for pokemon adventures in 4th wall breaking2/20 c1 
22ComedyMaster333
You spelled multiple words wrong, and you forgot a lot of punctuation.
Get it checked.
22ComedyMaster333You spelled multiple words wrong, and you forgot a lot of punctuation.
Get it checked.
5/3/2010 c2 6psychicshipping
Good, you're on your way to a great story. But what in the world is a spider nitro?
6psychicshippingGood, you're on your way to a great story. But what in the world is a spider nitro?
5/3/2010 c1 psychicshipping
It wasn't good, but it wasn't bad either. I want to know more about Zane, is he tall or short? Into sports or reading? How many other faimily does him have? How do they get the portal? Are they from 100 years in the futur where they have learned to used string therory to open gates in new worlds? These are just some of the questions you'll have to answere.
Best of luck, Psychicshipping
It wasn't good, but it wasn't bad either. I want to know more about Zane, is he tall or short? Into sports or reading? How many other faimily does him have? How do they get the portal? Are they from 100 years in the futur where they have learned to used string therory to open gates in new worlds? These are just some of the questions you'll have to answere.
Best of luck, Psychicshipping