for Alteration3/11 c13 
6The Genesis Riddle
It's still beautiful every time I read it. And this I think is read number... I dunno somewhere in the thirties.
6The Genesis RiddleIt's still beautiful every time I read it. And this I think is read number... I dunno somewhere in the thirties.
1/9 c13 3maplepancakes99
Yay! I loved it, maddie and Gil are so cute! I was kind of worried that Alfred would end up alone and I was like aw poor al. But it's okay! I kind of wish that Antonio had been more involved in this, but that's not a big deal.
Anywho great story I loved it!
3maplepancakes99Yay! I loved it, maddie and Gil are so cute! I was kind of worried that Alfred would end up alone and I was like aw poor al. But it's okay! I kind of wish that Antonio had been more involved in this, but that's not a big deal.
Anywho great story I loved it!
8/5/2012 c13 10At Night We Rise
this was nice. I really like the ending and stuff. lol, I had to look up who hyong-soo was. I wish your chapters were a but longer but it's still good. I would say to get a beta reader to read over your stories. they can help you make it longer and correct what few errors there are. Great work :)
10At Night We Risethis was nice. I really like the ending and stuff. lol, I had to look up who hyong-soo was. I wish your chapters were a but longer but it's still good. I would say to get a beta reader to read over your stories. they can help you make it longer and correct what few errors there are. Great work :)
7/30/2012 c2 At Night We Rise
aws, this si so cute! Mon ami, this is amazing. I can't wait to read the ther chapters when I get the time. Great work. I would usually say use more detail to shw the emotions and whats really going on in the story and though there isn't a whole crap load of detail, It's so easy to fallow along how everything is going. (that's a compliment) Great work :)
aws, this si so cute! Mon ami, this is amazing. I can't wait to read the ther chapters when I get the time. Great work. I would usually say use more detail to shw the emotions and whats really going on in the story and though there isn't a whole crap load of detail, It's so easy to fallow along how everything is going. (that's a compliment) Great work :)
4/7/2012 c13 17MelancholyMadness
This was so cute! I feel so bad for Madeline though. That's so horrible. :( However, I totally like what you did with everyone. I loved how Gilbert was Francis' designated cock blocker. I also thought that Francis' and Anne's happy biding was sweet. I totally support FrUK, so YIPEE! I thought Alfred was the most adorable brother and I loved the North America twin's relationship. It was so cute and it made me happy to read it whenever they were cute and familial. Great job! Thanks do much!
-Ash
17MelancholyMadnessThis was so cute! I feel so bad for Madeline though. That's so horrible. :( However, I totally like what you did with everyone. I loved how Gilbert was Francis' designated cock blocker. I also thought that Francis' and Anne's happy biding was sweet. I totally support FrUK, so YIPEE! I thought Alfred was the most adorable brother and I loved the North America twin's relationship. It was so cute and it made me happy to read it whenever they were cute and familial. Great job! Thanks do much!
-Ash
8/7/2011 c13 1RinaaBeee28
Aaww! Such a sweet story! x3
Well, err, the last chapter was, okay, but the previous ones.. WERE AWESOME! especially chapters 11 and 12, heck, I love the rest of it! Thanks for doing this! :D
1RinaaBeee28Aaww! Such a sweet story! x3
Well, err, the last chapter was, okay, but the previous ones.. WERE AWESOME! especially chapters 11 and 12, heck, I love the rest of it! Thanks for doing this! :D
1/6/2011 c13 8Kairi-Yajuu2
*breathes in* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! IT'S OVER WAAAAAAH! I LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED /LOVED/ THIS STORY! I originally had mixed feelings for PruCan, but /DAMN/ did you ever change my mind. It's just...so cute and...and fluffy and...suspensfull and...daaaaaaaaaaa
-One Fangasm attack latter-
*sighs* Oh Alfred, honey, you're not gay... *pats his back* You're bi! ^w^
Current time: (Cause I know you want to know...) 3:39...still in the morning of the day before schools out... Xp My Speech teacher's gonna hate me. Now, if only I could find someone like Prussia. He reminds me so much of my brother that if I didn't know any better, I'd say I loved him myself. *ponders* Then again, all my friends -'xept 1- Say I'm Canada and some of the call my 'Mattie' '. . .' I'm rambling. Sorry! It's 3:41 in the morning! Can you blame me?
8Kairi-Yajuu2*breathes in* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! IT'S OVER WAAAAAAH! I LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED /LOVED/ THIS STORY! I originally had mixed feelings for PruCan, but /DAMN/ did you ever change my mind. It's just...so cute and...and fluffy and...suspensfull and...daaaaaaaaaaa
-One Fangasm attack latter-
*sighs* Oh Alfred, honey, you're not gay... *pats his back* You're bi! ^w^
Current time: (Cause I know you want to know...) 3:39...still in the morning of the day before schools out... Xp My Speech teacher's gonna hate me. Now, if only I could find someone like Prussia. He reminds me so much of my brother that if I didn't know any better, I'd say I loved him myself. *ponders* Then again, all my friends -'xept 1- Say I'm Canada and some of the call my 'Mattie' '. . .' I'm rambling. Sorry! It's 3:41 in the morning! Can you blame me?
1/6/2011 c10 Kairi-Yajuu2
*sigh* Well, here I am again. Unable to resist the awesomness(no pun intended) of your storyline and such - aaaand, lets not forget my reaction to Elizadhdudheijbdjw(Can't remember name... Rawr) calling France- I had to continue. I'm /totally/ going to regret this tomorrow -er...today- You know, it being the first day of school and all, but the story is so awesome! *starts crying* Normally, I'm very weary of Genderbending ('Specially with Hetalia) But you're such an awesome author that I decided to take the chance. Well, excuse me while I, quite possibly, finish this story. BTW: I Lol'd so hard when Gilbert 'Interupted' Germany and Italu xD
*sigh* Well, here I am again. Unable to resist the awesomness(no pun intended) of your storyline and such - aaaand, lets not forget my reaction to Elizadhdudheijbdjw(Can't remember name... Rawr) calling France- I had to continue. I'm /totally/ going to regret this tomorrow -er...today- You know, it being the first day of school and all, but the story is so awesome! *starts crying* Normally, I'm very weary of Genderbending ('Specially with Hetalia) But you're such an awesome author that I decided to take the chance. Well, excuse me while I, quite possibly, finish this story. BTW: I Lol'd so hard when Gilbert 'Interupted' Germany and Italu xD
1/6/2011 c7 Kairi-Yajuu2
Zomg LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLROFLLOLROFLMAO! That was the funniest damn way to end a chapter EVER! You are my new favorite Hetalia writer! No joke, your writing is amazing, along with your stories! I would so, totally read more, but it's like 2:38 in the morning amd my first day of schools tomorrow... Maybe one more chapter. XD
Zomg LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLROFLLOLROFLMAO! That was the funniest damn way to end a chapter EVER! You are my new favorite Hetalia writer! No joke, your writing is amazing, along with your stories! I would so, totally read more, but it's like 2:38 in the morning amd my first day of schools tomorrow... Maybe one more chapter. XD
10/25/2010 c13 79Sora Moto
Haha, this was great. Though I'm a bit disappointed that you didn't write in a sequence where Gil got to see Maddie play hockey. That would have been a riot. Dainty little Maddie body checking and slamming the other players into the wall, oh and Francis watching too cause god I can just picture his horrified face.
79Sora MotoHaha, this was great. Though I'm a bit disappointed that you didn't write in a sequence where Gil got to see Maddie play hockey. That would have been a riot. Dainty little Maddie body checking and slamming the other players into the wall, oh and Francis watching too cause god I can just picture his horrified face.
10/5/2010 c7 Homicidal Intent
Every time he thinks about how wrong it is that he likes Maddy, the voices in my head start singing 'My bestfriend's Girl' By the Cars!
Every time he thinks about how wrong it is that he likes Maddy, the voices in my head start singing 'My bestfriend's Girl' By the Cars!
10/4/2010 c13 42Ceri Moriarty
Adorable/amusing/awesome! The three A's of good fanfiction!
Loved the ending! (Like, wedding bells in the distance serious.) Hah, Francis and Arthur have always fought like a married couple…
42Ceri MoriartyAdorable/amusing/awesome! The three A's of good fanfiction!
Loved the ending! (Like, wedding bells in the distance serious.) Hah, Francis and Arthur have always fought like a married couple…
7/23/2010 c13 Mister.Madre
ilu w
No but srsly, that's one of the most adorable fics i've ever read
You should totes do a sequal for Hyung and Al
ilu w
No but srsly, that's one of the most adorable fics i've ever read
You should totes do a sequal for Hyung and Al