for Have We Been Here Before?1/17 c4 dyrtyLyttleScrt
Your an amazing writer! This is the second time I'm reading your stories! I hope that you will continue writing, you just stopped all of a sudden. Hope your doing fine.
Your an amazing writer! This is the second time I'm reading your stories! I hope that you will continue writing, you just stopped all of a sudden. Hope your doing fine.
1/19 c100 Dimplz
The Ballad of Spock and Nyota continues.
This time around, there was much more focus on new characters. While I would have loved for you to go into more details about the crew we know and love (Jim, Sulu, Bones, etc.), I understand the appeal to write a story around characters you created yourself. Personally, I would've loved to read about Jim and his wife starting a family and his adjustments to married life. That said, I did enjoy reading about the other two Vulcans as well. Later on in the story, I started to get confused with who were the parents to all of the girls being born and who was who. Also, I chuckled to myself while reading this tory because the romantic episodes between Spock and Nyota has decreased dramatically in this installment. As someone with children, I thought that was very realistic. I am looking forward to the next part!
The Ballad of Spock and Nyota continues.
This time around, there was much more focus on new characters. While I would have loved for you to go into more details about the crew we know and love (Jim, Sulu, Bones, etc.), I understand the appeal to write a story around characters you created yourself. Personally, I would've loved to read about Jim and his wife starting a family and his adjustments to married life. That said, I did enjoy reading about the other two Vulcans as well. Later on in the story, I started to get confused with who were the parents to all of the girls being born and who was who. Also, I chuckled to myself while reading this tory because the romantic episodes between Spock and Nyota has decreased dramatically in this installment. As someone with children, I thought that was very realistic. I am looking forward to the next part!
1/2/2012 c100 jazphace
Another fantastic series! Great job! Loved the story line. My favorite parts included the births of Grayson and Amanda, and Spock and Nyota loving each other.
Another fantastic series! Great job! Loved the story line. My favorite parts included the births of Grayson and Amanda, and Spock and Nyota loving each other.
11/28/2010 c100 
40Mark C
This was a fantastic and entertaining story. I loved the growth of Spock and Nyota's family with Grayson and Amanda. Those are two wonderful kids and you did an excellent job in writing them.
Some of the good parts to this story was the focus on the supporting characters, especially ones recognized from TOS. Those parts I really enjoyed.
As I read the final chapter and saw the increased size of the fleet, I knew right away that people from the Enterprise will be transferred to one of the new ships. Plus it appears that senior staff won't be exempt from this as Spock will be seeing Admiral Nogura. I do wonder if Kirk would get promoted to Admiral and Spock captaining the Enterprise. That would be something.
40Mark CThis was a fantastic and entertaining story. I loved the growth of Spock and Nyota's family with Grayson and Amanda. Those are two wonderful kids and you did an excellent job in writing them.
Some of the good parts to this story was the focus on the supporting characters, especially ones recognized from TOS. Those parts I really enjoyed.
As I read the final chapter and saw the increased size of the fleet, I knew right away that people from the Enterprise will be transferred to one of the new ships. Plus it appears that senior staff won't be exempt from this as Spock will be seeing Admiral Nogura. I do wonder if Kirk would get promoted to Admiral and Spock captaining the Enterprise. That would be something.
8/4/2010 c100 Babita
Saying goodbye is always so hard. I feel even more sorry for the children having to leave their friends.
Saying goodbye is always so hard. I feel even more sorry for the children having to leave their friends.
8/4/2010 c100 Nyotarules
Well you have caught up to BB3 and our favourite folks are still there, tho I suspect this is the last mission for them. Even if Spock does not want promotion others might want to move on. Serving under Kirk forever was a TOS canon to sooth Shatner's ego and does not reflect any military reality. (Does it?)
Well you have caught up to BB3 and our favourite folks are still there, tho I suspect this is the last mission for them. Even if Spock does not want promotion others might want to move on. Serving under Kirk forever was a TOS canon to sooth Shatner's ego and does not reflect any military reality. (Does it?)
8/4/2010 c100 junewilliams7
Ouch! Ouch! No way for them to even have goodbye parties if they don't know who's leaving. You've been very clever in your other story about not revealing these details, such as the ship being short-staffed. Thank you for this story, and I look forward to the new story tomorrow.
Ouch! Ouch! No way for them to even have goodbye parties if they don't know who's leaving. You've been very clever in your other story about not revealing these details, such as the ship being short-staffed. Thank you for this story, and I look forward to the new story tomorrow.
8/4/2010 c100 7VickyFromGreece
Many things will change, next time we'll see them, that's for sure. Thank you for a truly enjoyable, funny, adventurous, steamy hot, daily updated story. I also wouldn't like to loose the 3 Vulcan members of the ship. Spock can use some friends from his own species. Besides, with whom he will exercise? LOL! Looking forward for the sequel!
7VickyFromGreeceMany things will change, next time we'll see them, that's for sure. Thank you for a truly enjoyable, funny, adventurous, steamy hot, daily updated story. I also wouldn't like to loose the 3 Vulcan members of the ship. Spock can use some friends from his own species. Besides, with whom he will exercise? LOL! Looking forward for the sequel!
8/4/2010 c100 Gerriv
I have loved every chapter of this story! I am looking forward to the next one, I just hope we don't lose your original charachters Kurik and Tanik and their families. Having 3 Vulcans on the Enterprise has been so fun and interesting and sexy too. Can't wait until tomorrow!
I have loved every chapter of this story! I am looking forward to the next one, I just hope we don't lose your original charachters Kurik and Tanik and their families. Having 3 Vulcans on the Enterprise has been so fun and interesting and sexy too. Can't wait until tomorrow!
8/4/2010 c100 Born to Fire
I'm actual sad for them. I wonder what's going to happen and who we're going to lose on the Enterprise
I'm actual sad for them. I wonder what's going to happen and who we're going to lose on the Enterprise