for Wild Pixie2/15/2012 c1 Ranmaleopard
this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!
this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!
9/25/2011 c3 Bad
Cool please update, i think the changes due to a stay with the Amazones are good, becouse you can not live and train n a female dominated tribe without hitting the warriors (female)
Cool please update, i think the changes due to a stay with the Amazones are good, becouse you can not live and train n a female dominated tribe without hitting the warriors (female)
8/31/2011 c3 
3Shinzochi
GREAT story, and i am laughing my ass off at Akane getting hers , i look forward to the next chapter (^_^)
3ShinzochiGREAT story, and i am laughing my ass off at Akane getting hers , i look forward to the next chapter (^_^)
3/8/2011 c3 Ranmayamabushi
Great story so far, so many fn things possible with it! I hope to see more soon
Great story so far, so many fn things possible with it! I hope to see more soon
11/12/2010 c3 3tuatara
Solid on a technical level, but that's about the only positive thing I can say about it. Honestly, this is tired, tired, tired material. There's nothing genuinely interesting offered here. More of the old "my version of Ranma doesn't take any crap from anyone"? Check. "Akane's a psycho hellbeast"? Check. "Ranma shares his head with the spirit of the spring"? Check. "My version of Ranma's smarter and more articulate"? Check. And so on. The Akane-bashing in particular is amped up to incredibly grating and, frankly, preposterous levels. Sigh.
I always go into a story hoping for the best. I'm never looking to be disappointed. Why the hell would I? My finite time is too valuable to me to spend it willingly on things that frustrate and/or depress me. I'm always prepared to love a story. Unfortunately, I can't say I loved anything about this one.
3tuataraSolid on a technical level, but that's about the only positive thing I can say about it. Honestly, this is tired, tired, tired material. There's nothing genuinely interesting offered here. More of the old "my version of Ranma doesn't take any crap from anyone"? Check. "Akane's a psycho hellbeast"? Check. "Ranma shares his head with the spirit of the spring"? Check. "My version of Ranma's smarter and more articulate"? Check. And so on. The Akane-bashing in particular is amped up to incredibly grating and, frankly, preposterous levels. Sigh.
I always go into a story hoping for the best. I'm never looking to be disappointed. Why the hell would I? My finite time is too valuable to me to spend it willingly on things that frustrate and/or depress me. I'm always prepared to love a story. Unfortunately, I can't say I loved anything about this one.
10/6/2010 c3 4Jess D
This story's pretty good. I remember watching the Monster Rancher anime a few years back and I really liked it. So, when I came across this story crossing both Ranma and MR, I felt it was well worth the time to at least read the first chapter. Damn, am I ever glad I did, its well thought out, written and the characters are greatly developed. Oh sure, I think Akane's a complete psycho at this point, but its understandable once you explained your reasons.
However, I do think that the trouble with Kuno probably started sooner, by a few weeks, but Ranma's appearence in the canon series curbed her from going too far off the deep end. Though, since he appeared much later, and in the care of the Amazons, things were bound to change for both the better and worse. For instance, Ranma doesn't appear to be plagued too badly by his dad's quirks and purposely placed weaknesses. After all, if he wanted to live of his son's lively-hood in the future, what better way to get that done then to have his son submissive to a daughter-in-law who'd control him as easily as he manipulated her with her emotions; hence Akane was picked. At least that's my belief.
Anyways, I digress. If you are gonna bring some of his other rivals in the picture, then I hope with the changes Pixie has brought, others have changed for the better as well. Don't know about Mousse, but at least I hope Shampoo is seen as more of an Amazon "sister" to Ranma than a potential mate. But that remains to be seen; and as for Ryoga, if Ranma's curse has been changed then I got a suggestion for the lost boy's as well. Say that Big Blue ran back in as Pixie was blown into the machine that transported her to the Ranma-verse. Well... what if Big Blue came along for the ride as well and accidentally went with her to Jusenkyo.
How would things really change when Ryoga is not only not a small pig, but a golem whose the complete opposite of who he is. Someone, who like Pixie has done for Ranma, will help him see the truth of the world around him and bring him out of his pigheaded ways. And not only that, would he be able to fight Ranma all out as he normally would if Big Blue recognized Pixie and whose friendship with her would Ryoga back in a fight. Even stop him completely in his tracks, how would the Lost Boy feel when his own body betrays him and won't let him punish Ranma as he deems fit.
What do you think?
Anyways, keep up the fantastic story going and update soon. You have one hell of a story here, and I look forward to continue reading it in the future. Until then, later.
4Jess DThis story's pretty good. I remember watching the Monster Rancher anime a few years back and I really liked it. So, when I came across this story crossing both Ranma and MR, I felt it was well worth the time to at least read the first chapter. Damn, am I ever glad I did, its well thought out, written and the characters are greatly developed. Oh sure, I think Akane's a complete psycho at this point, but its understandable once you explained your reasons.
However, I do think that the trouble with Kuno probably started sooner, by a few weeks, but Ranma's appearence in the canon series curbed her from going too far off the deep end. Though, since he appeared much later, and in the care of the Amazons, things were bound to change for both the better and worse. For instance, Ranma doesn't appear to be plagued too badly by his dad's quirks and purposely placed weaknesses. After all, if he wanted to live of his son's lively-hood in the future, what better way to get that done then to have his son submissive to a daughter-in-law who'd control him as easily as he manipulated her with her emotions; hence Akane was picked. At least that's my belief.
Anyways, I digress. If you are gonna bring some of his other rivals in the picture, then I hope with the changes Pixie has brought, others have changed for the better as well. Don't know about Mousse, but at least I hope Shampoo is seen as more of an Amazon "sister" to Ranma than a potential mate. But that remains to be seen; and as for Ryoga, if Ranma's curse has been changed then I got a suggestion for the lost boy's as well. Say that Big Blue ran back in as Pixie was blown into the machine that transported her to the Ranma-verse. Well... what if Big Blue came along for the ride as well and accidentally went with her to Jusenkyo.
How would things really change when Ryoga is not only not a small pig, but a golem whose the complete opposite of who he is. Someone, who like Pixie has done for Ranma, will help him see the truth of the world around him and bring him out of his pigheaded ways. And not only that, would he be able to fight Ranma all out as he normally would if Big Blue recognized Pixie and whose friendship with her would Ryoga back in a fight. Even stop him completely in his tracks, how would the Lost Boy feel when his own body betrays him and won't let him punish Ranma as he deems fit.
What do you think?
Anyways, keep up the fantastic story going and update soon. You have one hell of a story here, and I look forward to continue reading it in the future. Until then, later.
9/6/2010 c3 Dark Vizard447
AWESOME STORY! I think Ranma should just forget about the pact and get the hell away from those psychpathic Tendos and Genma.
AWESOME STORY! I think Ranma should just forget about the pact and get the hell away from those psychpathic Tendos and Genma.
8/19/2010 c3 Spokavriel
Not bad. There were a few typos like one place where you have Akane and Akane. Which one of those should have been Nabiki?
It could have been expanded on but it was well presented without having to rehash too much of the Kuno nonsense.
Only problem is we are going to have to hear something about it in the next chapter otherwise the reason the Hentai horde attacked is a mystery that should be easily solved but left unsatisfactorily unrepresented.
Not bad. There were a few typos like one place where you have Akane and Akane. Which one of those should have been Nabiki?
It could have been expanded on but it was well presented without having to rehash too much of the Kuno nonsense.
Only problem is we are going to have to hear something about it in the next chapter otherwise the reason the Hentai horde attacked is a mystery that should be easily solved but left unsatisfactorily unrepresented.