for Savior of the Night5/4 c41 Shady
This Is Grate! :D Are You Planing On Finishing It?
This Is Grate! :D Are You Planing On Finishing It?
4/23 c26 Guest
OMG
THEY DID IT
OMG CAT IS GOING CRAZY RIGHT NOW
dang girl, you can describe a kiss pretty well...
XD
OMG
THEY DID IT
OMG CAT IS GOING CRAZY RIGHT NOW
dang girl, you can describe a kiss pretty well...
XD
4/22 c24 Guest
Woo-hoo. I don't know... the Anna x Kurda thing was kind of a good idea. I want more. He he he he he.
Woo-hoo. I don't know... the Anna x Kurda thing was kind of a good idea. I want more. He he he he he.
4/22 c23 Guest
Woah! She almost kissed him! Honestly I wish HE kissed her and she wouldn't reject him at the first second, but like figure out what's going on 5 seconds after he's kissing her, and like, heve her run away blushing or something. But whatever. Still works.
Woah! She almost kissed him! Honestly I wish HE kissed her and she wouldn't reject him at the first second, but like figure out what's going on 5 seconds after he's kissing her, and like, heve her run away blushing or something. But whatever. Still works.
4/21 c21 Guest
Woah. He he he he meh heh heh...Mrahahahaha, C:{ Anna and Creps huh?
Woah. He he he he meh heh heh...Mrahahahaha, C:{ Anna and Creps huh?
4/21 c17 Guest
I can't believe it's been three years. No! Three years is such a long time! In three years Anna and Laten could have grown to like each other probably more than they should...but...but...No. Larten could only grow "fond" of her. At least he did something like 'I don't want to c her get hurt.' but still...three years. Dang that way too long. I'm kind of dissapioted at that but...whatever. It's not so bad. Sigh.
I can't believe it's been three years. No! Three years is such a long time! In three years Anna and Laten could have grown to like each other probably more than they should...but...but...No. Larten could only grow "fond" of her. At least he did something like 'I don't want to c her get hurt.' but still...three years. Dang that way too long. I'm kind of dissapioted at that but...whatever. It's not so bad. Sigh.
4/21 c15 Guest
I liked that part when Anna attacked Creps!
I liked that part when Anna attacked Creps!
1/12 c41 SGMorbidFoxFreak
wow... Just read the whole thing. This is a amazing story! I love the amount of detail you put into each chapter- and the plot twists! :D Please continue!
wow... Just read the whole thing. This is a amazing story! I love the amount of detail you put into each chapter- and the plot twists! :D Please continue!
11/9/2012 c37 Sanja M
My friend, I'm really enjoying your story. Anna's character, althought not completely extent of being in the smallest bit cliché, is very refreshing. I think you asumed L. Crepsley's character very good! I want to thank you for this story (last time I read it until 4 am... worth it), and want to ask you not to abandon it, please! Second thing, I respect your desition of not using specific lemon in your writing... It is something I observe happening a lot in fanfictions, bad or good alike, but in my opinion an erotic scene can become a part of the story (as scenes of different nature as well) specially when two characters struggle throught many chapters with their feelings for each other, feelings that include inevitably erotism. I tend to believe that many fanfic authors either skip the erotic content or exagerate it, risking in both cases to damage the continuity and wholeness of their story, probably because of their inexperience and shot age (I'm not necessarily refering to you, please don't feel displeased). What I mean is: do not feel obligated to write "lemon" (fanfiction readers can be very demanding in this topic) but do not feel scared of it either. I suposse you are young and that might be a part of your choosing of what not to write. There are very beautiful erotic tales and stories that are very far from being pornographic, and manage to give the sexual encounter a meaning. OK now I got too long. Thank you again for this interesting document. Keep writing and experimenting with letters. I'm sorry about my english: it's not my native language.
My friend, I'm really enjoying your story. Anna's character, althought not completely extent of being in the smallest bit cliché, is very refreshing. I think you asumed L. Crepsley's character very good! I want to thank you for this story (last time I read it until 4 am... worth it), and want to ask you not to abandon it, please! Second thing, I respect your desition of not using specific lemon in your writing... It is something I observe happening a lot in fanfictions, bad or good alike, but in my opinion an erotic scene can become a part of the story (as scenes of different nature as well) specially when two characters struggle throught many chapters with their feelings for each other, feelings that include inevitably erotism. I tend to believe that many fanfic authors either skip the erotic content or exagerate it, risking in both cases to damage the continuity and wholeness of their story, probably because of their inexperience and shot age (I'm not necessarily refering to you, please don't feel displeased). What I mean is: do not feel obligated to write "lemon" (fanfiction readers can be very demanding in this topic) but do not feel scared of it either. I suposse you are young and that might be a part of your choosing of what not to write. There are very beautiful erotic tales and stories that are very far from being pornographic, and manage to give the sexual encounter a meaning. OK now I got too long. Thank you again for this interesting document. Keep writing and experimenting with letters. I'm sorry about my english: it's not my native language.
9/7/2012 c41 
8xxFoxWritterxx
You need to write more! This is getting so good! I love the way you are going about writing this story! Please write more!
8xxFoxWritterxxYou need to write more! This is getting so good! I love the way you are going about writing this story! Please write more!
5/13/2012 c2 MoNsterinMe
GREAT CHAPTER I like how you put the cirque in. The characters are believable, the plot is unwinding in front of me and I'm staring to like Claire...(I think that's her name). Anna seems a little misguided to me, but that's just me.
Ill keep reading...
GREAT CHAPTER I like how you put the cirque in. The characters are believable, the plot is unwinding in front of me and I'm staring to like Claire...(I think that's her name). Anna seems a little misguided to me, but that's just me.
Ill keep reading...
5/13/2012 c1 MoNsterinMe
Sorry I don't normally review unverifed but I'm too lazy to log on...anyways just starting and so far its good. Ill keep reading thou.
Sorry I don't normally review unverifed but I'm too lazy to log on...anyways just starting and so far its good. Ill keep reading thou.