for It Is What It Is3/19/2011 c1 
11StarkidDreamer
Okay im going to give a little critique.
It seems you need a lot of work with your writing. You depend too much on talking to move the stoy along and more details would really add a lot to this fic.
Now for a little fangirl-ness
I LOVE where your going with this so far. Good job!
11StarkidDreamerOkay im going to give a little critique.
It seems you need a lot of work with your writing. You depend too much on talking to move the stoy along and more details would really add a lot to this fic.
Now for a little fangirl-ness
I LOVE where your going with this so far. Good job!
3/4/2011 c16 6Talis Ruadair
What a fitting end to an excellent adventure. All loose ends tied up into a pretty epilogue package.
6Talis RuadairWhat a fitting end to an excellent adventure. All loose ends tied up into a pretty epilogue package.
1/7/2011 c15 cherry
loved the whole story
loved the whole story
1/2/2011 c12 Keaydee
REVIEW POWER! I BESTOW THE POWER OF THE REVIEW ON YOU! HA! FLY, MY LITTLE REVIEW-PEEPS, FLY!
REVIEW POWER! I BESTOW THE POWER OF THE REVIEW ON YOU! HA! FLY, MY LITTLE REVIEW-PEEPS, FLY!
1/2/2011 c9 Keaydee
Well, I've been reading non-stop up until this chapter, because it's freakin' hard to stop. So... I'm fairly certain that I had ramen on Tuesday... Because tuesday night is one of the painful get-back-home-at-nine-after-three-hours-of-martial-arts nights and I require instant noodles on those nights... Lalalalalalalalalalalllalalal... I love to story and I enjoy reading the AN things you guys write more than what's probably healthy... Warren is so damn smexy... Lala
Well, I've been reading non-stop up until this chapter, because it's freakin' hard to stop. So... I'm fairly certain that I had ramen on Tuesday... Because tuesday night is one of the painful get-back-home-at-nine-after-three-hours-of-martial-arts nights and I require instant noodles on those nights... Lalalalalalalalalalalllalalal... I love to story and I enjoy reading the AN things you guys write more than what's probably healthy... Warren is so damn smexy... Lala
12/20/2010 c15 23Ski October
Hahaha...I have a friend like Layla xD
I probably would have committed that triple homicide...Just asyin'..
23Ski OctoberHahaha...I have a friend like Layla xD
I probably would have committed that triple homicide...Just asyin'..
12/20/2010 c15 6Talis Ruadair
Laughing...not what I expecited the guys in suits to be up to...captured Layla perfectly! I cannot wait to read the next chapter and see what they decide. Oh and I love sniker doodles if your giving out Christmas cookies!
6Talis RuadairLaughing...not what I expecited the guys in suits to be up to...captured Layla perfectly! I cannot wait to read the next chapter and see what they decide. Oh and I love sniker doodles if your giving out Christmas cookies!
12/16/2010 c14 1seremiaa
Kay this is more of an overall review for the story. So far so good. I'm also glad to see you updated recently. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more!
1seremiaaKay this is more of an overall review for the story. So far so good. I'm also glad to see you updated recently. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more!
10/26/2010 c1 2tofuskin21
i like nate, but elaine seems repressed and angry. but then again i'm still on the first chapter. does it get better?
2tofuskin21i like nate, but elaine seems repressed and angry. but then again i'm still on the first chapter. does it get better?
10/20/2010 c14 6Talis Ruadair
Okay so the drama begins. I really want to know what these agents are up to. They give me the creepy vibe. I cannot wait to read more. Though do they really have Nate? I mean their actions have got to be concidered illegal right? Whose pulling the strings? There are so many questions I need answered. *Begs* Please don't disappear for as long as you did last time. No more faking death or it will kill me!
6Talis RuadairOkay so the drama begins. I really want to know what these agents are up to. They give me the creepy vibe. I cannot wait to read more. Though do they really have Nate? I mean their actions have got to be concidered illegal right? Whose pulling the strings? There are so many questions I need answered. *Begs* Please don't disappear for as long as you did last time. No more faking death or it will kill me!