for Yugioh! 5D's Tag Force 4: Misty Storyline9/7/2012 c9 Guest
make a new storyline try my name cillian darcy
make a new storyline try my name cillian darcy
8/5/2012 c6 Guest
well you better hurry
well you better hurry
2/26/2012 c7 
12Vader23A
For your first lemon, you did well. I was in the same boat as you when I wrote my first lemon so you're not alone.
I have a request. Can you do a fic featuring Akiza's storyline from Tag Force 4, please? Be cool to see.
12Vader23AFor your first lemon, you did well. I was in the same boat as you when I wrote my first lemon so you're not alone.
I have a request. Can you do a fic featuring Akiza's storyline from Tag Force 4, please? Be cool to see.
6/9/2011 c9 12Zero-Nightmare
Fluffy ending! ^^
I wonder where they got that from...
It's a really nice future indeed.
Looking forward to more of your works!
See ya!
12Zero-NightmareFluffy ending! ^^
I wonder where they got that from...
It's a really nice future indeed.
Looking forward to more of your works!
See ya!
6/9/2011 c2 Zero-Nightmare
Nice interlude for chris and Misty to get to know each other.
Foreshadowing...awesome!
Great chapter!
Nice interlude for chris and Misty to get to know each other.
Foreshadowing...awesome!
Great chapter!
6/9/2011 c8 Zero-Nightmare
Good way to leave an open ending.
Now that Misty knows the truth in the Crimson path, how will Chrios help her and the others? I'm looking forward to it.
Also looking forward to her Dark Signer storyline. Congratulations on beating Aki's!
See ya!
Good way to leave an open ending.
Now that Misty knows the truth in the Crimson path, how will Chrios help her and the others? I'm looking forward to it.
Also looking forward to her Dark Signer storyline. Congratulations on beating Aki's!
See ya!
6/9/2011 c7 Zero-Nightmare
Wow, nice setup!
It was good for your first, though I haven't wrote any of that kind yet ^^;
Good job!
Wow, nice setup!
It was good for your first, though I haven't wrote any of that kind yet ^^;
Good job!
6/2/2011 c6 Zero-Nightmare
Nice dream sequence! How much of it did Misty hear? aside the dancing part lol
Very touching momets with misty and the rain was a grerat touch!
Doesn't the 'devil in disguise' kinda applies to misty?
Alternate endings? Cool!
A sherry one? Nice idea!
Good luck completing Aki's storyline!
See ya!
Nice dream sequence! How much of it did Misty hear? aside the dancing part lol
Very touching momets with misty and the rain was a grerat touch!
Doesn't the 'devil in disguise' kinda applies to misty?
Alternate endings? Cool!
A sherry one? Nice idea!
Good luck completing Aki's storyline!
See ya!
5/27/2011 c5 Seiei
Hooray! Nice to see you're still working on this, I can't find anyone else with the tag force games stories on FanFiction.
Hooray! Nice to see you're still working on this, I can't find anyone else with the tag force games stories on FanFiction.
5/22/2011 c5 bryan102694
please hurry with the final chapter
please hurry with the final chapter
5/16/2011 c5 1warrior of six blades
Nice job on the story so far and I look forward to the duel scenes in chapters 4 and 5 when they come out.I have been waiting to see the future chapters to this story of yours and so far it good job in my books.I hope you keep up the good work and I wish you luck with your future chapters/stories.
1warrior of six bladesNice job on the story so far and I look forward to the duel scenes in chapters 4 and 5 when they come out.I have been waiting to see the future chapters to this story of yours and so far it good job in my books.I hope you keep up the good work and I wish you luck with your future chapters/stories.
5/16/2011 c5 14DarkScytheQueen
Thanks for the shout-out Chris! I appreciate it. I wouldn't mind some original character arcs here and there, breaks the predictable monotony of the scripted TF arcs. Maybe some arcs where TF chris is off on his own would b nice. I can pitch a few ideas here and there if you want. You know in Yusei's markerless arc, it's been mentioned that your character has a D-wheel? Maybe you can work on that!
14DarkScytheQueenThanks for the shout-out Chris! I appreciate it. I wouldn't mind some original character arcs here and there, breaks the predictable monotony of the scripted TF arcs. Maybe some arcs where TF chris is off on his own would b nice. I can pitch a few ideas here and there if you want. You know in Yusei's markerless arc, it's been mentioned that your character has a D-wheel? Maybe you can work on that!
5/16/2011 c4 darkshine2
Since this is based on the game i'll give you benifit of the doubt(After all the game personalitys are nothing like the anime). But if you make any storys based on the anime, do NOT make the same mistakes I mentioned.
Since this is based on the game i'll give you benifit of the doubt(After all the game personalitys are nothing like the anime). But if you make any storys based on the anime, do NOT make the same mistakes I mentioned.
5/16/2011 c4 darkshine
Okay Ruka is way too OCC. The way you had her treat Rua was unacceptable. This has been a constent problem on this site. Ruka does not act that mean to Rua(she acted like a jerk to him in this chapter)or disregard his feelings when it comes to trusting someone who they've only saw on tv. Also she doesn't run so fast that Ruas out of breath(Remember shes very frail). She also doesn't like to leave home, so it stands she would not leave. Second Rua would cooperate with Ruka in a tag duel(see episode 78).
Okay Ruka is way too OCC. The way you had her treat Rua was unacceptable. This has been a constent problem on this site. Ruka does not act that mean to Rua(she acted like a jerk to him in this chapter)or disregard his feelings when it comes to trusting someone who they've only saw on tv. Also she doesn't run so fast that Ruas out of breath(Remember shes very frail). She also doesn't like to leave home, so it stands she would not leave. Second Rua would cooperate with Ruka in a tag duel(see episode 78).
5/15/2011 c5 12Zero-Nightmare
Hi there!
Great Chapter! It had drama, fear and the hints of a romantic relationship! Misty to the rescue! lol
I feel honored! Thanks for the mention and no prob! I love this story!
Looking forweard to more and good luck beatin Aki and Misty's storylines!
See ya!
12Zero-NightmareHi there!
Great Chapter! It had drama, fear and the hints of a romantic relationship! Misty to the rescue! lol
I feel honored! Thanks for the mention and no prob! I love this story!
Looking forweard to more and good luck beatin Aki and Misty's storylines!
See ya!