for Siren Song11/23/2012 c2 Guest
Nice story, and a different theme from others I've read. Congrats.
Nice story, and a different theme from others I've read. Congrats.
12/31/2010 c1 
20TomorrowNeverCame
Whoa, awesome song! I listened to it on YouTube :) perfect! I could actually see her singing this! Very good writing!
20TomorrowNeverCameWhoa, awesome song! I listened to it on YouTube :) perfect! I could actually see her singing this! Very good writing!
4/17/2010 c1 Beckett NYPD
Definitely a winning story, It doesn't say it's a one shot so I presume there will be more to this story. I was surprised at the ending, but happy. I thought he would end up leaving without her telling him the truth.
Definitely a winning story, It doesn't say it's a one shot so I presume there will be more to this story. I was surprised at the ending, but happy. I thought he would end up leaving without her telling him the truth.
4/17/2010 c1 aero09
I loved this story. It is probably on eof the most unique one's that I have read. Are you going to add more soon? Let's hope so! (: Great writing. Oh! I also love how Esposito calls her a babe. Lmao.
I loved this story. It is probably on eof the most unique one's that I have read. Are you going to add more soon? Let's hope so! (: Great writing. Oh! I also love how Esposito calls her a babe. Lmao.
4/17/2010 c1 13Piecesof16
I know I've already told you, but again: great story! Chapter 2 is gonna be here too, right?
13Piecesof16I know I've already told you, but again: great story! Chapter 2 is gonna be here too, right?