for Kanto: Revisited9/11/2010 c13 
2Skilvh and Shilvh
Skilvh speaking...
I want MOOOORRRRRREEEEEEE! I got ADDICTED! I want MOOOORRRRRREEEEEEE! I got ADDICTED!I want MOOOORRRRRREEEEEEE! I got ADDICTED!I want MOOOORRRRRREEEEEEE! I got ADDICTED!I want MOOOORRRRRREEEEEEE! I got ADDICTED!I want MOOOORRRRRREEEEEEE! I got ADDICTED!I want MOOOORRRRRREEEEEEE! I got ADDICTED!I want MOOOORRRRRREEEEEEE! I got ADDICTED!I want MOOOORRRRRREEEEEEE! I got ADDICTED! XXDDDD
Classic but nice~ ;) hehehe would love it if you continued this! KYAAAA! /
faithfully?
Skilvh
(p.s. current mood: Extremely Happy)
2Skilvh and ShilvhSkilvh speaking...
I want MOOOORRRRRREEEEEEE! I got ADDICTED! I want MOOOORRRRRREEEEEEE! I got ADDICTED!I want MOOOORRRRRREEEEEEE! I got ADDICTED!I want MOOOORRRRRREEEEEEE! I got ADDICTED!I want MOOOORRRRRREEEEEEE! I got ADDICTED!I want MOOOORRRRRREEEEEEE! I got ADDICTED!I want MOOOORRRRRREEEEEEE! I got ADDICTED!I want MOOOORRRRRREEEEEEE! I got ADDICTED!I want MOOOORRRRRREEEEEEE! I got ADDICTED! XXDDDD
Classic but nice~ ;) hehehe would love it if you continued this! KYAAAA! /
faithfully?
Skilvh
(p.s. current mood: Extremely Happy)
8/7/2010 c13 Skymory
I really like this more coolheaded Ash. Although Gengar battling for Sabrina was pretty expected. Keep up the good work.
I really like this more coolheaded Ash. Although Gengar battling for Sabrina was pretty expected. Keep up the good work.
7/21/2010 c13 3Brave orange blossom
Yay another chapter! Lol at Sabrina and her theatrics. Hmm, I wonder what Koga or is it Jasmine's gym is like now. Yay, Gengar (Ash's Haunter) made an appearance! Too bad it's on Sabrina's side. Houndour evolved quickly, he's strong too! Hmm, that's cool how you put what happened in the show so far in here. Ash's battle logic is awesome! So Houndoom's Fire Shield is like Counter Shield but Ash can use it to form Shield Smash. That's awesome! Lol at the back seat battlers. Pikachu's battle sure was quick! Yay Ash won! Well of course he won but still an amazing battle! I can't wait till your next chapter!
3Brave orange blossomYay another chapter! Lol at Sabrina and her theatrics. Hmm, I wonder what Koga or is it Jasmine's gym is like now. Yay, Gengar (Ash's Haunter) made an appearance! Too bad it's on Sabrina's side. Houndour evolved quickly, he's strong too! Hmm, that's cool how you put what happened in the show so far in here. Ash's battle logic is awesome! So Houndoom's Fire Shield is like Counter Shield but Ash can use it to form Shield Smash. That's awesome! Lol at the back seat battlers. Pikachu's battle sure was quick! Yay Ash won! Well of course he won but still an amazing battle! I can't wait till your next chapter!
7/16/2010 c12 2fernando11chiki
like the fic hope sabrina use gengar and alakazam hope there is romance in the fic ashxmisty please thats my fav couple since the show started like 12 years ago
2fernando11chikilike the fic hope sabrina use gengar and alakazam hope there is romance in the fic ashxmisty please thats my fav couple since the show started like 12 years ago
7/16/2010 c11 3Brave orange blossom
Aw, Brock is so nice to Max. Then again Max did need to know that information. That was kinda surprising seeing a Geodude in a contest battle. Yay, Misty won! Well at least Max learned something. I wonder if Max is going to utilize it in his gym battle. Lol at Max. "Gee whiz, thanks." Max said in a dry tone. So Max is gonna challenge Sabrina huh? I can't wait! I wonder if Max is gonna win! Great chapter as always!
3Brave orange blossomAw, Brock is so nice to Max. Then again Max did need to know that information. That was kinda surprising seeing a Geodude in a contest battle. Yay, Misty won! Well at least Max learned something. I wonder if Max is going to utilize it in his gym battle. Lol at Max. "Gee whiz, thanks." Max said in a dry tone. So Max is gonna challenge Sabrina huh? I can't wait! I wonder if Max is gonna win! Great chapter as always!
7/16/2010 c12 Brave orange blossom
Lol at Brock. Aw, poor Misty hearing Sabrina getting her name wrong. Wow word traveled fast of Ash's gym battle at Cerulean. Max needs to look at where the Gym leader or trainer is directing their attack at. Hmm, I wonder if Max knows of Ash's gym battle against Fantina. Again Max needs to look before jumping to conclusions. Wow Max won! He's pretty strong! Ash always wants to fight trainers at their best game. Pretty good chapter! I can't wait till Ash's gym battle!
Lol at Brock. Aw, poor Misty hearing Sabrina getting her name wrong. Wow word traveled fast of Ash's gym battle at Cerulean. Max needs to look at where the Gym leader or trainer is directing their attack at. Hmm, I wonder if Max knows of Ash's gym battle against Fantina. Again Max needs to look before jumping to conclusions. Wow Max won! He's pretty strong! Ash always wants to fight trainers at their best game. Pretty good chapter! I can't wait till Ash's gym battle!
7/16/2010 c4 xxxNam-niCxxx
Alright a Ash and Misty battle is comeing up! Mist has so many pokemon I wonder if they all evolved?
Off to read more more!
Alright a Ash and Misty battle is comeing up! Mist has so many pokemon I wonder if they all evolved?
Off to read more more!
7/15/2010 c1 xxxNam-niCxxx
Wow this story is really good. And I'm glad to see Ash wanting to become chapion.
This is better then my Max story...I envy
Wow this story is really good. And I'm glad to see Ash wanting to become chapion.
This is better then my Max story...I envy
7/7/2010 c10 3Brave orange blossom
Aw, Misty is nervous! That's awesome! Surskit evolved and Ash came up with a new combination attack. Wow that is a cool appeal. I wonder if Misty is just trying out contests or if she is gonna plan to enter the Grand Festival. Lol Jessie is there as well. Well at least they've given up on Pikachu. Hmm, I wonder what Max is doing there. I kinda expected he was going to pick Treeko as his starter. That battle was kinda quick. Shouldn't Max have won with his Sceptile since it's obviously trained well? I mean I know Misty is a gym leader and she probably trained Vulpix a lot but Sceptile should have more experience. Maybe it was just the advantage Vulpix had. I know Max is a kid and Ash is his idol but sending him out of the room in tears doesn't really sound like his character. Good chapter though! Can't wait till next one!
3Brave orange blossomAw, Misty is nervous! That's awesome! Surskit evolved and Ash came up with a new combination attack. Wow that is a cool appeal. I wonder if Misty is just trying out contests or if she is gonna plan to enter the Grand Festival. Lol Jessie is there as well. Well at least they've given up on Pikachu. Hmm, I wonder what Max is doing there. I kinda expected he was going to pick Treeko as his starter. That battle was kinda quick. Shouldn't Max have won with his Sceptile since it's obviously trained well? I mean I know Misty is a gym leader and she probably trained Vulpix a lot but Sceptile should have more experience. Maybe it was just the advantage Vulpix had. I know Max is a kid and Ash is his idol but sending him out of the room in tears doesn't really sound like his character. Good chapter though! Can't wait till next one!