8/21/2012 c1 7SONGUE
Nice short story, though a little fast-paced, but sets a nice mood, good job.

12/18/2010 c1 26Eternal White Rose
im not sure if you noticed this...-giggles- in the second line where it said that the sky was turnin to dusk, instead of 'as', you accidentally put 'ass'...sorry, had to point that out, but otherwiswe, this little snip was really good, i loved it! :]