for Impossible9/8/2012 c1 Tatgirl
Uh... it ended too early ;) but very cute and lmao at the bar scene! Very true to the characters personalities.
Uh... it ended too early ;) but very cute and lmao at the bar scene! Very true to the characters personalities.
11/15/2011 c1 Guest
**ing great
**ing great
11/13/2010 c1 
2Slythermint
aaaaaaahh! I just started playing this game, and I'm a male mage, and I DEFinitely think that he should fall for my character! hehe, this makes everything better. :)
2Slythermintaaaaaaahh! I just started playing this game, and I'm a male mage, and I DEFinitely think that he should fall for my character! hehe, this makes everything better. :)
11/8/2010 c1 anonymous
That was absolutely adorable.
Also? Drunken Alister is one of the funniest things ever.
"There's no girl. That girl I described earlier, well, she's a man."
"How did she manage that?"
That was absolutely adorable.
Also? Drunken Alister is one of the funniest things ever.
"There's no girl. That girl I described earlier, well, she's a man."
"How did she manage that?"
6/24/2010 c1 17Oliversgurl
I'm usually not one for a first person narrative, but omg. You had me at the first sentence.
I'm firmly convinced Ali is wedged deep in the closet. I mean seriously, Lampposts? xD
17OliversgurlI'm usually not one for a first person narrative, but omg. You had me at the first sentence.
I'm firmly convinced Ali is wedged deep in the closet. I mean seriously, Lampposts? xD
6/24/2010 c1 7Tumeo
"Your last coherent thought is that before this is all over, Lelianna will have gained a new story to tell, of perhaps the most impossible love of all."
That was a cute ending. :D
Dawww, how does everyone get Alistair character down so well, or any of the characters down, for that matter?
I struggle when it comes to writing predetirmined characters, Dragon Age or otherwise.
Hey, ever read This Glory will Fade or The Bones You Couldn't Break? They're excellent M!Warden/Alistair stories that I think you'd enjoy. Melfice's writing style is quite good.
7Tumeo"Your last coherent thought is that before this is all over, Lelianna will have gained a new story to tell, of perhaps the most impossible love of all."
That was a cute ending. :D
Dawww, how does everyone get Alistair character down so well, or any of the characters down, for that matter?
I struggle when it comes to writing predetirmined characters, Dragon Age or otherwise.
Hey, ever read This Glory will Fade or The Bones You Couldn't Break? They're excellent M!Warden/Alistair stories that I think you'd enjoy. Melfice's writing style is quite good.
4/20/2010 c1 3Sweet Wisteria
Aw, poor Warden.
But I almost died laughing at Alistair's "We like women."
Very cute! This Warden approves! (+10)
3Sweet WisteriaAw, poor Warden.
But I almost died laughing at Alistair's "We like women."
Very cute! This Warden approves! (+10)
3/27/2010 c1 Anon12
*totally giggled all the way through that* That was lovely
*totally giggled all the way through that* That was lovely
3/25/2010 c1 Jake
I NEVER comment on stories, but the ending was so adorable I couldn't help it. This was awesome! Thank you for gracing the internet with your epicness!
I NEVER comment on stories, but the ending was so adorable I couldn't help it. This was awesome! Thank you for gracing the internet with your epicness!
3/17/2010 c1 FurryGenesis
This is an absolutely brilliant beginning. I know you may not be planning on more, but I think it would be awesome. ^_^
This is an absolutely brilliant beginning. I know you may not be planning on more, but I think it would be awesome. ^_^