for Bella the Wild Child5/9 c1 Blackbunnytastic
I love it please update! PPLLEEEAASSEEEEE!
I love it please update! PPLLEEEAASSEEEEE!
1/18/2012 c1 
15ANGEL FALLEN FROM HEAVEN
nawwwwwwwwwwwww even if they do fight u can see they love each other and its nice that emmett is going with bella so she doesn't feel so lost in england
ily!
xD!
15ANGEL FALLEN FROM HEAVENnawwwwwwwwwwwww even if they do fight u can see they love each other and its nice that emmett is going with bella so she doesn't feel so lost in england
ily!
xD!
10/4/2011 c1 Rachelle
Heey, i like your story.
i can't wait to read chapter 2.
Heey, i like your story.
i can't wait to read chapter 2.
9/18/2011 c1 Guest
Spell check? No... You need to pace the story as well, it can't be on second this, next second that realistically, sorry if this sounds really mean.
Spell check? No... You need to pace the story as well, it can't be on second this, next second that realistically, sorry if this sounds really mean.
8/27/2011 c1 O.o
WOW! I have NEVER seen such horrible grammar! Honestly, are you really trying to write? Sweetie, I am sure this would be a wonderful story, but you have got to proof read your work. If I got a nickel for each time i cringed while looking at your mistakes...well...I'd have a lot of money.
But other than that...it's a good story.
Don't forget to disclaim it, because neither Twilight or Wild Child belong to you. Have someone beta your work.
Update more, so that people actually notice your work.
And make your characters...not to ditzy...
Have fun!
:)
WOW! I have NEVER seen such horrible grammar! Honestly, are you really trying to write? Sweetie, I am sure this would be a wonderful story, but you have got to proof read your work. If I got a nickel for each time i cringed while looking at your mistakes...well...I'd have a lot of money.
But other than that...it's a good story.
Don't forget to disclaim it, because neither Twilight or Wild Child belong to you. Have someone beta your work.
Update more, so that people actually notice your work.
And make your characters...not to ditzy...
Have fun!
:)
2/27/2011 c1 3hannah-chanxox
haha lol awsome chapter
please please write more, kay? ;)
upload soon!
hannah-chan xoxo
3hannah-chanxoxhaha lol awsome chapter
please please write more, kay? ;)
upload soon!
hannah-chan xoxo
12/31/2010 c1 CheneyPinata
Please check your dialogue for consistency.
Also, if you really want to be a writer: please, please, PLEASE leave Twilight in the self-dug media grave it has already prepared for itself. Write what you know, and if your life isn't exciting or interesting enough, get off the computer and go outside and DO SOMETHING INTERESTING WITH YOUR TIME.
Please check your dialogue for consistency.
Also, if you really want to be a writer: please, please, PLEASE leave Twilight in the self-dug media grave it has already prepared for itself. Write what you know, and if your life isn't exciting or interesting enough, get off the computer and go outside and DO SOMETHING INTERESTING WITH YOUR TIME.
8/30/2010 c1 5needia13
Love it... A few mistakes but altogether I thought it was great! You should definately write more :) I just watched Wild Child (and I loved it) and I was looking at some Wild Child fanfics and I saw this one and I was like "Yes!"
I love the idea of Emmett going with her :)
5needia13Love it... A few mistakes but altogether I thought it was great! You should definately write more :) I just watched Wild Child (and I loved it) and I was looking at some Wild Child fanfics and I saw this one and I was like "Yes!"
I love the idea of Emmett going with her :)
7/12/2010 c1 7DareToDream17
Hey... so I was looking at your profile, and I noticed your quote favorites are copied directly from my profile. I really appreciate you reading Falling for a Superstar and favoriting me as an author, but I feel a little uncomfortable with you copying something straight from my profile. If those are your favortie quotes, then great, haha but I would appreciate it if you added your own and didn't set it up exactly like mine.
Also, I was kind of shocked when you copied my You Know You Are Obsessed With Twilight when...
I made those, and you still have the parenthesis that say (I made these! Feel free to copy and paste, just give me credit!) Maybe you forgot to take out the parenthesis while copying it to your profile, but please take them out now.
I am fine with you having the that quote, just don't make it look like you wrote it.
So please just make the bottom part of your profile original. I am not angry at you, I just want to have a unique profile, you know?
-mhcheergirl
7DareToDream17Hey... so I was looking at your profile, and I noticed your quote favorites are copied directly from my profile. I really appreciate you reading Falling for a Superstar and favoriting me as an author, but I feel a little uncomfortable with you copying something straight from my profile. If those are your favortie quotes, then great, haha but I would appreciate it if you added your own and didn't set it up exactly like mine.
Also, I was kind of shocked when you copied my You Know You Are Obsessed With Twilight when...
I made those, and you still have the parenthesis that say (I made these! Feel free to copy and paste, just give me credit!) Maybe you forgot to take out the parenthesis while copying it to your profile, but please take them out now.
I am fine with you having the that quote, just don't make it look like you wrote it.
So please just make the bottom part of your profile original. I am not angry at you, I just want to have a unique profile, you know?
-mhcheergirl
7/9/2010 c1 3madden1010
Ummm, yeah, it was a good storyline and stuff, but it had a fair few mistakes with grammar and stuff (sorry, I'm realllllyy picky with grammar and spelling), but otherwise, it was good and I loved it.
Mariah xoxo
3madden1010Ummm, yeah, it was a good storyline and stuff, but it had a fair few mistakes with grammar and stuff (sorry, I'm realllllyy picky with grammar and spelling), but otherwise, it was good and I loved it.
Mariah xoxo
4/23/2010 c1 twlightexpert
Good story!. You should def continue it.
Is Edward going to be the headmistress' son just like the movie? I think that would be a good idea.
Good story!. You should def continue it.
Is Edward going to be the headmistress' son just like the movie? I think that would be a good idea.