for Wings of the Butterfly3/22 c3 Nightraze
Really great fic so far! I'm a bit confused how Kallen didn't realize that Lelouch went to the same school as her, I mean he was wearing his school uniform in the ghetto, right? i don't remember you saying he was wearing anything different at least.
Really great fic so far! I'm a bit confused how Kallen didn't realize that Lelouch went to the same school as her, I mean he was wearing his school uniform in the ghetto, right? i don't remember you saying he was wearing anything different at least.
3/22 c1 Nightraze
Interesting beginning! I really like the look of how this is going! The only problem I had was when Lelouch yelled out his real name, Kallen didn't react to it at all and she was right next to him, right? I suppose she could just not be paying attention to her surroundings, but that would be a pretty stupid thing to do in the circumstance and missing something like that is just unlikely even if she wasn't really paying attention.
Anyway, I'm going to continue reading now!
Interesting beginning! I really like the look of how this is going! The only problem I had was when Lelouch yelled out his real name, Kallen didn't react to it at all and she was right next to him, right? I suppose she could just not be paying attention to her surroundings, but that would be a pretty stupid thing to do in the circumstance and missing something like that is just unlikely even if she wasn't really paying attention.
Anyway, I'm going to continue reading now!
12/5/2012 c12 
1BakaBlue
Not bad, but lately I was wondering if you were going to continue your previous Code Geass story.
1BakaBlueNot bad, but lately I was wondering if you were going to continue your previous Code Geass story.
10/7/2012 c11 10JDH1080
Man this is really good, when are you going to update? I mean seriously how can you leave such a pile of gold laying to the side like this?
10JDH1080Man this is really good, when are you going to update? I mean seriously how can you leave such a pile of gold laying to the side like this?
10/6/2012 c5 JDH1080
Man this is an amazing chapter. Seriously you captured Lelouch very well, and made his plan as complex and as flawless as possible. Seriously this is an amazing story.
It just saddens me to see that it hasn't been updated in so long. Please don't give up on this story. If i had to gague all of the Code geass Lelouch/Kallen stories that I've read on this site this is most likely in the top three no joke.
Man this is an amazing chapter. Seriously you captured Lelouch very well, and made his plan as complex and as flawless as possible. Seriously this is an amazing story.
It just saddens me to see that it hasn't been updated in so long. Please don't give up on this story. If i had to gague all of the Code geass Lelouch/Kallen stories that I've read on this site this is most likely in the top three no joke.
9/3/2012 c12 ImmortalSheep
Behold my terrible english!
I just read all 12 chapters and I have to say, the story is interesting and and the the way you write Kallens character is amazing but, it says the last update was 09-09-10 so im guessing you won't be uploading more, witch is a shame, because this is by far one of the best Code Geass fanfic I have read so far.
Behold my terrible english!
I just read all 12 chapters and I have to say, the story is interesting and and the the way you write Kallens character is amazing but, it says the last update was 09-09-10 so im guessing you won't be uploading more, witch is a shame, because this is by far one of the best Code Geass fanfic I have read so far.
8/20/2012 c12 Ppsh
Hm, quite a good story you've got here. I always like the divergences where Kallen plays more of a central role - I just like her character, and Lelouch X Kallen is definitely the best pairing (though C.C isn't bad).
Personally I find the events like at the end of this chapter a bit annoying; these unbelievable coincidences that just happen to create a bunch of drama. Walking in on C.C half naked is fine considering she's always half-naked and always in his room, but Shirley? Who even knows where she lives.
Anyway, looking forward to more.
Hm, quite a good story you've got here. I always like the divergences where Kallen plays more of a central role - I just like her character, and Lelouch X Kallen is definitely the best pairing (though C.C isn't bad).
Personally I find the events like at the end of this chapter a bit annoying; these unbelievable coincidences that just happen to create a bunch of drama. Walking in on C.C half naked is fine considering she's always half-naked and always in his room, but Shirley? Who even knows where she lives.
Anyway, looking forward to more.
5/21/2012 c12 aahoo
hii..
this story has become much better
and it would best if you can continue write about it..
hehehe.. like the plot and the story..
hee if you could, please update it as soon as you can
hehehe.. just waiting for da best part..
tq
hii..
this story has become much better
and it would best if you can continue write about it..
hehehe.. like the plot and the story..
hee if you could, please update it as soon as you can
hehehe.. just waiting for da best part..
tq
5/15/2012 c12 SpaceKow
This story is fantastic, especially with the plot and the drama! If you're still there I really, really hope that you continue this story! It's not often that you see a story as great as this. P.S. hope Shirley gets her ass kicked...honestly I hate that girl.
This story is fantastic, especially with the plot and the drama! If you're still there I really, really hope that you continue this story! It's not often that you see a story as great as this. P.S. hope Shirley gets her ass kicked...honestly I hate that girl.
4/11/2012 c12 1falconrukichi
Ah! such a great story! i love how you create kalulu's character. even how their relationship moved. i dunno how to say but, kinda disappointed *really disappointed TT.TT* when the great story was discontinue anymore! hope, 1 day, if you plan to continue it again, please alert me! for me KALULU never die!~
1falconrukichiAh! such a great story! i love how you create kalulu's character. even how their relationship moved. i dunno how to say but, kinda disappointed *really disappointed TT.TT* when the great story was discontinue anymore! hope, 1 day, if you plan to continue it again, please alert me! for me KALULU never die!~
2/20/2012 c12 5Goldeath
I... love... this... STORY! Please continue, 'cause I don't think I can live without this story for much longer!
5GoldeathI... love... this... STORY! Please continue, 'cause I don't think I can live without this story for much longer!
10/29/2011 c12 CJ4675
Love the story! Can only hope that you decide to continue the story at some point as I cant wait to see what comes next
Love the story! Can only hope that you decide to continue the story at some point as I cant wait to see what comes next