for What Was Left Unwritten7/28/2010 c2 
1Silent Tiger
I just finnished reading WoM last night and I was so dissapointed because the romance fluffyness was left out at the end. Thank you for 'adding it'.
1Silent TigerI just finnished reading WoM last night and I was so dissapointed because the romance fluffyness was left out at the end. Thank you for 'adding it'.
7/26/2010 c1 11imakeladrygirl
My first thought when reading that part of WoM was, "She didn't even give him a hug?" Thanks for satisfying my need for fluff :)
11imakeladrygirlMy first thought when reading that part of WoM was, "She didn't even give him a hug?" Thanks for satisfying my need for fluff :)
6/13/2010 c2 wyldangel
Well written. I can pick out the added lines in the first one but only because I know what to look for.
Well written. I can pick out the added lines in the first one but only because I know what to look for.
6/4/2010 c2 11redflame1020
I like both scenes a lot- they both fit into the flow of the story very well, and add a dimension that was previously missing in both scenes. Nice work!
~redflame
11redflame1020I like both scenes a lot- they both fit into the flow of the story very well, and add a dimension that was previously missing in both scenes. Nice work!
~redflame
6/3/2010 c1 26Kelar The Mage
Ack! My first review decided to send before I was done! Sorry 'bout that. You worked your parts into DD's style wonderfully. Very nice to see that. : )
26Kelar The MageAck! My first review decided to send before I was done! Sorry 'bout that. You worked your parts into DD's style wonderfully. Very nice to see that. : )
6/3/2010 c2 Kelar The Mage
Was wondering if anyone had even noticed that Kit had such a suspicious lack of reaction to Nita's "clothes". I like that. The second one's good too - I'd wanted to know what happened when they got back.
Was wondering if anyone had even noticed that Kit had such a suspicious lack of reaction to Nita's "clothes". I like that. The second one's good too - I'd wanted to know what happened when they got back.
6/2/2010 c2 10QuicksilverWitch
Definitely digging the plotline and the premise. Keep up the great work! :)
10QuicksilverWitchDefinitely digging the plotline and the premise. Keep up the great work! :)
5/7/2010 c2 aml
this is really awesome, i like the idea and you're a good writer.
please write more :)
this is really awesome, i like the idea and you're a good writer.
please write more :)
5/7/2010 c2 26maple the wacky tree
ah! i just finished reading the book today, and this was EXACTLY what i was looking for. seriously, i wait through nine whole books and when they finally realize they like each other, Diane Duane ends the story. it's cruel and unusual punishment i say!
please continue with this. it's really good. ^^
26maple the wacky treeah! i just finished reading the book today, and this was EXACTLY what i was looking for. seriously, i wait through nine whole books and when they finally realize they like each other, Diane Duane ends the story. it's cruel and unusual punishment i say!
please continue with this. it's really good. ^^