for Intertwined12/26/2010 c1 
3Blood-Hawk-531
Kay, I get really irritated when people make this mistake. Lightning's real name is CLAIRE, not ECLAIR! She is a person, not a f@&%ing pastry!
3Blood-Hawk-531Kay, I get really irritated when people make this mistake. Lightning's real name is CLAIRE, not ECLAIR! She is a person, not a f@&%ing pastry!
10/15/2010 c7 some random dude
Whoa! When was the last time you updated? Anyway, good to see you're back. Keep up the good work :)
Whoa! When was the last time you updated? Anyway, good to see you're back. Keep up the good work :)
5/4/2010 c4 NeoKyo2k3
I like the name you gave for their new business, it fits them well ^^.
Great story by the way, hope you update soon =D
I like the name you gave for their new business, it fits them well ^^.
Great story by the way, hope you update soon =D
5/2/2010 c3 7th fire
dammit write more!
dammit write more!
4/30/2010 c3 Kuchiki-chan613
Amazing i love it please write more and keep up the awesome job :3
Amazing i love it please write more and keep up the awesome job :3
4/28/2010 c3 fusion90XXXX
Things are getting interesting now. Those death glares Lightning gives are funny.
Things are getting interesting now. Those death glares Lightning gives are funny.
4/27/2010 c3 12Chaotic Symphony
great story so far, loving the simple interaction between Cloud and Lightning can't wait for more!
12Chaotic Symphonygreat story so far, loving the simple interaction between Cloud and Lightning can't wait for more!