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8/25/2012 c13 12SapphireDragonFly
I just read through the whole story. I'm a hopepless romantic so every chapter I was waiting and waiting for Sora to scream "I'M NOT ROXAS, I NEVER WILL BE. I LOVE YOU. WILL YOU EVER LOVE ME, AS SORA?" And then Axel will realize that he really does want Sora. And that he is falling for Sora. But it just didn't happen... And I started to become angry with Sora. For being in such a emotionally abusive relationship. I actually started shipping Sora/Riku. I was waiting for a happy ending. Then, I finally got up to the last chapter and saw how it ended. I was just heart broken... But, it made sense. This is what it is. This is the most realistic outcome, it was bound to happen. Sora never loved Riku in that way, so he wasn't going to suddenly change his mind. And Axel, well, he just wanted Roxas. Sora turned into someone else... He turned into someone else to be with the person he loves... That actually made me tear up a bit... I just hope I can use this story as a lesson to never do that. XD But anyway, sorry if its weird that I gave such a long and emotional review. BUT, Consider it a good thing! I got REALLY into the story! You did a great job! I haven't been finding many good Axel/Sora fanfics. And this was good. So, thank you for the great read! :D
1/29/2012 c13 Jesse
I was speechless when I read the ending. I can't believe Axel would go and make Sora disappear just to have Roxas back, but for some reason it didn't surprise me. I loved how you kept Sora guessing and wondering about Axel's love for him and how you made Sora understand in the end what had happened and all. I wish you would make a sequel to it or something just to say if Sora ever got out. I know you said no one every would, but Riku never forgot about Sora so it makes me wonder if he did when the memories were supposed to be gone and stuff. Good story though :D
2/8/2011 c12 Ice Princezz
PLZ write more
2/8/2011 c12 Ice Princezz
PLZ write more
11/6/2010 c10 13Moldy Milk
I love this story so much! It's a bit confusing at parts, but other than that, it's amazing. Please update soon!
8/31/2010 c8 DarknekoKurai
I really love this! Really well done! I hope axel really loves sora! :) I hope everything works out!
8/28/2010 c8 48Himitsu Miko
Awwww, poor Sora. He's now almost completely a masochist . but we still love him.
8/11/2010 c7 Himitsu Miko
Wow...they're horny and angsty at the same time. That's like pairing Cloud and Squall, man. XD

Good job, though. This chapter gave me a plot bunny that'll probably bug me until I write it. Not. Fun.

Anyways, I don't think I need to tell you this, but update soon. (and yes, this is story alerted 'pparently)
5/10/2010 c2 10kingdomheartsforevs
Aww, poor Sora~

Trust me, hon - you're growin' on him. xD

UPDATE.

NAAAAOOO.

... Please. .
4/23/2010 c1 yaoi fan sevinteen
I so love you for this story. I had thought about this parring sents for ever.XD thank you so much.
4/17/2010 c1 3Less-Then-3
you have to write more of this store it's awesome
4/15/2010 c1 4Down n Dirty
How sad. I feel really bad for poor Sora, good start though.

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