for There's A Light That Never Goes Out9/22/2012 c5 Luisa
I hope soon to see the continuation of fanfiction, this very good n_n thanks
I hope soon to see the continuation of fanfiction, this very good n_n thanks
9/20/2012 c5 Luisa
I really like this fanfic , I segir anciosa by history, I congratulate you for your creation
I really like this fanfic , I segir anciosa by history, I congratulate you for your creation
9/4/2012 c3 unknown
ohhh man i have not read a good fanfiction since a ling time most of them dont have the feel to it :) thanks
ohhh man i have not read a good fanfiction since a ling time most of them dont have the feel to it :) thanks
9/4/2012 c2 unknown
Good job i love it so far :)
Good job i love it so far :)
8/27/2012 c1 unknown
Dang that was pretty good keep it up nad i saw you have not updated it sad :(
Dang that was pretty good keep it up nad i saw you have not updated it sad :(
11/4/2011 c5 Rozlynn
I don't want a cookie! I want another chapter. XD All silliness aside, this is a WONDERFUL story. Write moarrrr. I will be reviewing! (;
I don't want a cookie! I want another chapter. XD All silliness aside, this is a WONDERFUL story. Write moarrrr. I will be reviewing! (;
4/16/2011 c1 
2Child of the Flame Alchemist
FRESH CHOCLATE CHIP COOKIE
nice starter chapter im happy its not a one-shot
2Child of the Flame AlchemistFRESH CHOCLATE CHIP COOKIE
nice starter chapter im happy its not a one-shot
11/4/2010 c5 yp
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9/5/2010 c5 8blueiceland
Awww...this is so romantic! I love how you potray the now adult!Hope like gentleman.
I hope you can update soon! ^_^
8blueicelandAwww...this is so romantic! I love how you potray the now adult!Hope like gentleman.
I hope you can update soon! ^_^
8/9/2010 c5 Chelsirooni
I must say, you have are one of the most captivating and unique writers I have seen so far on fanfic.net. You have a very unique ability to capture the reader's attention from the beginning of the story and maintain that suspense/excitement until the end of this chapter. I look forward to the next chapter of this interesting story of LightningxHope, and I wish you the best of luck with your future goals in life. =]
I must say, you have are one of the most captivating and unique writers I have seen so far on fanfic.net. You have a very unique ability to capture the reader's attention from the beginning of the story and maintain that suspense/excitement until the end of this chapter. I look forward to the next chapter of this interesting story of LightningxHope, and I wish you the best of luck with your future goals in life. =]
8/3/2010 c5 Wee.doctor
Seems like the pieces are starting to fall togheter. /grin/
I like the quick peek inside Lights head, all her thoughts jumbled up about Hope. Quite funny actually.
I noticed some grammar mistakes, but i dont mind. It didn't spoil the story the slightest! I am curius as to what happens next though, its quite interesting. With that cliffi' of yours.. /smile/
Keep on it! And i want my cookie...
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Chris
Seems like the pieces are starting to fall togheter. /grin/
I like the quick peek inside Lights head, all her thoughts jumbled up about Hope. Quite funny actually.
I noticed some grammar mistakes, but i dont mind. It didn't spoil the story the slightest! I am curius as to what happens next though, its quite interesting. With that cliffi' of yours.. /smile/
Keep on it! And i want my cookie...
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Chris
8/2/2010 c5 5Dragon'sHost
He called her Claire! That just makes me so happy. Great chapter, very introspective on Lightning's part. Please update soon!
5Dragon'sHostHe called her Claire! That just makes me so happy. Great chapter, very introspective on Lightning's part. Please update soon!