for You're so Pretty5/14/2012 c1 
6JulCan1987
Sweet story, I like HakuHina, they would make a cute couple, and their combined kekkei genkais would be awesome. More HakuHina.
6JulCan1987Sweet story, I like HakuHina, they would make a cute couple, and their combined kekkei genkais would be awesome. More HakuHina.
10/24/2011 c1 Sugar Rush
That was really sweet! I loved it! And I especially loved the fact that Hinata kicked that bastard's ass! Hope you write more of this pairing!
That was really sweet! I loved it! And I especially loved the fact that Hinata kicked that bastard's ass! Hope you write more of this pairing!
6/5/2011 c1 yellow sun
You know this story is beautiful but why didn't haku and hinata like I don't know...have sex ^_^
You know this story is beautiful but why didn't haku and hinata like I don't know...have sex ^_^
4/20/2011 c1 clarissa the strawberry
OMG please make a chapter two for this story...its like sooooo different from other haku/hinata stories...you rock :)
OMG please make a chapter two for this story...its like sooooo different from other haku/hinata stories...you rock :)
4/20/2011 c1 clarissa the strawberry
OMG please make a chapter two for this story...its like sooooo different from other haku/hinata stories...you rock :)
OMG please make a chapter two for this story...its like sooooo different from other haku/hinata stories...you rock :)
3/10/2011 c1 maria
You should write another haku story involving him and hinata cuz you're freakin awesome
You should write another haku story involving him and hinata cuz you're freakin awesome
3/10/2011 c1 maria
You write another haku story involving him and hinata cuz you're freakin awesome
You write another haku story involving him and hinata cuz you're freakin awesome
1/7/2011 c1 6ConAddict13
I was pleasantly surprised. I read this story on a whim, and really liked it. good job!
6ConAddict13I was pleasantly surprised. I read this story on a whim, and really liked it. good job!
10/28/2010 c1 HakuHinaFan
I really enjoyed this ^^ Completely, *is currently searching for your other stories* Though I honestly wish it wasn't a oneshot. Hmmmm... constructive criticism? Only that you could have included the other character POV's (Zori, and Hinata) It would have added more to it ^^ Really enjoyable though! Especially loved Hinata's response in the end! ^^
I really enjoyed this ^^ Completely, *is currently searching for your other stories* Though I honestly wish it wasn't a oneshot. Hmmmm... constructive criticism? Only that you could have included the other character POV's (Zori, and Hinata) It would have added more to it ^^ Really enjoyable though! Especially loved Hinata's response in the end! ^^
5/16/2010 c1 rickcorpse
this was pretty good. a few typos and repeated words but other than that pretty good. normally i dont read anyhting with yaoi in it but this one seemed interesting. loved how haku beat the hell out of zori, even thoughhe had o weapon, and hinata finishing it off. cant wait for the next chapter
this was pretty good. a few typos and repeated words but other than that pretty good. normally i dont read anyhting with yaoi in it but this one seemed interesting. loved how haku beat the hell out of zori, even thoughhe had o weapon, and hinata finishing it off. cant wait for the next chapter
5/9/2010 c1 2Dangogirl96
weel, since no one has reveiwed, i'll be your first! that was really good, i hope to read more. btw could you possibly do a deihina if youve got time? as my name suggests i love the pairing. like hakuhina to though! keep writing pwease!*cue puppy eyes*
oh and also *shoots zori six times in the head*...that needed to be done. *evil smile*
2Dangogirl96weel, since no one has reveiwed, i'll be your first! that was really good, i hope to read more. btw could you possibly do a deihina if youve got time? as my name suggests i love the pairing. like hakuhina to though! keep writing pwease!*cue puppy eyes*
oh and also *shoots zori six times in the head*...that needed to be done. *evil smile*