6/20/2012 c9 Yume-chan
Great story, but you need to have the other host characters interact with regular characters. I really hope that you understood what I said... Cause I don't. :D

Let me give you an example:

Lelouch or Edward talk/interact(also know as flirting, not saying either of them do) with some of Akira's friends.

I hope that clears some confusion.

It would be really awesome if you add some twist in the plot of develop character backgrounds.

Cause I or the audience don't really know a lot about Akira or her friends or Lelouch's twin... Baisicly your O.C.s need some descriptions and back stories that might complicate their future.

I think I've given you enough topics to work on.

I'm not trying to be all bossy... I am merely giving you ideas to help your story.

It's your choice if you want to use them though.

Sorry if I keep bringing up Lelouch cause I'm a Lelouch fan so I'm a bit disappointed about that.

The story is great and well thought out.

Thanks for you time to read this terribly loooonnnggg review! :D

6/3/2011 c6 4Acire Shields
OMFRICKING! love it! Please write more and feel free to take a look at my stories! :)

3/4/2011 c4 29The Fool Arcana
Aw how adorable 3 Len chan!

3/4/2011 c2 The Fool Arcana
Poor Aki-chan , lol a girl being like tamaki scary

2/20/2011 c4 9Quince's Blue Moon-Chillflower
Love this story, personally, I'd like to see a lot of all the different hosts. But remember, always keep them in character. Keep on updating, I really look forward to the next chapter.

11/8/2010 c2 4bleachy789
I love the idea of all of them being in the host club. Can I create something similar with your permission? (it was your idea first. It's just natural to me to ask you. :3)

5/2/2010 c1 7DGMfreak5
Well...what a mix! This was really amusing especially because I recognized nearly all the characters. Ouran with a twist, eh? Fun stuff. Can't wait to see more!