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71Above the Winter Moonlight
Very very very good chapter. I can't wait for the next one. Will Vader catch on to Luke's plan? Will Luke and Vader ever find out they're father and son? How will the mission go? Update as soon as you possibly can.
71Above the Winter MoonlightVery very very good chapter. I can't wait for the next one. Will Vader catch on to Luke's plan? Will Luke and Vader ever find out they're father and son? How will the mission go? Update as soon as you possibly can.
1/13 c5 2FateOfChaos
Wow. No other words, just wow. It's like I'm reading about this whole other side-darker side-of Luke. It's awesome!
2FateOfChaosWow. No other words, just wow. It's like I'm reading about this whole other side-darker side-of Luke. It's awesome!
12/22/2012 c5 17Hiei's Cute Girl
Oh, WOW.
The meeting between Vader and Luke was just what I expected it to be: electrifying.
You did an amazing job! Hopefully, you'll keep it up and kick ass with more chapters, but truly, I enjoyed this chapter greatly. Having Wes in the picture gave it a lovely, mildly clueless outlook, which seemed to give ambiance to the whole ordeal.
Thank you so much for updating! Happy Holidays!
17Hiei's Cute GirlOh, WOW.
The meeting between Vader and Luke was just what I expected it to be: electrifying.
You did an amazing job! Hopefully, you'll keep it up and kick ass with more chapters, but truly, I enjoyed this chapter greatly. Having Wes in the picture gave it a lovely, mildly clueless outlook, which seemed to give ambiance to the whole ordeal.
Thank you so much for updating! Happy Holidays!
12/21/2012 c5 3Eversotd
Yay! So far this story is really awesome ;) Love what you're doing so far. Keep up the great work!
3EversotdYay! So far this story is really awesome ;) Love what you're doing so far. Keep up the great work!
12/19/2012 c5 volk.eu
I like the way you think!) Seriously, Luke capable of snapping back at Vader alongside Leia is my favorite moment in SW - especially in fics there are truce between them. From their confrontation I got the impression that Vader knows about Luke being Force-user, at least. Or he just doesn't like him. Wes's perspective is really good at conveying whole confrontation. Even cursing is appropriate - reminds me very much of Red vs. Blue style.
I like the way you think!) Seriously, Luke capable of snapping back at Vader alongside Leia is my favorite moment in SW - especially in fics there are truce between them. From their confrontation I got the impression that Vader knows about Luke being Force-user, at least. Or he just doesn't like him. Wes's perspective is really good at conveying whole confrontation. Even cursing is appropriate - reminds me very much of Red vs. Blue style.
12/16/2012 c5 TJG
I just thought of something, Luke would probably want a set of the plans for his own use as it presumably includes all the technology involved in the specs. He could use the technology for his own purposes assuming there are some advances in them somewhere.
I just thought of something, Luke would probably want a set of the plans for his own use as it presumably includes all the technology involved in the specs. He could use the technology for his own purposes assuming there are some advances in them somewhere.
10/14/2012 c4 3Eversotd
Hi; soooo, kinda noticed that you haven't updated for a while...but you're doing SUCH a great job and this story is fabulous...are you gonna be taking it up agian? Preferably soon? :) Here's hoping...
3EversotdHi; soooo, kinda noticed that you haven't updated for a while...but you're doing SUCH a great job and this story is fabulous...are you gonna be taking it up agian? Preferably soon? :) Here's hoping...
9/3/2012 c4 SmacksKiller
Ah wonderfully original take on Star Wars. I hope you pick up this story again and keep this going.
Ah wonderfully original take on Star Wars. I hope you pick up this story again and keep this going.
7/15/2012 c4 Guest
sometimes your writins sounds like you're trying to be poetic, but you replaced every word in your poem with one three syllables longer which you found in a thesarus. your story is good, but i keep geeting distracted by your unlikely word choices. also, it's pretty obvious that the words are ones you had to look up, because you don't always use them right. two people vye over a position, a position doesn't vye between two people. vying means competing, so a job wouldn't compete for somone to do it, right? i think it was chapter 2 where you had that one. try writing a little more as if you were talking. it'll make the work flow better than just throwing such uncommon words in all over the place.
sometimes your writins sounds like you're trying to be poetic, but you replaced every word in your poem with one three syllables longer which you found in a thesarus. your story is good, but i keep geeting distracted by your unlikely word choices. also, it's pretty obvious that the words are ones you had to look up, because you don't always use them right. two people vye over a position, a position doesn't vye between two people. vying means competing, so a job wouldn't compete for somone to do it, right? i think it was chapter 2 where you had that one. try writing a little more as if you were talking. it'll make the work flow better than just throwing such uncommon words in all over the place.
6/29/2012 c4 7May Arisa
Very good story! I hope you are gonna continue it, for I would like to read what happens next. Is Luke still blowing up the Death Star and will does he know Darth Vader is his father, and if he doesn't, is he going to find it out soon?
7May ArisaVery good story! I hope you are gonna continue it, for I would like to read what happens next. Is Luke still blowing up the Death Star and will does he know Darth Vader is his father, and if he doesn't, is he going to find it out soon?
4/21/2012 c4 werd me
awesome i cant wait for more. it almost seems as if luke knows whats going to happen!
awesome i cant wait for more. it almost seems as if luke knows whats going to happen!
8/1/2011 c4 8LeaMichelle
haha, the empire stays away from pregnant women, "you can go kill babies with your eyes now, or whatever you do in your free time," Cracked me up. I like it so far, always liked mysterious Lukes :)
LeaMichelle
8LeaMichellehaha, the empire stays away from pregnant women, "you can go kill babies with your eyes now, or whatever you do in your free time," Cracked me up. I like it so far, always liked mysterious Lukes :)
LeaMichelle