for Inside These Walls9/3/2011 c1 Laughing Rain
Nice- I happened to like this episode, as well, and it was interesting to see your take on it. It was a bit short, but not in a manner that left the reader cut-off. The end and the beginning struck me as a bit weak, but that may just be me. Nice job!
Nice- I happened to like this episode, as well, and it was interesting to see your take on it. It was a bit short, but not in a manner that left the reader cut-off. The end and the beginning struck me as a bit weak, but that may just be me. Nice job!
9/9/2010 c1 
10BlackWolfHowling
I'm sure this would make more sense if I'd seen the episode...but either way, it was well-written.
10BlackWolfHowlingI'm sure this would make more sense if I'd seen the episode...but either way, it was well-written.
5/15/2010 c1 78StillWaters1
I may be biased since McCoy is my favorite, but I have to say I absolutely LOVE the little scene here with Kirk and McCoy. I could really hear those thoughts running through Kirk's head and the whole piece about his hands, with your use of such contrasting words (supporting/victim/forgiveness/violence) is perfect. And yes, I'm sure McCoy "would have gladly granted" that forgiveness. Beautifully done!
78StillWaters1I may be biased since McCoy is my favorite, but I have to say I absolutely LOVE the little scene here with Kirk and McCoy. I could really hear those thoughts running through Kirk's head and the whole piece about his hands, with your use of such contrasting words (supporting/victim/forgiveness/violence) is perfect. And yes, I'm sure McCoy "would have gladly granted" that forgiveness. Beautifully done!
4/15/2010 c1 8CaTigeReptile
I love this! Thank you for doing a Sulu and a Scotty perspective for this episode - they were brainwashed, too! Hell, it's more screen-time for Sulu than he usually ever gets. Which is too bad because he's so awesome.
8CaTigeReptileI love this! Thank you for doing a Sulu and a Scotty perspective for this episode - they were brainwashed, too! Hell, it's more screen-time for Sulu than he usually ever gets. Which is too bad because he's so awesome.
4/14/2010 c1 115KCS
That episode was bizarre but despite that I loved it too! :D
And this was wonderful; I especially loved seeing Sulu and Scotty's drabbles, because the poor guys didn't get much attention in the episode. And Kirk's drabble was excellent too; reminded me of Return of the Archons where he had to knock McCoy out and it looked like it just killed him. I've always thought that in Catspaw that's why McCoy came round too quickly; the captain couldn't bring himself to deck him hard enough. And of course annoyance-is-an-acceptable-emotion!Spock is always a treat. :)
Lovely drabbles!
115KCSThat episode was bizarre but despite that I loved it too! :D
And this was wonderful; I especially loved seeing Sulu and Scotty's drabbles, because the poor guys didn't get much attention in the episode. And Kirk's drabble was excellent too; reminded me of Return of the Archons where he had to knock McCoy out and it looked like it just killed him. I've always thought that in Catspaw that's why McCoy came round too quickly; the captain couldn't bring himself to deck him hard enough. And of course annoyance-is-an-acceptable-emotion!Spock is always a treat. :)
Lovely drabbles!