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4/6/2010 c1 19chartwilightmom
Wow, now that was a breakup letter.
4/6/2010 c2 8bookjunkie1975
I love a spunky Bella. It seems that we're entering the story at a huge shifting point in Bella's life...like this is where she decides to walk the talk instead of compromising herself...and I'm thinking that maybe Edward, when we meet him, is finding himself at the same point...I mean an entire record of T&A songs sounds like someone bowing to label pressure to me.

I have to tell you that I'm really excited about this story...I can't wait to see what happens when E & B meet. :)
4/6/2010 c2 Luvntwilight
I love what you have done with the charaters and can't wait to read more.
4/6/2010 c2 1cravingtwilight
Demetri moved down the counter, refilling drinks and handing out napkins like he was the guardian angel of cholesterol.-hahaha
4/6/2010 c2 kms1979
Interesting chapter. Some questions answered, others still to come. Excited to see where this goes!
4/6/2010 c2 Hadley Hemingway
very cool story, so far - looking forward to reading more as I always enjoy your writing!
4/6/2010 c2 lisazj
Sh*t, this sounds like a pretty tight place. So what is Bella going to do? Find another way to rag on Althair? I wonder if that would bring Edward running to tell her what a b*tch she was? That sounds like entertainment, exactly what Bella doesn't want to write.

Cna't wait to find out what's next. So far I'm really enjoying the story bethaboo!
4/6/2010 c1 Luvntwilight
OMG Bella is so eloquent. I Love a fiesty Bella.
4/6/2010 c1 kms1979
Off to a great start! Looking forward to this one.
4/6/2010 c1 lisazj
Wow, this sounds interesting. And an Irish punk rocker Edward Cullen. Oh yeah baby, I'm in!

Someone rec'd this on the High Anxiety thread on Twilighted. I think I'm gonna love it!
4/6/2010 c2 jimemon
I like the setting with both girls struggling to make ends meet, great chapter!
4/6/2010 c2 Eliph95
oh i just loved the last chp! ahahah i was laughing like crazy! was althair the band from chp 1? :) i cant wait to see how this story develops..oh and i found edward's choice of an album cover to be hilarious..:P
4/6/2010 c2 beckybrandon
I have not read this story yet but I know it will be great, just like all your other stories. I cannot wait to start reading your new story. :)
4/6/2010 c2 atmybest
I'm caught up in bella! I love her character.
4/6/2010 c1 lorit
Very excited about this!
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