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2/15 c33 RandomCitizen
Hm. Ralph is suspicious. :p

Julia won't want to know about Timothy then. :P
2/14 c27 RandomCitizen
Hmmm, that's true. The Order's desperate but not that much. :p I think we would win from technology and the sheer numbers if the exorcists didn't hold world leaders hostage or something. :P At the very least the casualties and spent resources would be dramatic. Though we would recover better from again, sheer numbers. :P
2/14 c26 RandomCitizen
You know...in a way she DID just walk into a stranger's van... :P
2/14 c25 RandomCitizen
Her mother sure is taking this well...she'll probably cry later.
2/14 c23 RandomCitizen
Gasp! Dun dun duunn.
2/14 c20 RandomCitizen
Fourteenth you ss. :l
2/14 c19 RandomCitizen
Craaap. THAT is unfortunate.( or will be)
2/14 c16 RandomCitizen
Ah, so we'll just have to enjoy the ride while it lasts. :P
2/14 c14 RandomCitizen
This is going to get ugly isn't it? DX'
2/14 c11 RandomCitizen
No one wants to be a guest where everyone would gladly kill a nd insult you. :P
2/14 c10 RandomCitizen
Well THIS is going to get awkward fast. :D
2/14 c4 RandomCitizen
What if Link fake sleeps to catch him off guard? Man, Allen you didn't give any warning did you? XP
2/14 c3 RandomCitizen
Man, that guy hitting her...! D:(
He ain't her momma, grandmama, she doesn't even work for him!(he'd be so sued anywhere else) He's one of those end justifies the mean guys(from his past) being a d-bag to win the war.
2/14 c1 RandomCitizen
Hm... she could dye her hair for now right?(do they not have that?)
Allen is so great...XD Though he didn't say he yes to her request did he...?
She's gonna have a lot of problems now... :P (like with Kanda and that mean guy with the mustache, she could be friends with the Finders! They never get attention)
1/1 c27 Sunknight1142
I was reading your comment about California being a "really, really hot state" while on my way to Yosemite in CA to go ice skating. For you to describe here as you did tells me that you came here during the summer, which is when it can get up into the hundreds. When you come during this time of year, it is down into the sixties for the high. If the day gets cold enough, we can get small hail, but that is the worst of it. Usually it is cold, and sometimes rainy, but not as much as it use to.

On another hand, I really love your story and can't wait for you to put another chapter up! I think the characters are slightly occ, but not enough for it to be annoying or want me to stop reading the story. Actually, I think you improved the characters. Although, I would have thought Lavi would have jump at the chance to roam the internet, while Link watch tv. Hope you post soon!

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