for Listen to My Heart11/25/2012 c8 
2Snowflake1515
aw im very sorry and sadden by your loss I hope everything gets better and please update soon :)
2Snowflake1515aw im very sorry and sadden by your loss I hope everything gets better and please update soon :)
1/12/2011 c8 2SpoilersAndMagic
first things first. Im really sorry for your gramdmothers passing..and secondly,maybe you could make her hurt by a vampire after there first date and her dream comes true like her mother actully becomes a vamp..thats all i have..again,im really sorry!
2SpoilersAndMagicfirst things first. Im really sorry for your gramdmothers passing..and secondly,maybe you could make her hurt by a vampire after there first date and her dream comes true like her mother actully becomes a vamp..thats all i have..again,im really sorry!
11/6/2010 c8 2luna moon18
hi i love your writing and i would love it if u write more. im sorry about your grandma and hope she is happy where ever she is. i do have some ideas too.
1-you could make it so the nana in the story dies and to avoid living alown with her mom she ends up living with sam and emily.
2-brandy could take her on a walk and she tells him about all her dreams lately like the one with him turning into a wolf. and then he tells her about that being true.
well i hope you feal better and get over your writers block.
-luna3
2luna moon18hi i love your writing and i would love it if u write more. im sorry about your grandma and hope she is happy where ever she is. i do have some ideas too.
1-you could make it so the nana in the story dies and to avoid living alown with her mom she ends up living with sam and emily.
2-brandy could take her on a walk and she tells him about all her dreams lately like the one with him turning into a wolf. and then he tells her about that being true.
well i hope you feal better and get over your writers block.
-luna3
9/11/2010 c7 10AxHopelesslyxHopefulxSoul
this is a great idea for a story, i can't wait to see how it developes! :)
10AxHopelesslyxHopefulxSoulthis is a great idea for a story, i can't wait to see how it developes! :)
9/5/2010 c1 SaaamForLife
:O love love love it!
hmmm what could happen... well her mum could try beat her again but Brady comes and stops it.
and her mum could leave so she's free.. yaaay.
i really dont know :P
i dont understand how you dont have anymore reviews, its an amazing story!
honest, i love it!
:O love love love it!
hmmm what could happen... well her mum could try beat her again but Brady comes and stops it.
and her mum could leave so she's free.. yaaay.
i really dont know :P
i dont understand how you dont have anymore reviews, its an amazing story!
honest, i love it!
8/12/2010 c6 happinie93
They should tell Chief Swan or report her to the police! Brady could at LEAST do that! Well done chapter!
They should tell Chief Swan or report her to the police! Brady could at LEAST do that! Well done chapter!
8/11/2010 c1 happinie93
How did she know about the imprint if she didn't know that Brady was a werewolf yet? I liked the first chapter! Can't wait to read the other chapters to come!
How did she know about the imprint if she didn't know that Brady was a werewolf yet? I liked the first chapter! Can't wait to read the other chapters to come!
8/11/2010 c4 1girlwithstupidusername
Hey, so far I like the story but you really need to use paragraphs. It's so hard to read otherwise. Every time a new person talks their should be a new paragraph. Just trying to help, I like the content it is just not easy to read.
1girlwithstupidusernameHey, so far I like the story but you really need to use paragraphs. It's so hard to read otherwise. Every time a new person talks their should be a new paragraph. Just trying to help, I like the content it is just not easy to read.
4/24/2010 c1 Allocen-Semyaza
Holy Crap! This story from the prologue sounds like the best imprint story! I swear I think I imprinted on the story! Not kidding! UPDATE! start chapter 1!
Holy Crap! This story from the prologue sounds like the best imprint story! I swear I think I imprinted on the story! Not kidding! UPDATE! start chapter 1!
4/24/2010 c1 1Satisfaction is Guaranteed
It was 'okay' as for Twilight fandom standards, but the sentence structure was bad. XD
Please learn to properly use semi-colons. You know, the ';' button.
'My eyes were wide in shock, the beautiful creature, eyes as black as the deepest hole...'
Should be:
'My eyes were wide in shock; the beautiful creature...'
Also, reduce all the commas in there, make some new sentences or something.
~Terr.
1Satisfaction is GuaranteedIt was 'okay' as for Twilight fandom standards, but the sentence structure was bad. XD
Please learn to properly use semi-colons. You know, the ';' button.
'My eyes were wide in shock, the beautiful creature, eyes as black as the deepest hole...'
Should be:
'My eyes were wide in shock; the beautiful creature...'
Also, reduce all the commas in there, make some new sentences or something.
~Terr.