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3/27/2011 c3 Lilith
Edward comes through this looking pretty cool; believing his girlfriend. Edward/Bella might be the pairing. I would not say it was humorous or romantic, and this is "Jasper bashing", not Jasper/Bella romantic pairing.

When Edward leaves Bella in the woods with no concern for her safety and Jasper rescues her; that is a Jasper Bella pairing and "Edward bashing".
9/16/2010 c2 8LookOutShe'sGottaKeyboard
love it please update soon:)
8/6/2010 c3 4jazzers
awwwww edward should find her then beat jasper up
6/10/2010 c3 8wendy1969
wow. different. thanx.
3/17/2010 c3 1hellocoldjesh
Okay this is great, I love it. You've done everything and freaking more! It definitely had humor and romance. The first chapter made me laugh - drunk Bella's funny! Also i had drama. Me being well, me 3 drama! =D thanks for the entry!

~Berblack x
3/16/2010 c3 butterfly02
such a good endingg :)
3/13/2010 c2 butterfly02
yay :) soo good
3/12/2010 c2 heliumhelium
doews way soon mean ur posting it right now?
3/11/2010 c1 hellocoldjesh
I love included all the words and made me laugh :]!

hope you continue in your story!
3/11/2010 c1 butterfly02
Soo good :) i love it
3/11/2010 c1 3WeirdAboutDreams
Unusal, different, but looking forward to seeing where its going

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