for Letters From a Nation7/19/2011 c6 
39Alix Cohen
...I'm lost. Who's writing what, what happened on China's answering machine, and what's a sprog?
39Alix Cohen...I'm lost. Who's writing what, what happened on China's answering machine, and what's a sprog?
5/8/2010 c1 watchulla
Wow!
I liked the story until the barack comment it had potential thought. For the record i don't like barack either but let the man do his term like everyone else.
Wow!
I liked the story until the barack comment it had potential thought. For the record i don't like barack either but let the man do his term like everyone else.
5/8/2010 c10 LadyAngeliTheSunGeneral
legend! Shouldn't Rep. Eire be a girl though? coz then at least it balances out crazy wales, scotland and england a little bit :p wanna hear more!
legend! Shouldn't Rep. Eire be a girl though? coz then at least it balances out crazy wales, scotland and england a little bit :p wanna hear more!
5/8/2010 c1 5Capricia
PS, You can have Hugh Laurie back when you pry him from my cold dead fingers.
hilarious, and yeah you better keep Hugh Alfred or I'm following him across the pond!
-wait that sounded stalkerish, didn't it. I meant that in a non creepy way, just in case your wondering-
Anyway, give poor stephenie a break, the HOST was awesome! (that's her adult book about body snatching aliens, way better then it sounds)
Sorry about that I'm just tired of people thinking Twilight is the only thing she did, she managed a really good book after all the...sparkly vamps.
Also Iggy and Al have seriously disturbed relatives, but hey that's why the are awesome.
Right more pretty please.
5CapriciaPS, You can have Hugh Laurie back when you pry him from my cold dead fingers.
hilarious, and yeah you better keep Hugh Alfred or I'm following him across the pond!
-wait that sounded stalkerish, didn't it. I meant that in a non creepy way, just in case your wondering-
Anyway, give poor stephenie a break, the HOST was awesome! (that's her adult book about body snatching aliens, way better then it sounds)
Sorry about that I'm just tired of people thinking Twilight is the only thing she did, she managed a really good book after all the...sparkly vamps.
Also Iggy and Al have seriously disturbed relatives, but hey that's why the are awesome.
Right more pretty please.
5/5/2010 c4 22too-much-romance
O.O Okay, now I DEMAND the "subtitles"! XO I understood...a fifth of that! And, sorry to kick Jackidy when she's down, but I think England's English lingo just went down a level. I'm sorry, but I just felt that it was written by a totally different feel than the England's first message that I started to question if one of his brothers, Scotland, Wales, or Ireland even, was writing this letter in his stead. :(
The ideas I did understand were good: the hacks of getting the trainer to say "Get the flunk out, Pedobear!" or something. The haggis and the usual senseless bagging on France and anything associated with him. However, without his special speech, (well, okay, the other half is my fault for not knowing about all the other references) it can't amount to the greatness that it was in the second chapter. Not really.
Sorry for the disatisfactory review, but I do hope this helps fuel you both for improvement, okay? Please don't be mad at me later...
Sincerely,
~TMRomance
22too-much-romanceO.O Okay, now I DEMAND the "subtitles"! XO I understood...a fifth of that! And, sorry to kick Jackidy when she's down, but I think England's English lingo just went down a level. I'm sorry, but I just felt that it was written by a totally different feel than the England's first message that I started to question if one of his brothers, Scotland, Wales, or Ireland even, was writing this letter in his stead. :(
The ideas I did understand were good: the hacks of getting the trainer to say "Get the flunk out, Pedobear!" or something. The haggis and the usual senseless bagging on France and anything associated with him. However, without his special speech, (well, okay, the other half is my fault for not knowing about all the other references) it can't amount to the greatness that it was in the second chapter. Not really.
Sorry for the disatisfactory review, but I do hope this helps fuel you both for improvement, okay? Please don't be mad at me later...
Sincerely,
~TMRomance
5/5/2010 c3 too-much-romance
*laughs* I don't get a fifth of it, what happened...? ^w^;
Anyway, a lot more political stuff in this one than I expected, and even though I'm not all that up to date, I'm glad I got most of the jokes. Even if I only heard about it from my classmates in one of their loud conversations, about Final Fantasy and history simultaneously. XP
Phew! Hey, it's probably a drag, but I bet lots of readers would come to appreciate the story/letters much more if you put the references that Alfred and Arthur are referring to at the bottom in a little more detail, you know? That way, those that DON'T get everything (like poor little me, hint hint, please...) can understand their little letters.
It's like putting France's translations for all the French stuff he says at the bottom. I really think it'd be good, but just saying. ^^
Missed my reviews? XP
Missed this story!
Can't wait to read more,
~TMRomance
*laughs* I don't get a fifth of it, what happened...? ^w^;
Anyway, a lot more political stuff in this one than I expected, and even though I'm not all that up to date, I'm glad I got most of the jokes. Even if I only heard about it from my classmates in one of their loud conversations, about Final Fantasy and history simultaneously. XP
Phew! Hey, it's probably a drag, but I bet lots of readers would come to appreciate the story/letters much more if you put the references that Alfred and Arthur are referring to at the bottom in a little more detail, you know? That way, those that DON'T get everything (like poor little me, hint hint, please...) can understand their little letters.
It's like putting France's translations for all the French stuff he says at the bottom. I really think it'd be good, but just saying. ^^
Missed my reviews? XP
Missed this story!
Can't wait to read more,
~TMRomance
5/1/2010 c8 5Sora Tayuya
Oh man, I just finished Hetalia tonight, then Keiko told me about this, and now I have to read the rest of this. It is really too funny for your own goods )
5Sora TayuyaOh man, I just finished Hetalia tonight, then Keiko told me about this, and now I have to read the rest of this. It is really too funny for your own goods )
4/20/2010 c6 8HoneyTwilight
To the Twilight reference- YES. GOOD ARTHUR. *pats head*
that. was. awesome...
8HoneyTwilightTo the Twilight reference- YES. GOOD ARTHUR. *pats head*
that. was. awesome...
4/18/2010 c4 11Jackidy
I read through the reviews of this and all i can say is my britishness is thoroughly insulted D: that and american beer is piss water. end of XD
11JackidyI read through the reviews of this and all i can say is my britishness is thoroughly insulted D: that and american beer is piss water. end of XD
4/17/2010 c4 13Keiko Sahara
American beer is the best, it gives you a nice buzz. I like the pokemon one, I can imagine that very well actually. Oh now France nii-chan is after you? Lols.
13Keiko SaharaAmerican beer is the best, it gives you a nice buzz. I like the pokemon one, I can imagine that very well actually. Oh now France nii-chan is after you? Lols.
4/17/2010 c2 22too-much-romance
The formatting is a quick way to tell that there is a gentleman in the house. XD
Disclaimer: Yeah, just whisper that you don't own Laurie. XD You're funneh...
In the beginning, "fair" and "his own" sound a bit redundant once one actually tries to decipher British lingo so please take a look at that. ^^
"Don't speak of the Frog" reminds me of a movie or something in how dramatic I read that to myself...really, it was really dramatic-sounding when I read it, it had me laughing...
And finally, "PS, I hate you" XD Very simple, but the spacing and syntax made the trick WORK. You're "bloody" brilliant. XP
I hope they write to each other soon again!
~TMRomance
22too-much-romanceThe formatting is a quick way to tell that there is a gentleman in the house. XD
Disclaimer: Yeah, just whisper that you don't own Laurie. XD You're funneh...
In the beginning, "fair" and "his own" sound a bit redundant once one actually tries to decipher British lingo so please take a look at that. ^^
"Don't speak of the Frog" reminds me of a movie or something in how dramatic I read that to myself...really, it was really dramatic-sounding when I read it, it had me laughing...
And finally, "PS, I hate you" XD Very simple, but the spacing and syntax made the trick WORK. You're "bloody" brilliant. XP
I hope they write to each other soon again!
~TMRomance
4/16/2010 c1 too-much-romance
Nice! XD It sounds totally like an American without any of those easy tricks (like abreviating or anything); just by using a pretty positive attitude, a low-down "this is totally secret voice" some times, and you can really see the smile in the words. ^^
XD Hugh Laurie. Lol. He's so awesome, I can see why they'd be fighting over him. ;P
Please write more!
~TMRomance
Nice! XD It sounds totally like an American without any of those easy tricks (like abreviating or anything); just by using a pretty positive attitude, a low-down "this is totally secret voice" some times, and you can really see the smile in the words. ^^
XD Hugh Laurie. Lol. He's so awesome, I can see why they'd be fighting over him. ;P
Please write more!
~TMRomance