for Next5/13/2011 c3 arrowriver
So you do exactly what I do, create your own Zelda character and send them off to different video games. Though my character is a Purple Haired, Blue Eyed Hylian Mage named Amelia. I'm still working on the details of her personality though.
So you do exactly what I do, create your own Zelda character and send them off to different video games. Though my character is a Purple Haired, Blue Eyed Hylian Mage named Amelia. I'm still working on the details of her personality though.
10/27/2010 c12 
11Jamester0091
Austailia is both continent, and the largest country in the continent, the islands surrounding it, such as new Guiney (I hope I spelled that right) are countries in the continent too.
I was thrown for a loop with that random script of writers, it made less sense than Monty Python.
As for the battles, I feel Crystal bearers could have had better fighting, I could see Layle compressing a goblins head, causing it to implode, or things like that.
As for the overall story, it's very well written, some typos exist, like present tense when there should be past tense, etc. but the plot and writing style are very well thought out.
And just for the record, I'm a fan of LinkxMidna too. ^_^
11Jamester0091Austailia is both continent, and the largest country in the continent, the islands surrounding it, such as new Guiney (I hope I spelled that right) are countries in the continent too.
I was thrown for a loop with that random script of writers, it made less sense than Monty Python.
As for the battles, I feel Crystal bearers could have had better fighting, I could see Layle compressing a goblins head, causing it to implode, or things like that.
As for the overall story, it's very well written, some typos exist, like present tense when there should be past tense, etc. but the plot and writing style are very well thought out.
And just for the record, I'm a fan of LinkxMidna too. ^_^
5/5/2010 c14 dragonfire396
Cool...
I'm no help on the writers block though.
Sorry!
Cool...
I'm no help on the writers block though.
Sorry!
4/30/2010 c13 it's meeeeeee
it is AWESOME!
it is AWESOME!
4/29/2010 c13 this is from me
Best story ever!
Best story ever!
4/28/2010 c13 TT
You should give Layle and Link some more credit. They are the Heros of their stories. Layle should need much more than just his powers too. He doesn't need a dagger either, nor chain mail. He should be funnier as well. Make it more like the real Layle, in other words.
You should give Layle and Link some more credit. They are the Heros of their stories. Layle should need much more than just his powers too. He doesn't need a dagger either, nor chain mail. He should be funnier as well. Make it more like the real Layle, in other words.
4/27/2010 c13 EXCITED
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4/26/2010 c9 Ghost
Okay!
Poor Keiss :(
Cool idea Vaigali was his uncle though.
Anyway, juast thought i'd stop and review.
Great story so far!
Okay!
Poor Keiss :(
Cool idea Vaigali was his uncle though.
Anyway, juast thought i'd stop and review.
Great story so far!
4/22/2010 c13 DoWnWiThSnApE
LOL! DANCING PURPLE ZEBRA!
LOL! DANCING PURPLE ZEBRA!
4/21/2010 c9 DoWnWiThSnApE
Poor Keiss!
Sorry i haven't reviewed before! i started reading today and i just couldn't stop to review!
GREAT STORY!
Poor Keiss!
Sorry i haven't reviewed before! i started reading today and i just couldn't stop to review!
GREAT STORY!
4/19/2010 c12 Guest
lol!
I have no idea whether Australia is a country or continent!
lol!
I have no idea whether Australia is a country or continent!
4/17/2010 c1 daydreamer0083
I saw you submit the review you idiot!
You're my best friend anyway, so I don't really care.
XD lol
I saw you submit the review you idiot!
You're my best friend anyway, so I don't really care.
XD lol
4/17/2010 c1 10Poetrywriter16
I never read ur story, muahahahahahaha,
but i'm at ur house and you told me to review, so ha
10Poetrywriter16I never read ur story, muahahahahahaha,
but i'm at ur house and you told me to review, so ha
4/15/2010 c1 3daydreamer0083
Thanks for telling me, dragonfire396.
That will be Star's last name.
Anyway, still looking for reviews!
3daydreamer0083Thanks for telling me, dragonfire396.
That will be Star's last name.
Anyway, still looking for reviews!
4/12/2010 c11 dragonfire396
Lycoris means twilight in Greek...
Just decided to share that.
Lycoris means twilight in Greek...
Just decided to share that.