for Scheduling2/5/2012 c1
5Aryuri Choco
I love it, seriously... imagine the situations was funny and made me go crazy about the pair... I wonder if Blizzard would make it official between them (I have that hope when I saw Mida in Orgrimmar... and I love Vol'jin too *O*)
Keep it good, best wishes!
5Aryuri ChocoI love it, seriously... imagine the situations was funny and made me go crazy about the pair... I wonder if Blizzard would make it official between them (I have that hope when I saw Mida in Orgrimmar... and I love Vol'jin too *O*)
Keep it good, best wishes!
6/6/2010 c1
19Iwilo
This cracked me up so much. Fantastic story, great humor, and very well written. The only part I could see changed would be to add quotes or italics to the dialogue in the beginning and end, because that confused this numbskull very much :{ Also, I had trouble following the last paragraph.
I think you meant to say "make" in one part where you wrote "mack".
At any rate, keep up the good work. This story is in my favorites.
19IwiloThis cracked me up so much. Fantastic story, great humor, and very well written. The only part I could see changed would be to add quotes or italics to the dialogue in the beginning and end, because that confused this numbskull very much :{ Also, I had trouble following the last paragraph.
I think you meant to say "make" in one part where you wrote "mack".
At any rate, keep up the good work. This story is in my favorites.
4/17/2010 c1
5ruff1298
I was somewhat lost with the parts wherein I am supposed to imagine a Goblin telling me the rumors about Mida and Vol'jin being romantically involved over drinks/fruit juice (non-alcoholic or not, the Placebo effect has a firm vice-grip on me), but I was very amused with the parts wherein I am supposed to imagine the insanity and downright obsession of one leader of the Goblins with the leader of the Darkspear Trolls, particularly with imagining poorly drawn sketches of robotic sharks, faulty jet-packs, and of course a gigantic mass of sparking wires connected to a vast tank of rocket fuel left open faced and right behind her Trade Princess and her assistant(?), Bowie, in the car they were riding in at the moment. The Shrine of Vol'jin and the Personal Zeppelin with the very appropriate name were nice touches, too.
Overall, the story, minus the Bar Story bits, was very nice to read particularly with its very simple and easy to follow style. Some more expansion of the madness like, say, Cairne Bloodhoof, being the Old and Wise one that he is, making passing comments that may or may not be his clear dislike of the PDA happening between the two, but the story is done, so I'll leave it at that.
5ruff1298I was somewhat lost with the parts wherein I am supposed to imagine a Goblin telling me the rumors about Mida and Vol'jin being romantically involved over drinks/fruit juice (non-alcoholic or not, the Placebo effect has a firm vice-grip on me), but I was very amused with the parts wherein I am supposed to imagine the insanity and downright obsession of one leader of the Goblins with the leader of the Darkspear Trolls, particularly with imagining poorly drawn sketches of robotic sharks, faulty jet-packs, and of course a gigantic mass of sparking wires connected to a vast tank of rocket fuel left open faced and right behind her Trade Princess and her assistant(?), Bowie, in the car they were riding in at the moment. The Shrine of Vol'jin and the Personal Zeppelin with the very appropriate name were nice touches, too.
Overall, the story, minus the Bar Story bits, was very nice to read particularly with its very simple and easy to follow style. Some more expansion of the madness like, say, Cairne Bloodhoof, being the Old and Wise one that he is, making passing comments that may or may not be his clear dislike of the PDA happening between the two, but the story is done, so I'll leave it at that.
4/5/2010 c1 Whimsi
I couldn't help but laugh when I read this story. It was just so much fun to imagine. I can definitely see Mida as a goblin leader, and Vol'jin is my favorite Horde leader. Yeah, I don't think the trolls or goblins will be too thrilled with Garrosh kicking their races out of Orgrimmar, and neither am I, so I can see them getting some entertainment at Garrosh's expense. Overall, an entertaining read and one I very much enjoyed.
I couldn't help but laugh when I read this story. It was just so much fun to imagine. I can definitely see Mida as a goblin leader, and Vol'jin is my favorite Horde leader. Yeah, I don't think the trolls or goblins will be too thrilled with Garrosh kicking their races out of Orgrimmar, and neither am I, so I can see them getting some entertainment at Garrosh's expense. Overall, an entertaining read and one I very much enjoyed.
