for Museum Trip4/15/2010 c1 Jess
KEEP IT GOING D= I thought that was awesome! T_T
KEEP IT GOING D= I thought that was awesome! T_T
4/11/2010 c1 cmsrawrr
Oohh! I love this show! :D
Hopefully it won't get annoying like Icarly though.
More more more more.3
Oohh! I love this show! :D
Hopefully it won't get annoying like Icarly though.
More more more more.3
4/11/2010 c1 TAYLA
I WISH U WROTE A TORI/ANDRE FIC
I WISH U WROTE A TORI/ANDRE FIC
4/8/2010 c1 Sarah
Love the story!... And Its so awesome that u r the first writer for victorious! Go u!
Love the story!... And Its so awesome that u r the first writer for victorious! Go u!
4/7/2010 c1 ABC
Congrats, ur the first writer for victorious. Nice start to your story. Hopefully the victorious fanfic community will continue to grow.
Congrats, ur the first writer for victorious. Nice start to your story. Hopefully the victorious fanfic community will continue to grow.
4/6/2010 c1 too hyper for sugar
Hey there! I have a couple of things I want to point out - you might want to use words like a, the, an, and stuff like that because you're leaving those out. Also, you switched past and present tenses once - said/says and so on. But aside from that, you're doing pretty well! Can't wait to see the rest of it!
Hey there! I have a couple of things I want to point out - you might want to use words like a, the, an, and stuff like that because you're leaving those out. Also, you switched past and present tenses once - said/says and so on. But aside from that, you're doing pretty well! Can't wait to see the rest of it!
4/6/2010 c1 
24K9GM3
Eh... The narrative's not great, but it's a decent plot and you seem to have the characters pinned down well, so I'm looking forward to a second chapter.
24K9GM3Eh... The narrative's not great, but it's a decent plot and you seem to have the characters pinned down well, so I'm looking forward to a second chapter.
4/6/2010 c1 Eva Angel
Woot! First story for Victorious!
Like you said it is very short, plus there are a few typos. To be honest it's a little confusing...You seem to be saying things rather then describing them. Try to describe everything that is going on a little better.
Otherwise it was cute. ;)
Woot! First story for Victorious!
Like you said it is very short, plus there are a few typos. To be honest it's a little confusing...You seem to be saying things rather then describing them. Try to describe everything that is going on a little better.
Otherwise it was cute. ;)