for Kenshin's poem12/23/2012 c2 
3Mimimikan
Nice! I liked the poem from Himura's perspective for some reason. Touching :)
3MimimikanNice! I liked the poem from Himura's perspective for some reason. Touching :)
6/6/2010 c2 T
Wow that was amazing! My husband is gone for two months to bootcamp and this reminds me of he and I. You did a great job! Evert kk fan needs to read this!
Wow that was amazing! My husband is gone for two months to bootcamp and this reminds me of he and I. You did a great job! Evert kk fan needs to read this!
4/18/2010 c2 22caseyedith
so sweet :) I'm glad you decided to write about their return from Kyoto. Love the very last line, "his silent 'i love you'".
22caseyedithso sweet :) I'm glad you decided to write about their return from Kyoto. Love the very last line, "his silent 'i love you'".
4/17/2010 c2 8season's call
My heart is aching...I can feel their pain through this poem.
Two lonely hearts, how they offered each other comfort and shelter, longing to be together, yet have to be seperated.The scenes seems to come alive with each verse.
I have to admit, you write angsty poem well.
8season's callMy heart is aching...I can feel their pain through this poem.
Two lonely hearts, how they offered each other comfort and shelter, longing to be together, yet have to be seperated.The scenes seems to come alive with each verse.
I have to admit, you write angsty poem well.
4/14/2010 c1 season's call
love it, it's melancholic, and express the pains in his heart well.
Good job!
love it, it's melancholic, and express the pains in his heart well.
Good job!
4/13/2010 c1 22caseyedith
I liked this. It had a very soothing rhythm to it. Nice rhymes :). I can imagine Kenshin actually writing this.
22caseyedithI liked this. It had a very soothing rhythm to it. Nice rhymes :). I can imagine Kenshin actually writing this.