for Wild Pixie4/22/2010 c2 Daniel Thomas Stack
Nice continuation. Things are going differently but Ranma hasn't been lost because of it. I wonder is tomorrow a school day or did they arrive just before the weekend?
So Ranma agreed to timeshare control based on the body. That actually might be useful in class seeing how I doubt Pixie is prone to sleeping when someone is trying to give her information.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Daniel Thomas Stack
AKA Spokavriel @ yahoo. com
Nice continuation. Things are going differently but Ranma hasn't been lost because of it. I wonder is tomorrow a school day or did they arrive just before the weekend?
So Ranma agreed to timeshare control based on the body. That actually might be useful in class seeing how I doubt Pixie is prone to sleeping when someone is trying to give her information.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Daniel Thomas Stack
AKA Spokavriel @ yahoo. com
4/22/2010 c2 
6Riniko22
I like the direction the story is going with a Ranma that has a great backbone. Never liked the way that his father and the Tendo's ran over him that first day and expect that the next day at school will be greatly changed too. For one, Nabiki can't sell the information of Ranma being Akane's fiancée. While, I concede that she can sell the information that Ranma is engaged to one of the Tendo sisters and let it go at that, as Kuno would jump to the conclusion that he is engaged to Akane. Looking forward to the next chapter.
6Riniko22I like the direction the story is going with a Ranma that has a great backbone. Never liked the way that his father and the Tendo's ran over him that first day and expect that the next day at school will be greatly changed too. For one, Nabiki can't sell the information of Ranma being Akane's fiancée. While, I concede that she can sell the information that Ranma is engaged to one of the Tendo sisters and let it go at that, as Kuno would jump to the conclusion that he is engaged to Akane. Looking forward to the next chapter.
4/22/2010 c2 Fenir
This is more or less a reply to Daniel thomas Stack's review for those interested. Anyway this is called fanfiction for a reason people and in it the author is effectively god capable of having the characters do whatever he/she wants whenever he/she wants them to whether we like it or not and his/her discion is effectively law. Take this instance for example if it will help you come to grasp this concept, it was stated that it took them about a month after the incident to get to Nerima and in this fic Genma is to be effectively imprisoned for that time frame and then can they can travel back at their own leisure. Simple solution, they got to Jusenkyo early idiot-.-
Anyway now that thats out of the way all in all good fic and Kepp up the good work.
This is more or less a reply to Daniel thomas Stack's review for those interested. Anyway this is called fanfiction for a reason people and in it the author is effectively god capable of having the characters do whatever he/she wants whenever he/she wants them to whether we like it or not and his/her discion is effectively law. Take this instance for example if it will help you come to grasp this concept, it was stated that it took them about a month after the incident to get to Nerima and in this fic Genma is to be effectively imprisoned for that time frame and then can they can travel back at their own leisure. Simple solution, they got to Jusenkyo early idiot-.-
Anyway now that thats out of the way all in all good fic and Kepp up the good work.
4/22/2010 c2 7Dumbledork
Hm. Wonder where you're going with this. Will Ranma have a 'monster form' later on?
7DumbledorkHm. Wonder where you're going with this. Will Ranma have a 'monster form' later on?
4/13/2010 c1 2god of stuff
Well this is a rather interesting start. I don't think I have ever seen a monster rancher cross before.
2god of stuffWell this is a rather interesting start. I don't think I have ever seen a monster rancher cross before.
4/12/2010 c1 Daniel Thomas Stack
Fun start. I wonder if those computers will be repairable or if a way in Ranma's world will be found to contact Pixie's.
Just how much is this going to change things back in Nerima? I mean a month after Jusenkyo is when they got to the Tendo Dojo (Give or take a week) This time around that month will end when Genma's sentence is finished. Still allot of travel without (hopefully) being hunted to go. So will they make it there before Ryouga shows up with some unknown reason for expecting to find Ranma at Furinken High school? Or if they resume training as they travel instead of running for their lives to the coast will they even make it before the Kodachi Rhythmic Gymnastics match?
I see too many people ignore what events would end up occurring because they aren't timed completely on reaction to current events in the Tendo home.
Spokavriel @ yahoo. com
Fun start. I wonder if those computers will be repairable or if a way in Ranma's world will be found to contact Pixie's.
Just how much is this going to change things back in Nerima? I mean a month after Jusenkyo is when they got to the Tendo Dojo (Give or take a week) This time around that month will end when Genma's sentence is finished. Still allot of travel without (hopefully) being hunted to go. So will they make it there before Ryouga shows up with some unknown reason for expecting to find Ranma at Furinken High school? Or if they resume training as they travel instead of running for their lives to the coast will they even make it before the Kodachi Rhythmic Gymnastics match?
I see too many people ignore what events would end up occurring because they aren't timed completely on reaction to current events in the Tendo home.
Spokavriel @ yahoo. com
4/11/2010 c1 5Princess Asuna
Being as i was/am the one who usually prereads your stories ill simply write a review. I highly enjoyed reading this new story of yours and highly enjoy reading your stories in general. I have said this before but you are one of my most favotire writers. You have a talent for taking a random idea and turning it into an excellent story a prime example is ghost raised, you and I simply were tossing back and forth ideas and you came up with a wonderful idea.. I hope this story becomes just as great as your other stories (and i have a feeling it will) and that you contiune your great work. ^_^
5Princess AsunaBeing as i was/am the one who usually prereads your stories ill simply write a review. I highly enjoyed reading this new story of yours and highly enjoy reading your stories in general. I have said this before but you are one of my most favotire writers. You have a talent for taking a random idea and turning it into an excellent story a prime example is ghost raised, you and I simply were tossing back and forth ideas and you came up with a wonderful idea.. I hope this story becomes just as great as your other stories (and i have a feeling it will) and that you contiune your great work. ^_^
4/11/2010 c1 isoulmani
Dang, you did it again. Another story i have to read because both the premise and the writer are so darn good. Now i'm conflicted about what i want to see updated next. In all seriousness though good job trolling this one out. This is one of the few monster rancher subplots that is not addressed in the North American release. Hope to see more soon.As an after thought Ryoga being mistaken as a golem by Pixie because of his inhuman constitution would be a gas.
Dang, you did it again. Another story i have to read because both the premise and the writer are so darn good. Now i'm conflicted about what i want to see updated next. In all seriousness though good job trolling this one out. This is one of the few monster rancher subplots that is not addressed in the North American release. Hope to see more soon.As an after thought Ryoga being mistaken as a golem by Pixie because of his inhuman constitution would be a gas.
4/11/2010 c1 KenJ
This is an interesting being, I've really enjoyed the story so far and I'm looking forward to part two.
You know, if the Amazons don't believe that there is some outside spirit speaking to Ranma then they could easily come to the conclusion that Ranma's inner spirit/soul is female rather than male. Especially when Ranma mentions his dream sensei to the Colonge. It might be interesting if the female Amazons deside the reason Ranma has such amazing potential in the martial arts is because he is a female soul mistakenly born a male. It might allow the Amazons to respect his abilities and help him make a few friends.
I can't wait to see the Amazon reaction to Ranma's story and what Genma has been putting him through the last ten years in the name of training. It would be interesting to see trained warriors trying to figure out how a child could possibly survive all of that abuse.
This is an interesting being, I've really enjoyed the story so far and I'm looking forward to part two.
You know, if the Amazons don't believe that there is some outside spirit speaking to Ranma then they could easily come to the conclusion that Ranma's inner spirit/soul is female rather than male. Especially when Ranma mentions his dream sensei to the Colonge. It might be interesting if the female Amazons deside the reason Ranma has such amazing potential in the martial arts is because he is a female soul mistakenly born a male. It might allow the Amazons to respect his abilities and help him make a few friends.
I can't wait to see the Amazon reaction to Ranma's story and what Genma has been putting him through the last ten years in the name of training. It would be interesting to see trained warriors trying to figure out how a child could possibly survive all of that abuse.