for To Be With You2/7 c15 Mayou-Chan
alright. I'm reading your story and I loooove it so much! You are a awesome writer, I love Neji, and I SWEAR I DIED when he said ''I love you.'' ! I was like : ''Awwwwsw se fucking sexyyyyy!'' Nejiten FTW !
alright. I'm reading your story and I loooove it so much! You are a awesome writer, I love Neji, and I SWEAR I DIED when he said ''I love you.'' ! I was like : ''Awwwwsw se fucking sexyyyyy!'' Nejiten FTW !
1/18 c28 
6Lili Bibi
Yes! I read and luv every chapter! The story flow was so amazing.
At the beginning, I thought you gonna make a sad ending but I'm glad you make it a happy verse! :')
I enjoy reading every words you wrote! Just pure perfection! :)
6Lili BibiYes! I read and luv every chapter! The story flow was so amazing.
At the beginning, I thought you gonna make a sad ending but I'm glad you make it a happy verse! :')
I enjoy reading every words you wrote! Just pure perfection! :)
12/31/2012 c5 Guest
I actually laughed out loud when Sakura and Ino pulled Tenten away as she was about to give into Neji while they were dancing, as any girl whose been dancing at a party before, whenever you find yourself in a sticky situation, your girls always come in and save your ass. lol I loved it.
I actually laughed out loud when Sakura and Ino pulled Tenten away as she was about to give into Neji while they were dancing, as any girl whose been dancing at a party before, whenever you find yourself in a sticky situation, your girls always come in and save your ass. lol I loved it.
12/28/2012 c28 15renzie17
You've written a nice story. The plot wasn't cliché, the lemons weren't out of place. I guess your only flaws were the characters were somewhat OOC (except for Sasuke. I loved how he was here) and Tenten's shift from badass to goodygoody was a bit too abrupt for a long story. Nonetheless, you did a job well done. I loved the epilogue and hope that everyone's learned their lessons by then. *laughs*
Oh, and SasuSaku! I, like, spazzed whrn they finally had a long interaction, I think on chapter 26. Hahaha!
Imma go read more of your stories (drowning myself in NejiTen fanfiction because of the sunken ship).
Love from,
renzie17
15renzie17You've written a nice story. The plot wasn't cliché, the lemons weren't out of place. I guess your only flaws were the characters were somewhat OOC (except for Sasuke. I loved how he was here) and Tenten's shift from badass to goodygoody was a bit too abrupt for a long story. Nonetheless, you did a job well done. I loved the epilogue and hope that everyone's learned their lessons by then. *laughs*
Oh, and SasuSaku! I, like, spazzed whrn they finally had a long interaction, I think on chapter 26. Hahaha!
Imma go read more of your stories (drowning myself in NejiTen fanfiction because of the sunken ship).
Love from,
renzie17
12/24/2012 c28 1Nicole3012
Hello!
I haven't reviewed any fics in a while, mostly due to procrastination and laziness. But I happened upon your fic today and, upon finishing it in one go, knew I HAD to review this! Immediately. It wasn't even optional.
This fic was unlike any other I've read- it really took me for a ride. A scary, addicting, this-is-hurting-me-I-need-to-stop-my-heart-is-breaking ride. Despite all the pain it put me through, I enjoyed this fic very much. It was beautiful. (:
I liked how real the story seemed. It wasn't full of unneccesary, awkward angst and fluff, and I appreciate that. That's really hard to come by.
Thank you for the enjoyable read, and I look forward to future fics from you!
Nicole
1Nicole3012Hello!
I haven't reviewed any fics in a while, mostly due to procrastination and laziness. But I happened upon your fic today and, upon finishing it in one go, knew I HAD to review this! Immediately. It wasn't even optional.
This fic was unlike any other I've read- it really took me for a ride. A scary, addicting, this-is-hurting-me-I-need-to-stop-my-heart-is-breaking ride. Despite all the pain it put me through, I enjoyed this fic very much. It was beautiful. (:
I liked how real the story seemed. It wasn't full of unneccesary, awkward angst and fluff, and I appreciate that. That's really hard to come by.
Thank you for the enjoyable read, and I look forward to future fics from you!
Nicole
7/19/2012 c10 Guest
Tenten is a little weak isn't she? I wish she would get to the point where she realizes that she is strong enough and does not need a man to complete her. But still I hope for Neji and Tenten to share pure love. I want a miracle to bring them both into the light. I want them to change. NEji and Tenten forever! Good Story so far!
Tenten is a little weak isn't she? I wish she would get to the point where she realizes that she is strong enough and does not need a man to complete her. But still I hope for Neji and Tenten to share pure love. I want a miracle to bring them both into the light. I want them to change. NEji and Tenten forever! Good Story so far!
7/19/2012 c1 Guest
Ok, I admit it. This story has definitely sparked my interest. Good introduction.
Ok, I admit it. This story has definitely sparked my interest. Good introduction.
5/8/2012 c28 Zombies Can Write
I spent all day reading this, and I'm in love - Great plot, amazing characters, and once I started reading, I couldn't stop until I was done. I've seen some of your other stories, but this is my favorite :3 Keep up the good work!
I spent all day reading this, and I'm in love - Great plot, amazing characters, and once I started reading, I couldn't stop until I was done. I've seen some of your other stories, but this is my favorite :3 Keep up the good work!
4/12/2012 c28 1ElleVipsilon
Beautiful story! really I enjoyed every piece of it, I read it quite quickly more and more curious to discover what'd happened next.. Neji he's by far the most interesting character in the story, he has such a troublesome past! Sasuke is the most IC I think, quite a bastard fond of revenge but in that little place called heart he still have human feelings. I never expected Neji losing verginity with Sakura :-/ actually I don't like her has character in the manga but in your story I couldn't stand her.. Even though also the pinkette has a sad background. Shikamaru and Temari, especially her, remind me of Junko and Kyousuke from Nana. They're the sane couple which keep on worrying around about the main characters! :) Oh of course I love Tenten, always had and will! She was amazing, I particularly enjoyed end around the ending when she rushed to Sasuke for explanation about Neji's departure. Well I think I said everything, please don't mind any of mine grammar fail ;) English's not my mothertongue
1ElleVipsilonBeautiful story! really I enjoyed every piece of it, I read it quite quickly more and more curious to discover what'd happened next.. Neji he's by far the most interesting character in the story, he has such a troublesome past! Sasuke is the most IC I think, quite a bastard fond of revenge but in that little place called heart he still have human feelings. I never expected Neji losing verginity with Sakura :-/ actually I don't like her has character in the manga but in your story I couldn't stand her.. Even though also the pinkette has a sad background. Shikamaru and Temari, especially her, remind me of Junko and Kyousuke from Nana. They're the sane couple which keep on worrying around about the main characters! :) Oh of course I love Tenten, always had and will! She was amazing, I particularly enjoyed end around the ending when she rushed to Sasuke for explanation about Neji's departure. Well I think I said everything, please don't mind any of mine grammar fail ;) English's not my mothertongue
4/11/2012 c28 2Ravengal101
LOL! I saw that proposal coming a mile away. But I never expected it to be done like that; but when u think about it, I don't see Neji doing it any other way. It really hurt to see Tenten go through what she did at the beginning of the fic (especially the part where she was 'intimate' with Sasuke) and Neji being such a douche; but it was refreshing to read a different kind of Neji and Tenten story for a while - one where it doesn't always have them completely and totally in love from start to finish. You showed that love is some COMPLICATED shit and that it doesn't always work out. This story was absolutely amazing and I wish that I could somehow manage to write even fractionally as well as u do. Thanks for the read and if you'll excuse me, I'm on my way to read every story you've ever written.
2Ravengal101LOL! I saw that proposal coming a mile away. But I never expected it to be done like that; but when u think about it, I don't see Neji doing it any other way. It really hurt to see Tenten go through what she did at the beginning of the fic (especially the part where she was 'intimate' with Sasuke) and Neji being such a douche; but it was refreshing to read a different kind of Neji and Tenten story for a while - one where it doesn't always have them completely and totally in love from start to finish. You showed that love is some COMPLICATED shit and that it doesn't always work out. This story was absolutely amazing and I wish that I could somehow manage to write even fractionally as well as u do. Thanks for the read and if you'll excuse me, I'm on my way to read every story you've ever written.
2/27/2012 c28 10dJk'.'DJBlossom
Ehhhhhh that was so deep and real and wow. NejiTen FTW! SasuSaku FTW! ShikaTema FTW! All my fave pairings. *tear*
Seriously though, the addiction, the emptiness, everything...you really did give the story depth and justice. Thank You. :)
10dJk'.'DJBlossomEhhhhhh that was so deep and real and wow. NejiTen FTW! SasuSaku FTW! ShikaTema FTW! All my fave pairings. *tear*
Seriously though, the addiction, the emptiness, everything...you really did give the story depth and justice. Thank You. :)