for The End? Maybe Not5/9/2012 c18 erica1992
Awsum chap!keep it up ! wow and we're seeing a little bit of a humaan side(maybe) to MEL...
update soon
Awsum chap!keep it up ! wow and we're seeing a little bit of a humaan side(maybe) to MEL...
update soon
5/1/2012 c18 dixipixi
AWSUM chapter!I loved it and can't wait to see what happens next...
Update soon
P.S love that you keep us hanging just keeps us more interested in the story :)
AWSUM chapter!I loved it and can't wait to see what happens next...
Update soon
P.S love that you keep us hanging just keeps us more interested in the story :)
5/1/2012 c18 MyHeart
your back ! yayyy! wow this is one hetic yet short chapter :p looks like after all that torture Nerissa and Phobos have Eylon wrapped around their finger!
I can't wait to see what happens next :D
Update soon please, thanks :)
your back ! yayyy! wow this is one hetic yet short chapter :p looks like after all that torture Nerissa and Phobos have Eylon wrapped around their finger!
I can't wait to see what happens next :D
Update soon please, thanks :)
4/29/2012 c18 
79Lexvan
Wow! And I thought Phobos and Nerissa were bad! That Mel is somethng else! And it looks like her plan worked! What will the girls do if Elyon is turned against them? This doesn't look good!
Great chapter! Keep it up!
79LexvanWow! And I thought Phobos and Nerissa were bad! That Mel is somethng else! And it looks like her plan worked! What will the girls do if Elyon is turned against them? This doesn't look good!
Great chapter! Keep it up!
1/14/2012 c17 Anonymous
so umm r u gonna update anytime soon? cuz I really always check 4 ur stories and there nowhere 2 b found!I really thought u were happy ith your story but 2 me it seems ur just writing cuz ur reviewers r telling u wat 2 write! remember this is your story ant it WAS succesful , 2 me now that I read it again your just writing 2 keep reviewers and your trying 2 please them...I won't lie but I am 1 of them , but just keep in mind it is passion ;) I hope you read this and update soon :D :)
so umm r u gonna update anytime soon? cuz I really always check 4 ur stories and there nowhere 2 b found!I really thought u were happy ith your story but 2 me it seems ur just writing cuz ur reviewers r telling u wat 2 write! remember this is your story ant it WAS succesful , 2 me now that I read it again your just writing 2 keep reviewers and your trying 2 please them...I won't lie but I am 1 of them , but just keep in mind it is passion ;) I hope you read this and update soon :D :)
8/16/2011 c17 dixpixi
OH MY GOD ! DO YOU KNOW HOW LONG IT TOOK ME 2 GET DA REVIEW BUTTON 2 WORK?ANYWAY TO UR CHAP.IT WAS DAM AWSUM AND HOW THE PLOT THICKENS EACH TYM U UPDATE...BTW THX 4 EXPLAINING THE WHOLE WEIRA THING 2 US =)CAN'T WAIT 4 MORE...PLZZ UPDATE JUST BCUZ I DIDN'T REVIEW DOES NOT MEAN I CNT READ THE CHAP...YOU UPDATED UR OTHER STORIES Y CNT U DO DA 1 DAT IS MOST SUCCESSFUL?=(
OH MY GOD ! DO YOU KNOW HOW LONG IT TOOK ME 2 GET DA REVIEW BUTTON 2 WORK?ANYWAY TO UR CHAP.IT WAS DAM AWSUM AND HOW THE PLOT THICKENS EACH TYM U UPDATE...BTW THX 4 EXPLAINING THE WHOLE WEIRA THING 2 US =)CAN'T WAIT 4 MORE...PLZZ UPDATE JUST BCUZ I DIDN'T REVIEW DOES NOT MEAN I CNT READ THE CHAP...YOU UPDATED UR OTHER STORIES Y CNT U DO DA 1 DAT IS MOST SUCCESSFUL?=(
8/5/2011 c17 Myheart
Awsum story sorry I haven't reviewed but I've been rlly busy lately anyway I think da story is awesome and we nmow wahts going on ...But will Elyon do anything to see her mother ...YES I would soo update soon can't wait for more =)
Awsum story sorry I haven't reviewed but I've been rlly busy lately anyway I think da story is awesome and we nmow wahts going on ...But will Elyon do anything to see her mother ...YES I would soo update soon can't wait for more =)
7/25/2011 c15 1Cornelia rox
i think it should really be happening to her...this is an awesome story! i luv Cornelia's dream...well, i don't but you know, it's good! you know what i mean right? i luv this story!
1Cornelia roxi think it should really be happening to her...this is an awesome story! i luv Cornelia's dream...well, i don't but you know, it's good! you know what i mean right? i luv this story!
7/22/2011 c17 erica1992
A little short but never mind that at least we got an explanation right ?There's always room for improvment...
GREAT STORY KEEP ON THE HARD WORK!
A little short but never mind that at least we got an explanation right ?There's always room for improvment...
GREAT STORY KEEP ON THE HARD WORK!
7/22/2011 c17 Blow1996
OMG you update !Awwesome chapter at least we know more about Weira than we did in the show.Can't wait to see what happens next...WELL DONE!
OMG you update !Awwesome chapter at least we know more about Weira than we did in the show.Can't wait to see what happens next...WELL DONE!
7/17/2011 c17 79Lexvan
Well, thanks to Tril, the girls and Matt know what Phobos has planned. Let's hope they can save Elyon and Caleb before it's to late.
Great chapter! Keep it up and uptate soon!
BTW: Don't sweat putting up up dates quick. It's Summer for crying out loud! Have fun!
79LexvanWell, thanks to Tril, the girls and Matt know what Phobos has planned. Let's hope they can save Elyon and Caleb before it's to late.
Great chapter! Keep it up and uptate soon!
BTW: Don't sweat putting up up dates quick. It's Summer for crying out loud! Have fun!
7/17/2011 c16 Blow1996
Hey you can you please update your story...I know this will be mean but you updated your other stories why can"t you do this one...I know that it is kinda mean so please can you update soon...I just really don't want you to be one of those writers who just leave their storis like there is this one writer who just did one chapter and that was it !You reallly have done an excellent job on this story and have so many reviews so you really owe it to us to keep on writing and honey the 4th of july was 2 weeks ago...So please can you UPDATE !=)
Hey you can you please update your story...I know this will be mean but you updated your other stories why can"t you do this one...I know that it is kinda mean so please can you update soon...I just really don't want you to be one of those writers who just leave their storis like there is this one writer who just did one chapter and that was it !You reallly have done an excellent job on this story and have so many reviews so you really owe it to us to keep on writing and honey the 4th of july was 2 weeks ago...So please can you UPDATE !=)
7/11/2011 c16 Myheart
Hey ! I'm back from my vacation and still no update :( Please update...I'll check everyday for chapter 17 ...
PLEASE UPDATE I WOULD REALLY APRECIATE IT :)
Hey ! I'm back from my vacation and still no update :( Please update...I'll check everyday for chapter 17 ...
PLEASE UPDATE I WOULD REALLY APRECIATE IT :)
7/6/2011 c16 sexychic
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AGAIN THX COPY N PASTE i FRICKEN LOVE THIS STORY AND IT'S REALLY COOL THAT WE LEARN ABOUT MEL AND HOW NERISSA TWISTED HER AGAINST THE GOOD GUYS ...AWESOME CHAPTER i CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT...
P.S LOOK ABOVE AND YOU'LL KNOW WHAT I'M GONNA SAY =)
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AGAIN THX COPY N PASTE i FRICKEN LOVE THIS STORY AND IT'S REALLY COOL THAT WE LEARN ABOUT MEL AND HOW NERISSA TWISTED HER AGAINST THE GOOD GUYS ...AWESOME CHAPTER i CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT...
P.S LOOK ABOVE AND YOU'LL KNOW WHAT I'M GONNA SAY =)
7/5/2011 c16 Myheart
WHOOO!ANOTHER AMAZING CHAPTER .SO NOW WE KNOW WHAT HAPPENED TO MEL ...I FEEL REALLY DORRY FOR HER THAT REALLY ISN'T HOW SOMEONE SHOULD LIVE THEIR LIFE IT'S REALLY SAD.SO I WONDER WHATS GONNA HAPPEN TO EYLON KEEP ON WRITING !
P.S I'M PROBABLY NOT GONNA BE REVIEWING FOR A WHILE CAUSE I'M ON VACATION =)
WHOOO!ANOTHER AMAZING CHAPTER .SO NOW WE KNOW WHAT HAPPENED TO MEL ...I FEEL REALLY DORRY FOR HER THAT REALLY ISN'T HOW SOMEONE SHOULD LIVE THEIR LIFE IT'S REALLY SAD.SO I WONDER WHATS GONNA HAPPEN TO EYLON KEEP ON WRITING !
P.S I'M PROBABLY NOT GONNA BE REVIEWING FOR A WHILE CAUSE I'M ON VACATION =)