for Plenty of Tobasco4/29/2012 c1 
18Thunderscourge
I liked this story quite a lot! Kallen and Lelouch were so well written, not to mention the cute and funnier sides to it! It had a true COde Geass feel to it since this wasn't without a darker side to things, but that's a good thing rather than a bad one!
I usually don't read lemons but I made an exception for this :)
18ThunderscourgeI liked this story quite a lot! Kallen and Lelouch were so well written, not to mention the cute and funnier sides to it! It had a true COde Geass feel to it since this wasn't without a darker side to things, but that's a good thing rather than a bad one!
I usually don't read lemons but I made an exception for this :)
2/21/2012 c1 Forget Logic. Punch Stuff
Go Kallen! That was great, I think you captured both Lelouch and Kallen very well, and the lemon was tasteful, both in content and context. Bravo, you have reached a milestone: First Good Lemon.
Have a cookie.
FLPS out. keep writing.
Go Kallen! That was great, I think you captured both Lelouch and Kallen very well, and the lemon was tasteful, both in content and context. Bravo, you have reached a milestone: First Good Lemon.
Have a cookie.
FLPS out. keep writing.
1/10/2012 c1 rainy arina angel
very impressive writing. 333 love the background, believable. i like that. :) great attention to detail, vivid imagery; overall plausible. 333 thank you.
very impressive writing. 333 love the background, believable. i like that. :) great attention to detail, vivid imagery; overall plausible. 333 thank you.
5/28/2011 c1 Timber Lou
Nice story. I think you stayed true to the characters and the situation. The only thing I have yet to really understand is this theme within code geass fanfic writers to make him a virgin. He's a promiscuous arrogant confident young lad. Surely he's had sex, and quite a bit of it. I have a hard time seeing him as a military leader and NOT have had sex. But that's me. I'll have to check out your other work. Thanks for posting.
Nice story. I think you stayed true to the characters and the situation. The only thing I have yet to really understand is this theme within code geass fanfic writers to make him a virgin. He's a promiscuous arrogant confident young lad. Surely he's had sex, and quite a bit of it. I have a hard time seeing him as a military leader and NOT have had sex. But that's me. I'll have to check out your other work. Thanks for posting.
4/20/2011 c1 K
I think you got their personalities dead-on. I liked this because you didn't make the whole thing about the lemon; the situation was set up well. The end was a little weak, though.
I think you got their personalities dead-on. I liked this because you didn't make the whole thing about the lemon; the situation was set up well. The end was a little weak, though.
6/27/2010 c1 1Natalie Beck
This was amazing! I was so upset in the original when CC disturbed their little moment they were having! But your story makes it almost all better. The only way it would be all better is if this actually happened! Hehehe! Anyway, hope you keep writing, especially more Kalulu!
1Natalie BeckThis was amazing! I was so upset in the original when CC disturbed their little moment they were having! But your story makes it almost all better. The only way it would be all better is if this actually happened! Hehehe! Anyway, hope you keep writing, especially more Kalulu!
6/12/2010 c1 5thenamesiggykirkland
OH YEAH! THAT WAS TOTALLY AWESOME! I really love the way you wrote that! You are a very good writer... everything was well explained, like their emotions and what they felt...it was clear who was thinking and talking...it was just SUPERB!
5thenamesiggykirklandOH YEAH! THAT WAS TOTALLY AWESOME! I really love the way you wrote that! You are a very good writer... everything was well explained, like their emotions and what they felt...it was clear who was thinking and talking...it was just SUPERB!