for Villains and Soccer Balls8/2/2012 c1 
4Reiz16
:P
Okay, I'm not gonna lie. It feels kinda weird to be reviewing something that was written for little kids. So, forgive me if I keep it short? XD But I didn't think it was bad! It's actually pretty good for something you only wrote in one go. You need to lower your bar a bit. No need to be so critical.
I actually DID think Sportacus died at the beginning and was hoping that he did. :P I noticed you used (these) at some points. Use them more often! Yeah, it was quite detailed for something soooo written quickly. Your O.C. had a good personality, which you showed off well... Everyone was I.C... Is he really an elf? Haven't watched this show in years.
4Reiz16:P
Okay, I'm not gonna lie. It feels kinda weird to be reviewing something that was written for little kids. So, forgive me if I keep it short? XD But I didn't think it was bad! It's actually pretty good for something you only wrote in one go. You need to lower your bar a bit. No need to be so critical.
I actually DID think Sportacus died at the beginning and was hoping that he did. :P I noticed you used (these) at some points. Use them more often! Yeah, it was quite detailed for something soooo written quickly. Your O.C. had a good personality, which you showed off well... Everyone was I.C... Is he really an elf? Haven't watched this show in years.
9/2/2010 c1 FanofChrisCMaxA1
Great story. I think this could of been a great episode.Although,Robbie in a way deserved it,I still felt a little sorry for him.
Great story. I think this could of been a great episode.Although,Robbie in a way deserved it,I still felt a little sorry for him.
6/26/2010 c1 6i'm david
Energerio is a coward!, taking advantage of the weak, poor Robbie, yes, I know that he deserved it, but still like this he tried to use violence, and it was an accident.
very good fic
6i'm davidEnergerio is a coward!, taking advantage of the weak, poor Robbie, yes, I know that he deserved it, but still like this he tried to use violence, and it was an accident.
very good fic
6/2/2010 c1 10melissa Ivory
this is an interesting story, and i wonder if there will be more to this or not.
10melissa Ivorythis is an interesting story, and i wonder if there will be more to this or not.
4/21/2010 c1 2babis29
I love it, aw poor Robbie, who wouldve thought hed get so upset!, didnt know the master of disguise could be so sensitive. that annoying old elf!
great start, hope you continue it, cant wait to see where it goes, and if Sportacus manages to convince Robbie to join them in their games.
Great job, keep it up. i LOVE IT!
2babis29I love it, aw poor Robbie, who wouldve thought hed get so upset!, didnt know the master of disguise could be so sensitive. that annoying old elf!
great start, hope you continue it, cant wait to see where it goes, and if Sportacus manages to convince Robbie to join them in their games.
Great job, keep it up. i LOVE IT!