for Sins of the Father4/22 c37 
2GeeWrites
I finished this 3 hours ago and closed it down and attempted to get on with my day-to-day life but alas here I am again and I just had to review. Your writing was so layered and so beautiful, I genuinely think this has made its way on to my list of favourites. I read a ridiculous amount of fanfiction and a lot of them tend to fall short on certain aspects so I was really happy to see that this didn't. In all honesty, the ending was a bit abrupt for me, and I think the story could have held on just a little bit longer, only a paragraph or so but having said that, I think the way you chose to end it was good and I enjoyed it. I have already gushed about it on Twitter and I will be doing the same on Tumblr because I'm a sucker for angsty fics that include more than just smut and a loosely put together plot. The angst was mixed well with a healthy dose of humour, and the inclusion of music made this even better than it would have been without it. In fact, it was during their talks about music that I fell in love with them as a couple. Anyway, I could go on forever but thank you for writing this and I hope you're having a great day! It really is a beautiful story.
2GeeWritesI finished this 3 hours ago and closed it down and attempted to get on with my day-to-day life but alas here I am again and I just had to review. Your writing was so layered and so beautiful, I genuinely think this has made its way on to my list of favourites. I read a ridiculous amount of fanfiction and a lot of them tend to fall short on certain aspects so I was really happy to see that this didn't. In all honesty, the ending was a bit abrupt for me, and I think the story could have held on just a little bit longer, only a paragraph or so but having said that, I think the way you chose to end it was good and I enjoyed it. I have already gushed about it on Twitter and I will be doing the same on Tumblr because I'm a sucker for angsty fics that include more than just smut and a loosely put together plot. The angst was mixed well with a healthy dose of humour, and the inclusion of music made this even better than it would have been without it. In fact, it was during their talks about music that I fell in love with them as a couple. Anyway, I could go on forever but thank you for writing this and I hope you're having a great day! It really is a beautiful story.
3/1 c37 1853kaz
Thanks for sharing.. And for persisting too! Hope it felt SO good to finally reach that point :)
Thanks for sharing.. And for persisting too! Hope it felt SO good to finally reach that point :)
2/28 c22 1853kaz
That was a surprise move! Course, they won't be there when the rescue squad arrives :)
That was a surprise move! Course, they won't be there when the rescue squad arrives :)
2/27 c18 1853kaz
Progress! I must admit, the B&E chapters are my favourite - so predictable, I'm sorry! ;)
Progress! I must admit, the B&E chapters are my favourite - so predictable, I'm sorry! ;)
2/26 c11 1853kaz
No need to reply! I'm enjoying the story as it is, certainly enough to keep reading :)
No need to reply! I'm enjoying the story as it is, certainly enough to keep reading :)
2/26 c9 1853kaz
So far we've only had a hint of edward's back story.. But it sounds really interesting! :)
So far we've only had a hint of edward's back story.. But it sounds really interesting! :)