
PS. Don't know about you I love possessive/Protective Spain. 3
10/30/2012 c18 5Yumiko Koumori
This one was short, but still, I enjoyed it :D it was more fluff and you can never have too much fluff.
5Yumiko KoumoriThis one was short, but still, I enjoyed it :D it was more fluff and you can never have too much fluff.
10/29/2012 c16 Yumiko Koumori
Gah, haven't been here in ages! But I came back for one reason, and one reason only: your stories. I plan on finishing "This Dance" by the end of this week (which is a challenge on my part with all this college classes and Samhain, or Halloween, but it's a challenge I accept!) so, expect a review on each one of your lovely chapters!
Now, for the ACTUAL review...
I squeed at the end. It was all fluff and sweetness and lovey dovey and then BAM! Straight to the face with that last line. It makes me really want to continue reading to the next chapter!
Also, I compliment you on your English. You use very nice description words and have great grammar even though this isn't your first language. Where did you learn English?
Now.. I think I should go finish writing my chapters... My readers have been waiting for a year and a half and I feel like they have been waiting long enough!
Gah, haven't been here in ages! But I came back for one reason, and one reason only: your stories. I plan on finishing "This Dance" by the end of this week (which is a challenge on my part with all this college classes and Samhain, or Halloween, but it's a challenge I accept!) so, expect a review on each one of your lovely chapters!
Now, for the ACTUAL review...
I squeed at the end. It was all fluff and sweetness and lovey dovey and then BAM! Straight to the face with that last line. It makes me really want to continue reading to the next chapter!
Also, I compliment you on your English. You use very nice description words and have great grammar even though this isn't your first language. Where did you learn English?
Now.. I think I should go finish writing my chapters... My readers have been waiting for a year and a half and I feel like they have been waiting long enough!